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Describe your favourite way to relax. v.1

Describe your favourite way to relax. v. 1
Describe your favourite way to relax. You should say: what it is when and how you relax. how effective it is for you And explain why you like this way of relaxation. Sample Answer 1: My favourite way to relax is bit strange and my parents often find it hard to believe that I love to relax in this way. Well, this is not the only way I relax but definitely, this is my favourite one. To me relaxing and serenity is related. So I close the doors and windows of my room and lit a low powered light bulb to cut the outside noise and bright light. I live in a busy urban area so it’s usually noisy around me. Then I turn on the CD player and play either Pink Floyd or Enigma in a low volume. Then I close my eyes and try to recall my happy memories of my childhood. This gives me immense pleasure as most of my childhood memories are spellbinding and magical. If I spend about half an hour this way I start feeling a sensation that is utmost pleasant. I remain half awake and half asleep and an hour is good enough for me to get fully recharged and refreshed. I usually do it at home, more specifically in my room. Whenever I feel stressed or depressed I try to relax in this way to eliminate my stress and depression. I would not say it works all the time but I find it very effective. I guess during this process I try to feel happy as I get lost in my childhood and that’s something I have psychologically accepted as a remedy to my depressions and mental stress. Since I have been doing it for a while and my body and mind have got adjusted with this process, it works like a panacea to me. My second best way of relaxation is reading books or visiting a naturally beautiful place. But the one I told you is most effective for me.
Describe
your
favourite
way to
relax
. You should say: what it is when and how you
relax
.
how
effective it is for you And
explain
why you like this way of relaxation. Sample Answer 1:

My
favourite
way to
relax
is
bit
strange and my parents
often
find it
hard
to believe that I
love
to
relax
in this way.
Well
, this is not the
only
way I
relax
but
definitely, this is my
favourite
one. To me relaxing and serenity
is related
.
So
I close the doors and windows of my room and lit a low powered light bulb to
cut
the outside noise and bright light. I
live
in a busy urban area
so
it’s
usually
noisy around me. Then I turn on the CD player and play either Pink Floyd or Enigma in a low volume. Then I close my eyes and try to recall my happy memories of my childhood. This gives me immense pleasure as most of my childhood memories are spellbinding and magical.
If
I spend about half an hour this way I
start
feeling a sensation
that is
utmost pleasant. I remain half awake and half asleep and an hour is
good
enough
for me to
get
fully
recharged and refreshed. I
usually
do it at home, more
specifically
in my room. Whenever I feel
stressed
or depressed I try to
relax
in this way to eliminate my
stress
and depression. I would not say it works all the time
but
I find it
very
effective.
I guess
during this process I try to feel happy as I
get
lost in my childhood and that’s something I have
psychologically
accepted
as a remedy to my depressions and mental
stress
. Since I have been doing it for a while and my body and mind have
got
adjusted with this process, it works like a panacea to me. My
second best
way of relaxation is reading books or visiting a
naturally
beautiful
place.
But
the one I
told
you is most effective for me.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite way to relax. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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