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Describe an important technological advancement in your country. v.1

Describe an important technological advancement in your country. v. 1
Describe an important technological advancement in your country. You should say: what it is how it happened how long it took and explain what effect it has had on people in your country. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: The wide-spread use of the internet and availability of cheap and advanced mobile devices have made eCommerce very popular in our country. eCommerce, in my opinion, is so far the most important technological advancement in our country which has redefined the selling and purchasing of goods and services. With the popularity of the Internet and computer technology, the opportunity for the booming of eCommerce business occurred around 10-12 years ago in our country. In fact, it happened as soon as the concept of eCommerce business was accepted globally. A huge number of Internet users, a great potential for business owners, availability and facility of online payment, quick and safe shipment facilities, development of Information Technology sector in our country and above all people’s spontaneous participation have contributed towards the advancement of eCommerce technology. Facebook is quite popular in our country and the concept of Facebook commerce or F-commerce has also become popular as thousands of store owners have started selling products through Facebook stores or Facebook pages. F-commerce is another form of eCommerce or electronic commerce which is also gaining its popularity. Technological advancement is ever changing and it does not have a finish line. Thus we cannot say for sure that eCommerce technology is fully developed and requires no further advancement. However, the advancement that has already happened in this field took more than 10 years in our country. I can still recall the days when eCommerce was in its early stage and only a very small number of people actually knew about it. However, the total number of online merchants, customers, and online transactions per day is quite huge now. Advancement of eCommerce technology has had an ample effect on the mass people, online store owners and on the overall trade and business in our country. There are scarcely any businesses here that do not have some shorts of online presence. The eCommerce is no longer an option, it has become a must. The way people purchase their daily necessities and the way merchants reach to the customers have changed dramatically. Without an online presence, businesses cannot stay in competition these days. Many small business owners have tapped into the eCommerce world and gained brand popularity and have enhanced their business opportunities to a large extent. Stores are no longer restricted to a physical location with fixed business hours. Online stores are now open 24/7 and reach people anywhere in the country or beyond the borders. The number of online shops is rapidly increasing and those stores have gained their popularity among the citizens of our country. In many cases, those stores do not have a particular physical shop and this has all been possible only because of the advancement of eCommerce technology. People no longer need to visit a shop to purchase a product. They can virtually order any product from anywhere and get it delivered in few hours. The purchase, payment and delivery are all connected via secured connections and it is a revolutionary way of selling and purchasing products and services.
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Describe
an
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important
technological
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advancement
in your
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country
. You should say: what it is how it happened how long it took and
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explain
what effect it has had on
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people
in your
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country
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer 1:

The wide-spread
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use
of the internet and availability of
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cheap
and advanced mobile devices have made
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eCommerce
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very
popular in our
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country
.
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eCommerce
, in my opinion, is
so
far the most
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important
technological
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advancement
in our
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country
which has redefined the selling and purchasing of
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goods
and services. With the
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popularity
of the Internet and computer
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technology
, the opportunity for the booming of
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eCommerce
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business
occurred around 10-12 years ago in our
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country
. In fact, it happened as
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soon
as the concept of
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eCommerce
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business
was
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accepted
globally. A huge
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number
of Internet users, a great potential for
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business
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owners
, availability and facility of
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online
payment, quick and safe shipment facilities, development of Information
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Technology
sector in our
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country
and
above all
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people’s
spontaneous participation have contributed towards the
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advancement
of
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eCommerce
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technology
. Facebook is quite popular in our
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country
and the concept of Facebook commerce or F-commerce has
also
become popular as thousands of
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store
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owners
have
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started
selling
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products
through Facebook
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stores
or Facebook pages. F-commerce is another form of
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eCommerce
or electronic commerce which is
also
gaining its
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popularity
. Technological
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advancement
is
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ever changing
and it does not have a finish line.
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Thus
we cannot say for sure that
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eCommerce
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technology
is
fully
developed and requires no
further
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advancement
.
However
, the
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advancement
that has already happened in this field took more than 10 years in our
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country
. I can
still
recall the days when
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eCommerce
was in its early stage and
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only
a
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very
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small
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number
of
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people
actually
knew about it.
However
, the total
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number
of
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online
merchants, customers, and
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online
transactions per day is quite huge
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now
.
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Advancement
of
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eCommerce
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technology
has had an ample effect on the mass
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people
,
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online
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store
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owners
and on the
overall
trade and
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business
in our
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country
. There are
scarcely
any
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businesses
here that do not have
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some
shorts of
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online
presence. The
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eCommerce
is no longer an option, it has become a
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must
. The way
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people
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purchase
their daily necessities and the way merchants reach to the customers have
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changed
dramatically
. Without an
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online
presence,
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businesses
cannot stay in competition these days.
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Many
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small
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business
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owners
have tapped into the
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eCommerce
world and gained brand
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popularity
and have enhanced their
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business
opportunities to a large extent.
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Stores
are no longer restricted to a physical location with
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fixed
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business
hours.
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Online
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stores
are
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now
open 24/7 and reach
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people
anywhere in the
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country
or beyond the borders. The
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number
of
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online
shops is
rapidly
increasing and those
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stores
have gained their
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popularity
among the citizens of our
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country
. In
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many
cases, those
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stores
do not have a particular physical shop and this has all been possible
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only
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because
of the
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advancement
of
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eCommerce
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technology
.
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People
no longer need to visit a shop to
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purchase
a
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product
. They can
virtually
order any
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product
from anywhere and
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get
it delivered in few hours. The
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purchase
, payment and delivery are all connected via secured connections and it is a revolutionary way of selling and purchasing
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products
and services.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
84Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an important technological advancement in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
579 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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