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tell and describe your dream home

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Everyone dreams of their ideal home. And of course everyone imagines it differently. I dream of a house somewhere on the edge of the city. It's as if you are isolated from the noisy city, but not so much. It should be small, with three rooms. But it must have like a attic, so you can make a kind of personal library there. The house should have a veranda. It would be very comfortable for drinking tea or reading a book on it. This is especially useful when it's raining. When you enter the house, you see a small corridor with a handy shoe rack and a coat rack. Then there is a long and wide corridor. On the right-hand side are the kitchen, bathroom and toilet. The bathroom should be spacious, with a large bathtub, and ideally with a jacuzzi to relax in after a stressful day. The kitchen is also spacious, with a large window and all the kitchen utensils. And on the left side there are two bedrooms. One is a small and cozy room. The other is a large and bright bedroom. If you walk to the end of the corridor, there's a door that leads to the living room. There should be a large sofa with soft cushions, a coffee table and two armchairs. I would like to say a few words about the interior of my dream home. From my point of view it should be made in an American style and equipped with modern gadgets and equipment. There must be lots of plants and pictures of animals in the house, because animals are cute. That's the kind of modest dream house I have, and I hope that sooner or later I can make it a reality.
Everyone
dreams
of their ideal home. And
of course
everyone imagines it
differently
. I
dream
of a
house
somewhere on the edge of the city. It's as if you
are isolated
from the noisy city,
but
not
so
much.

It should be
small
, with three rooms.
But
it
must
have like
a
attic,
so
you can
make
a kind of personal library there.

The
house
should have a veranda. It would be
very
comfortable for drinking tea or reading a book on it. This is
especially
useful when it's raining.

When you enter the
house
, you
see
a
small
corridor with a handy shoe rack and a coat rack. Then there is a long and wide corridor. On the
right
-hand side are the kitchen, bathroom and toilet. The bathroom should be spacious, with a
large
bathtub, and
ideally
with a jacuzzi to relax in after a stressful day. The kitchen is
also
spacious, with a
large
window and all the kitchen utensils. And on the
left
side there are two bedrooms. One is a
small
and cozy room. The other is a
large
and bright bedroom. If you walk to the
end
of the corridor, there's a door that leads to the living room. There should be a
large
sofa with soft cushions, a coffee table and two armchairs.

I would like to say a few words about the interior of my
dream
home. From my point of view it should
be made
in an American style and equipped with modern gadgets and equipment. There
must
be lots of plants and pictures of animals in the
house
,
because
animals are cute.

That's the kind of modest
dream
house
I have, and I hope that sooner or later I can
make
it a reality.
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IELTS speaking tell and describe your dream home

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6 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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