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Describe a situation when others didn’t tell you the whole truth. v.1

Describe a situation when others didn’t tell you the whole truth. v. 1
Describe a situation when others didn’t tell you the whole truth. You should say: what the situation was who was involved why they didn’t tell you the whole truth and explain how you felt when you found out that you were not told the whole truth.   Model Answer 1: When somebody tells us a lie, we can detect it a certain stage and correct our mistakes. But, when somebody doesn’t tell us the whole truth, it can be even more damaging than a complete lie. But, this is life, and we do face a situation sometimes when we are not told the whole truth just like a time when I wasn’t told the complete truth either. It happened about a few years ago when I needed to fix my car. In fact, our car was giving trouble on and off for the previous few months. But, the problem was that we couldn’t find any other reliable car mechanic in my town after a few mechanics, I knew, either left the town or retired. So, when I learnt about the new mechanic and his “credentials”, I felt that we could finally get our car fixed again. Later on, I even provided the details also about my car problem to him, and he assured me that he would fix the problem within a few hours. So, the next morning, I left my car in his shop. But, when I came back to pick up my car later in that afternoon, he told me that it would take him the whole afternoon to fix the car as he detected a few other problems, even though I was pretty sure that my car didn’t have any other problems. Later on, I came to know that he didn’t tell me the whole truth because he didn’t find any problem with my car at all, after all, but he certainly wanted me to pay for his “lost time” which he “wasted” in figuring out the problem. Anyway, when I found out that I wasn’t told the whole truth by the mechanic, I felt a bit sad and mad. But, more importantly, I actually lost my faith in him which could be really damaging for a person’s reputation. However, this incident also encouraged me to learn to fix my own car, and other things, myself in order to avoid this kind of “unpleasant” situation.
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Describe
a
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situation
when others didn’t
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tell
you the
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whole
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truth
. You should say: what the
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situation
was who
was involved
why they didn’t
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tell
you the
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whole
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truth
and
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explain
how you felt when you found out that you were not
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told
the
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whole
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truth
.
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Model Answer 1:

When somebody
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tells
us a lie, we can detect it a certain stage and correct our mistakes.
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But
, when somebody doesn’t
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tell
us the
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whole
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truth
, it can be even more damaging than a complete lie.
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But
, this is life, and we do face a
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situation
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sometimes
when we are not
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told
the
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whole
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truth
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just
like a time when I wasn’t
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told
the complete
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truth
either.

It happened about a few years ago when I needed to
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fix
my
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car
. In fact, our
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car
was giving trouble on and off for the previous few months.
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But
, the
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problem
was that we couldn’t find any
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other
reliable
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car
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mechanic
in my town after a few mechanics, I knew, either
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left
the town or retired.
So
, when I
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learnt
about the new
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mechanic
and his “credentials”, I felt that we could
finally
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get
our
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car
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fixed
again.

Later on, I even provided the
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details
also
about my
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car
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problem
to him, and he assured me that he would
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fix
the
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problem
within a few hours.
So
, the
next
morning, I
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left
my
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car
in his shop.
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But
, when I came back to pick up my
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car
later in that afternoon, he
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told
me that it would take him the
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whole
afternoon to
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fix
the
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car
as he detected a few
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other
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problems
,
even though
I was pretty sure that my
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car
didn’t have any
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other
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problems
. Later on, I came to know that he didn’t
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tell
me the
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whole
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truth
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because
he didn’t find any
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problem
with my
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car
at all,
after all
,
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but
he
certainly
wanted me to pay for his “lost time” which he “wasted” in figuring out the problem.

Anyway
, when I found out that I wasn’t
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told
the
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whole
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truth
by the
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mechanic
, I felt a bit sad and mad.
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But
, more
importantly
, I
actually
lost my faith in him which could be
really
damaging for a person’s reputation.
However
, this incident
also
encouraged me to learn to
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fix
my
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own
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car
, and
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other
things, myself in order to avoid this kind of “unpleasant”
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situation
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a situation when others didn’t tell you the whole truth. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
398 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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