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Describe one of the most popular TV shows in your country. v.1

Describe one of the most popular TV shows in your country. v. 1
Describe one of the most popular TV shows in your country. You should say: what it is what it is about what you like /dislike about it and explain why it is so popular in your country. Sample Answer 1: ‘Far from the line’ is a very popular TV show in our country among more than 20 million viewers who enjoy this show a lot. In a recent online poll, this TV programme was selected as the second most popular TV show of all time in our country. This is an investigative news story programme that deals with the crime and unlawful activities in our society as well as important events in history. Some of the episodes deal with the details and facts on notorious events of history. Other episodes introduce social unjust and crimes happening around us. It also alerts us about the types of crimes common in our country and notifies us about the corruptions. Sometimes, this programme interviews famous lawyers, politicians, law-enforcing members, witnesses and victims to give more details about a crime. Finally, some episodes present the backgrounds of a murder or a heinous crime that got media attention. Thus the topic of this programme has a great variety but the objective remains the same-  aware people. To unveil a crime and to aware people is the main reason this programme is aired and this is a successful TV programme so far. I like the way this programme is presented and the news presenters, anchors and investigators are quite brilliant and the composition of different events in this programme is actually remarkable. I like the idea of informing people about law, crime, criminals and the social unjust. In my opinion, this programme is quite helpful to inform citizens about the type of crimes they should be more cautious about.   It also explains the basic laws, civil rights and how to inform authority in case anyone has information about a probable crime or unjust. The way this programme is presented and the variations and exciting facts the programme-makers can bring in each new episode is really praiseworthy and the main reason for its popularity. People in my country love programmes that educate people and are entertaining at the same time. The programme ‘Far from the line’ is a perfect blend of important news, messages, excitement and entertainment and this, in my opinion, is the mantra of its popularity.
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Describe
one of the most
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popular
TV
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shows
in your
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country
. You should say: what it is what it is about what you like /dislike about it and
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explain
why it is
so
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popular
in your
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country
. Sample Answer 1:

‘Far from the line’ is a
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very
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popular
TV
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show
in our
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country
among more than 20 million viewers who enjoy this
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show
a lot. In a recent online poll, this TV
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programme
was selected
as the second most
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popular
TV
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show
of all time in our
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country
. This is an investigative
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news
story
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programme
that deals with the
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crime
and unlawful activities in our society as
well
as
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important
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events
in history.
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Some of the
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episodes
deal with the
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details
and facts on notorious
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events
of history. Other
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episodes
introduce social unjust and
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crimes
happening around us. It
also
alerts us about the types of
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crimes
common in our
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country
and notifies us about the corruptions.
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Sometimes
, this
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programme
interviews
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famous
lawyers, politicians, law-enforcing members, witnesses and victims to give more
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details
about a
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crime
.
Finally
,
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some
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episodes
present the backgrounds of a murder or a heinous
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crime
that
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got
media attention.
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Thus
the topic of this
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programme
has a great variety
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but
the objective remains the same-
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aware
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people
. To unveil a
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crime
and to aware
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people
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is
the main reason this
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programme
is aired
and this is a successful TV
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programme
so
far. I like the way this
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programme
is presented
and the
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news
presenters, anchors and investigators are quite brilliant and the composition of
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different
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events
in this
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programme
is
actually
remarkable. I like the
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idea
of informing
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people
about law,
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crime
, criminals and the social unjust. In my opinion, this
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programme
is quite helpful to inform citizens about the type of
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crimes
they should be more cautious about.
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It
also
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explains
the basic laws, civil rights and how to inform authority in case anyone has information about a probable
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crime
or unjust. The way this
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programme
is presented
and the variations and exciting facts the
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programme-makers
can bring in each
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new
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episode
is
really
praiseworthy and the main reason for its popularity.
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People
in my
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country
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love
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programmes
that educate
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people
and are entertaining at the same time. The
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programme
‘Far from the line’ is a perfect blend of
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important
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news
, messages, excitement and entertainment and this, in my opinion, is the mantra of its popularity.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe one of the most popular TV shows in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
402 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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