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Describe a city or a town where you live or lived. v.1

Describe a city or a town where you live or lived. v. 1
Describe a city or a town where you live or lived. You should say: where it is located what part of it you are most familiar with what are the important landmarks and places there and explain what makes that city or town special to you. Sample Answer 1: I am originally from Nepal and I have spent most of my life at Kathmandu, which is my place of birth. However, during my graduation period, I had to live in Dhaka, which is the capital city of Bangladesh and is a wonderful city. I stayed in this city for about 5 years and this is the city I would talk about for my cue card topic. According to the official map, Dhaka is located in the middle of Bangladesh. Dhaka is a small city but it is quite crowded and busy. Set beside the Buriganga River Dhaka city has an area of 315 square miles. In the 17th century, Dhaka was the Mughal capital of Bengal and it still has many old architectural works and buildings of this era. I stayed at the Dhaka University campus which is near the Shahbagh area and this is the area I was most familiar with. To be honest this is a spectacular and lively city and the rich tradition and Bengali culture make it a unique city. There are a lot of famous and important landmarks in this city including Lalbagh Fort, Liberation War Museum, Ahsan Manzil, Sonargaon, National Museum, National Parliament House, War memorial monument, Sixty Dome Mosque and so on. Interestingly I have visited all of these significant landmarks in Dhaka except Sixty Dome Mosque. I personally enjoyed visiting the Ahsan Manzil, Sonargaon and War memorial monument. The old Dhaka is a unique place with old and traditional buildings and distinctive lifestyle of people. The university campus was another fascinating place for me. I often went to the new market for shopping and Nilkhet was a very popular place for book lovers. I believe that the university years are quite memorable and pleasant years for everyone. In fact, I had some of the best years of my life while I was in my university. I spent those golden years in this very city and made many good friends during this time. The friendly people, colourful festivals, pleasant memories, comfortable weather and my exposure to a different culture are the reasons I will never forget this city. This will always be a city I would love to visit and my pleasant time in this city makes it very special to me.   Sample Answer 2: When I was an undergrad student in India, I used to live in New Delhi. This is one of the most adorable cities I have ever visited. This is also the capital city of India and enriched with numerous historical evidence and events. I am lucky to have this topic for my discussion. New Delhi is one of the largest cities in India. Its foundation was laid in 1911. The city design was done by two British architects. As a capital, the city was opened in 1931 and since then it has been playing roles in the advancement of the country. Presently, this is one of the attractive and massive metropolitan areas as well. This city also contains a good number of architectural edifices of different ages, street shops, foods, markets, and overall human resources. New Delhi is a vast city and growing rapidly. The scenarios of the city have been changed after the independence of the country while they were different before the independence. The city has different parts and almost all of them are commercially developed. I am familiar with the most notable parts of the city. In fact, I am a non-native here. My family lives in Philippine and I came in India for my graduation with a scholarship at the Indian Institute of Technology Delhi which is located in Hauz Khas in New Delhi. As a student, I had to remain occupied with my academic studies and could not manage time for wandering here and there randomly. But I have visited the most attractive spots in the city. The city comes up with many attractions for its visitors. First of all, there are some museums and historic sites still available and they are taken care of in an exact manner. The National Museum, one of the largest museums of India is located in the city. Further, the India Gate is another landmark for the city. The Gate was built in 1931. The gate has been made with the commemoration of 90, 000 Indian soldiers who sacrificed lives in the First World War for the British Raj. Besides, the Rajpath is another landmark for the city and it holds the Republic Day parade each year. The resting place of the ashes of Mahatma Gandhi is also located here in Rajghat. The location is beside the River Yamuna. Another astronomical observatory named Jantar Mantar is also located in the city. Some other museums like National Gallery of Modern Art, National Rail Museum etc. are also placed in this city. I like the city for several reasons. This is really a great city to stay and enjoy. New Delhi is decorated with gardens while the gardens look beautiful when the flowers bloom. I have paid visits to almost all of the parks and have spent quality times with my buddies. The city is also special to me for its variety of foods and drinks. I was in love with the traditional Indian foods. The inhabitants were also cordial too. They loved me like their own brother. Moreover, in my educational institute, all the teachers and staffs cared for me and tried to comfort me in every possible way. I have lived here for five consecutive years and will come back if possible to pay another visit. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:  Describe a city or a town where you live or lived. 1. Living in Stuttgart was fun. I passed three years there. The city is located in Germany and I am familiar with most of the places of this city. The city has some important landmarks including Apollo Theatre, Fernsehturm Stuttgart a 216. 61-meters telecommunications tower, Tagblatt-Turm a 61-m 16-story skyscraper, The Romeo and Juliet Apartments and so on. This is a special city to me because it has a special charm, particularly, I love the nightlife. Exploring the city at night is really special. 2. At present, I am a permanent resident in Tianjin, China. I came here for study around a decade ago and fell in love with the city. I am familiar with the western part of the city where I live with my family. The city has some important landmarks and they include - Eye of Tianjin-a 120 meters tall Ferris wheel built on a bridge, Tianhou Palace that was built during the Yuan Dynasty period, Quanyechang Bazaar where live models are available with clothes on them, Marco Polo Square among others. The city is special to me for its diversified culture.   3. I could not believe that Samara in Russia had such an enriched history. I lived there for four years for my higher studies. As I had to remain busy with my studies, I am only familiar with the top attractions of the city. It owns the Ascension Cathedral in the centre of the city, Iver Monastery on the Volga steep, the monument to IL-2, Cosmic Samara Museum, and Stalin’s Bunker. They are great places indeed to explore. I was in love with these famous places which appeared very special to me for their wonderful histories.   4. I am very proud of being an Indian. I live in New Delhi and know almost all the parts of this city. There are a good number places in the city and each of them has a special attraction. The India Gate is in the heart of the city and the Qutub Minar, the Red Fort, Chandni Chowk, Rang Mahal, Raajpath etc. are the key landmarks here. To me, the city is special because of its diversity. A wide number of people of different casts creed and colour live here in harmony. Besides, the visiting places are highly attractive and their histories amaze me.   5. Living in Tokyo has some great advantages and I am happy to be a Japanese national indeed. This is the capital and the busiest city in Japan and I am familiar with the entire city. A good number of landmarks are available here and the most popular landmarks are – The Imperial Palace, Ginza District- the best place for shopping, Asakusa, and the Sensō-ji Temple, National Museum of Nature and Science, Ueno Park and the Zoo. I love the city because the natural view of the city is wonderful. In fact, I am in love with nature and walking down the streets in the early morning is one of my daily activities.
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a city or a town where you
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live
or
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. You should say: where it is
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located
what
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part
of it you are most
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familiar
with what are the
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important
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landmarks
and
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places
there and
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explain
what
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makes
that city or town
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special
to you. Sample Answer 1:

I am
originally
from Nepal and I have spent most of my life at Kathmandu, which is my
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place
of birth.
However
, during my graduation period, I had to
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live
in Dhaka, which is the
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capital
city of Bangladesh and is a wonderful city. I stayed in this city for about 5 years and this is the city I would talk about for my cue card
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topic
. According to the official map, Dhaka is
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located
in the middle of Bangladesh. Dhaka is a
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small
city
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but
it is quite crowded and busy. Set beside the
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Buriganga
River Dhaka city has an
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area
of 315 square miles. In the 17th century, Dhaka was the Mughal
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capital
of Bengal and it
still
has
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many
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old
architectural works and buildings of this era. I stayed at the Dhaka
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University
campus which is near the
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Shahbagh
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area
and this is the
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area
I was most
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familiar
with. To be honest this is a spectacular and lively city and the rich tradition and Bengali culture
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make
it a unique city. There are
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a lot of
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famous
and
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important
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landmarks
in this city including
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Lalbagh
Fort, Liberation
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War
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Museum
,
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Ahsan
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Manzil
,
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Sonargaon
,
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National
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Museum
,
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National
Parliament
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House
,
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War
memorial monument, Sixty Dome
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Mosque
and
so
on.
Interestingly
I have visited all of these significant
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landmarks
in Dhaka except Sixty Dome
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Mosque
. I
personally
enjoyed visiting the
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Ahsan
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Manzil
,
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Sonargaon
and
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War
memorial monument. The
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old
Dhaka is a unique
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place
with
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old
and traditional buildings and distinctive lifestyle of
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people
. The
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university
campus was another fascinating
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place
for me. I
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often
went to the
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new
market for shopping and
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Nilkhet
was a
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very
popular
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place
for book lovers. I believe that the
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university
years are quite memorable and pleasant years for everyone. In fact, I had
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some
of the best years of my life while I was in my
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university
. I spent those golden years in this
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very
city and made
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many
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good
friends during this
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time
. The friendly
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people
,
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colourful
festivals, pleasant memories, comfortable weather and my exposure to a
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different
culture are the reasons I will never forget this city. This will always be a city I would
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love
to visit and my pleasant
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time
in this city
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makes
it
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very
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special
to me.
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Sample Answer 2:

When I was an undergrad student in India, I
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used
to
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live
in
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New
Delhi. This is one of the most adorable
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cities
I have ever visited. This is
also
the
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capital
city of India and enriched with numerous historical evidence and
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events
. I am lucky to have this
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topic
for my discussion.

New Delhi is one of the largest
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cities
in India. Its foundation
was laid
in 1911. The city design
was done
by two British architects. As a
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capital
, the city
was opened
in 1931 and since then it has been playing roles in the advancement of the country.
Presently
, this is one of the attractive and massive metropolitan
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areas
as
well
. This city
also
contains a
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good
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number
of architectural edifices of
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different
ages, street shops, foods, markets, and
overall
human resources.

New Delhi is a vast city and growing
rapidly
. The scenarios of the city have been
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changed
after the independence of the country while they were
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different
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before
the independence. The city has
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different
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parts
and almost all of them are
commercially
developed. I am
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familiar
with the most notable
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parts
of the city. In fact, I am a non-native here. My family
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lives
in Philippine and I came in India for my graduation with a scholarship at the Indian Institute of Technology Delhi which is
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located
in
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Hauz
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Khas
in
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New
Delhi. As a student, I had to remain occupied with my academic
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studies
and could not manage
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time
for wandering here and there
randomly
.
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But
I have visited the most attractive spots in the city.

The city
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comes
up with
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many
attractions for its visitors.
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First of all
, there are
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some
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museums
and historic sites
still
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available and
they
are taken
care of
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in an exact manner
. The
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National
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Museum
, one of the largest
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museums
of India is
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located
in the city.
Further
, the India
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Gate
is another
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landmark
for the city. The
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Gate
was built
in 1931. The
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gate
has
been made
with the commemoration of 90, 000 Indian soldiers who sacrificed
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lives
in the
First
World
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War
for the British Raj.
Besides
, the
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Rajpath
is another
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landmark
for the city and it holds the Republic Day parade each
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year
. The resting
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place
of the ashes of Mahatma Gandhi is
also
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located
here in
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Rajghat
. The location is beside the River
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Yamuna
. Another astronomical observatory named
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Jantar
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Mantar
is
also
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located
in the city.
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Some
other
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museums
like
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National
Gallery of Modern Art,
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National
Rail
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Museum
etc. are
also
placed in this city.

I like the city for several reasons. This is
really
a great city to stay and enjoy.
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New
Delhi
is decorated
with gardens while the gardens look
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beautiful
when the flowers bloom. I have paid visits to almost
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all of the
parks and have spent quality
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times
with my buddies. The city is
also
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special
to me for its variety of foods and drinks. I was in
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love
with the traditional Indian foods. The inhabitants were
also
cordial too. They
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loved
me like their
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own
brother.
Moreover
, in my educational institute, all the teachers and staffs cared for me and tried to comfort me in every possible way. I have
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lived
here for five consecutive years and will
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come
back if possible to pay another visit. More
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to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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:
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Describe
a city or a town where you
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live
or
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lived
. 1. Living in Stuttgart was fun. I passed three years there. The city is
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located
in
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Germany and
I am
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familiar
with most of the
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places
of this city. The city has
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some
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important
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landmarks
including Apollo
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Theatre
,
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Fernsehturm
Stuttgart a 216.
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61-meters
telecommunications tower,
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Tagblatt-Turm
a 61-m 16-story skyscraper, The Romeo and Juliet Apartments and
so
on. This is a
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special
city to me
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because
it has a
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special
charm,
particularly
, I
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love
the nightlife. Exploring the city at night is
really
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special
. 2. At present, I am a permanent resident in Tianjin, China. I came here for
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study
around a decade ago and fell in
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love
with the city. I am
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familiar
with the western
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part
of the city where I
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live
with my family. The city has
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some
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important
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landmarks and
they include
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-
Eye of Tianjin-a 120 meters tall Ferris wheel built on a bridge,
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Tianhou
Palace that
was built
during the Yuan Dynasty period,
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Quanyechang
Bazaar where
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live
models are available with clothes on them, Marco Polo Square among others. The city is
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special
to me for its diversified culture.
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3. I could not believe that Samara in Russia had such an enriched history. I
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lived
there for four years for my higher
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studies
. As I had to remain busy with my
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studies
, I am
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only
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familiar
with the top attractions of the city. It
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owns
the Ascension Cathedral in the
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centre
of the city,
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Iver
Monastery on the Volga steep, the monument to IL-2, Cosmic Samara
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Museum
, and Stalin’s Bunker. They are great
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places
indeed
to explore. I was in
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love
with these
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famous
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places
which appeared
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very
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special
to me for their wonderful histories.
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4. I am
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very
proud of being an Indian.
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I
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live
in
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New
Delhi and know almost all the
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parts
of this city. There are a
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good
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number
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places
in the city and each of them has a
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special
attraction. The India
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Gate
is in the heart of the city and the
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Qutub
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Minar
, the Red Fort,
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Chandni
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Chowk
, Rang
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Mahal
,
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Raajpath
etc. are the key
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landmarks
here. To me, the city is
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special
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because
of its diversity. A wide
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number
of
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people
of
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different
casts creed and
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colour
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live
here in harmony.
Besides
, the visiting
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places
are
highly
attractive and their histories amaze me.
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5. Living in Tokyo has
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great
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advantages and
I am happy to be a Japanese
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national
indeed
. This is the
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capital
and the busiest city in
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Japan and
I am
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familiar
with the entire city. A
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good
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number
of
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landmarks
are available here and the most popular
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landmarks
are
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–
The Imperial Palace,
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Ginza
District- the best
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place
for shopping,
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Asakusa
, and the
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Sensō-ji
 Temple,
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National
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Museum
of Nature and Science,
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Ueno
Park and the Zoo. I
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love
the city
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the natural view of the city is wonderful. In fact, I am in
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love
with nature and walking down the streets in the early morning is one of my daily activities.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
146Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
55Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a city or a town where you live or lived. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
7 paragraphs
1505 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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