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Describe a way to relax that you find effective. v.1

Describe a way to relax that you find effective. v. 1
Describe a way to relax that you find effective. You should say: what you do where & when you usually do this who you usually do it with and explain why this is relaxing for you. Model Answer: Listening to my favourite music is very relaxing to me and I feel refreshed and energetic with this activity. This is one of the most effective ways to relax both mentally and physically and for me, it has been proven to be a very effective way of relaxation. If I am at home, I listen to music either on my computer or in my music player. I listen to music when I work or even when I take a nap. Sitting on the balcony and listening to soft music is an out-of-the-world experience that I often enjoy. When I am at work, I use my iPod to listen to my favourite songs. Even in the public transportation, listening to music is relaxing. I listen to music mostly alone but sometimes I listen to it with friends who have similar taste in music. For that, I use the speaker instead of the headphone. Sometimes my niece comes to my room to listen to her favourite music and I play her favourite music on my laptop. So in a sense, I often do that with her as well. But most of the time I enjoy music alone. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something you like to do. Describe a hobby you have. Describe how you spend your leisure time. Describe a leisure activity you have. Describe something you love to do. Describe an activity you admire in your friends.
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Describe
a way to relax that you find effective. You should say: what you do where
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explain
why this is relaxing for you. Model Answer:

Listening to my
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favourite
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music
is
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very
relaxing to me and I feel refreshed and energetic with this activity. This is one of the most effective ways to relax both mentally and
physically
and for me, it has
been proven
to be a
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very
effective way of relaxation. If I am at home, I
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listen
to
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music
either on my computer or in my
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music
player. I
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listen
to
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music
when I work or even when I take a nap. Sitting on the balcony and listening to soft
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music
is an out-of-the-world experience that I
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often
enjoy. When I am at work, I
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use
my iPod to
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listen
to my
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favourite
songs. Even in the public transportation, listening to
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music
is relaxing. I
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listen
to
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music
mostly
alone
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but
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sometimes
I
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listen
to it with friends who have similar taste in
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music
. For that, I
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use
the speaker
instead
of the headphone.
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Sometimes
my niece
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comes
to my room to
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listen
to her
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favourite
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music
and I play her
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favourite
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music
on my laptop.
So
in a sense, I
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often
do that with her as
well
.
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most of the time I enjoy
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music
alone. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
something you like to do.
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Describe
a hobby you have.
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Describe
how you spend your leisure time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a leisure activity you have.
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Describe
something you
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love
to do.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an activity you admire in your friends.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a way to relax that you find effective. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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