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Describe a TV presenter you like. v.1

Describe a TV presenter you like. v. 1
Describe a TV presenter you like. You should say: who is he/ she what programme he/ she presents how he/ she presents this programme and explain why you like this TV presenter. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: A television presenter is a person who hosts a programme. A presenter often makes the programme worth watching. Worldwide known TV hosts like Ellen DeGeneres, Donald Trump, Fiona Bruce, Jerry Springer, Andrea McLean, Alex Jones, Oprah Winfrey, Chris Tarrant and many others have become very famous for their extraordinary performance and talent. They are known for their distinctive style and outstanding performance. For this cue card topic, I would like to talk about Fiona Bruce, who is a famous TV presenter, producer and news presenter. Her full name is Fiona Elizabeth Bruce and she is a famous British TV presenter and journalist. I like her very much due to her authoritative presence, commitment to her work, distinctive presentation style and creative journalism. Initially, she joined the BBC in 1989 and later on, she has gone to present many famous programmes like Antique Roadshow, BBC News at Ten, BBC News at Six, Fake or Fortune and Real Story. Antique Roadshow is a BBC programme, more specifically a television show in which antique appraisers travel to different places in the UK to appraise antiques bought by local people. Fiona Bruce in the presenter of this programme and her noteworthy presentation has made this a popular TV show in Britain. BBC News at Ten is deputised by Fiona and this is the final comprehensive news programme of the day on BBC One. Similarly, BBC News at Six is an evening news programme and Fiona Bruce is one of the news presenters of this programme. Be it a news show or any other type of TV programme, Fiona Bruce maintains a professional and creative appearance. This makes her a distinctive and notable presenter. This is the main reason I like her very much. In my opinion, she is one of the best TV presenters of our time.
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Describe
a TV
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presenter
you like. You should say: who is he/ she
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what
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programme
he/ she presents how he/ she presents this
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programme
and
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explain
why you like this TV
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presenter
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer 1:

A television
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presenter
is a person who hosts a
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programme
. A
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presenter
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often
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makes
the
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programme
worth watching. Worldwide known TV hosts like Ellen DeGeneres, Donald Trump, Fiona Bruce, Jerry Springer, Andrea McLean, Alex Jones, Oprah Winfrey, Chris Tarrant and
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many
others have become
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very
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famous
for their extraordinary performance and talent. They
are known
for their distinctive style and outstanding performance. For this cue card topic, I would like to talk about Fiona Bruce, who is a
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famous
TV
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presenter
, producer and
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news
presenter.

Her full name is Fiona Elizabeth
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Bruce and
she is a
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famous
British TV
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presenter
and journalist. I like her
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very
much due to her authoritative presence, commitment to her work, distinctive presentation style and creative journalism.
Initially
, she
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joined
the BBC in 1989 and later on, she has gone to present
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many
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famous
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programmes
like Antique Roadshow, BBC
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News
at Ten, BBC
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News
at Six, Fake or Fortune and Real Story.

Antique Roadshow is a BBC
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programme
, more
specifically
a television
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show
in which antique appraisers travel to
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different
places in the UK to appraise antiques
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bought
by local
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people
. Fiona Bruce in the
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presenter
of this
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programme
and her noteworthy presentation has made this a popular TV
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show
in Britain. BBC
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News
at Ten is
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deputised
by Fiona and this is the final comprehensive
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news
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programme
of the day on BBC One.
Similarly
, BBC
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News
at Six is an evening
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news
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programme
and Fiona Bruce is one of the
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news
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presenters
of this
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programme
. Be it a
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news
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show
or any other type of TV
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programme
, Fiona Bruce maintains a professional and creative appearance. This
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makes
her a distinctive and notable
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presenter
. This is the main reason I like her
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very
much. In my opinion, she is one of the best TV
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presenters
of our time.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a TV presenter you like. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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