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Describe a person who once moved to live with you. v.1

Describe a person who once moved to live with you. v. 1
Describe a person who once moved to live with you. You should say: who was he/she how long this person lived with you why he/she moved to live with you and explain how you felt about it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: In our country, it is quite common that close relatives move to live with a family for a few days, especially when someone needs to stay in a different city or province. For instance, whenever my uncle, aunt or grandparents come to the city we live in, they stay with us at our home. This is mostly a short-term stay, but on a few occasions, it can be for a long. For this cue card topic, I would like to talk about my uncle Joseph who moved to our house and stayed with us for approximately 2 years. My uncle, Joseph, is the youngest brother of my father and a renowned football player in our hometown. As soon as he finished his high school graduation, he moved to our family and got admitted to a college. As an elder brother, my father took his responsibilities. My uncle stayed with us for about 2 years and then moved to his own apartment after he managed a steady job for himself. I liked him very much and when he moved to our house, I was very pleased. I am the only child of my parents and when my uncle started living with us, I felt like I have got a good friend and someone to talk to about everything. Joseph was an interesting and talented person. We often talked for a long and went out to watch movies. Both of us got involved in some sporting activities and he often helped me in my studies. Since Joseph was a nice person and respected my parents, they also liked him. I never felt irritated or disturbed due to his presence at our home. As an intelligent person, Joseph knew how to behave and treat other members of a family, especially who are close family members. He is now married to a woman who is a lecturer at a college, and they have a two years old daughter now. I still miss some of the activities we did together. Though he was my uncle, I often felt like he was the brother I never had!   Sample Answer 2: Thank you very much for allowing me the time to talk about this Candidate Task Card topic. Well, my grandma used to live with us here in Melbourne for a few years and I would like to talk about her. Before she moved to live in our house, she was in Perth with my grandfather. However, after my grandfather died, my father insisted her to come and live with us. Our family had only three members at that time - my dad, mom and me. My grandma was the fourth member and still, she was an adorable one whose presence was very welcomed. She was a lovely lady in her mid-60s. In her early days, she was one the prettiest ladies in the locality where she lived. She got married to my grandpa, and they spent most of their life in Perth. My grandpa died when he was 76 years old. In fact, my father asked my grandma to come and live with us as soon as my grandfather dies. She, however, took a year to move to Melbourne. My grandma had stayed with us for more than four years and then she decided to get back to Perth after one of my aunts got divorced and decided to relocate in our hometown. I believe she wanted to support her daughter at a tough time and we could not insist her to stay with us. My grandma loves me most among all her grandchildren and thus she loved to pass her times with me. I had a great time when she was with us and I cried when she left. She even thought to sell her house in Perth and live with us permanently. But finally could not do so. I share a special bond with her and she loves me dearly.   When she came to live with us, I had been exhilarated and I had someone to support and love me unconditionally. As a person, my grandmother was a role-model. She was kind and helpful to others. She loved gardening and I was her evening partner to take care of the garden. She helped me in some of my tough times by telling stories from her life which have inspired me to a great extent. I would never forget the good time I had when she was at our house.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a person who once moved to live with you. 1. John is a male associate of my dad in his office. John had been living with our family since he was a child of 9 or 10 years until he moved to his own address recently. He moved to live with my family because was an orphan and had no relatives to live with. He lived more than fourteen years with us. After he got married, he moved to his own apartment. He once said that he has passed the golden days of his life with us. The bonding between him and my family is strong. My dad loves him greatly and cares for him too. I felt great having him at our house. 2. It is quite common in India for someone to live with relatives and my uncle Kumar stayed for over three years with us. He got a job in a multinational company in Mumbai. Since he had no place to live in, he decided to stay with us. He shifted to Mumbai from Uttar Pradesh after the job confirmation. I felt glad about having him in our house. In fact, getting a new member was always enjoyable to me. We had many great times together. He loved me very much and I always wanted to be with him whenever he was at the house. 3. Mr Robert was a paying guest at my residence in Athens. He had lived with me for around one year. He came to Greece for some research works and it took him a long time to complete the work. He moved to live with me because my place was located near the archaeological site he was working on. It was a nice experience for me. In fact, I did not have the idea that a research work could run for over a year, and he was an active participant in the research. Overall, it was a pleasant experience for me. 4. Uncle Richard is my dad’s friend and he moved to Munich to live with our family in early 2016. He had lived for over a few months with my family and during that time, he had become a part of the family. My dad and he had been maintaining their friendship since their early childhood. Richard was a banker and retired from his job in 2014. Gardening is his hobby and he told me that he has more than 200 plants in his garden in Italy. I liked him very much and he taught me how to play chess like a professional. He knew many stories and we loved his real-life stories which were often very exciting. 5. It was an unusual event that Maria, a friend of mine, started living with us. She is my best friend and has lived with me for over six months. Interestingly, she came to Paris from Belgium only to live with me and my family. We were very excited to have her among us. She lost her parents in her childhood and had been brought up by her uncle's family where she was not much appreciated, according to her. She is a loving and caring person and we often go out to enjoy the street views. She is more like a sister than a friend to me. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe someone you admire. 2. Describe a person whom you knew only for a few days. 3. Describe a relative who spent a long time at your home.
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person
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who
once
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moved
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live
with you. You should say:
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who
was he/she how
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long
this
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person
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lived
with you why he/she
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moved
to
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live
with you and
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explain
how you
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about it. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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some
notes to
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you if you wish.
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Sample Answer 1:

In our country, it is quite common that close
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relatives
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move
to
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live
with a
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family
for a few days,
especially
when
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someone
needs to
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stay
in a
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different
city or province.
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, whenever my
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uncle
, aunt or grandparents
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come
to the city we
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live
in, they
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stay
with us at our home. This is
mostly
a short-term
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stay
,
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but
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on a few occasions
, it can be for a
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long
. For this cue
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, I would like to
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about my
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uncle
Joseph
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who
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moved
to our
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house
and
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stayed
with us for approximately 2 years.

My
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uncle
, Joseph, is the youngest brother of my
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father
and a renowned football player in our hometown. As
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soon
as he finished his high school graduation, he
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moved
to our
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family
and
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got
admitted to a college. As an elder brother, my
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father
took his responsibilities. My
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uncle
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stayed
with us for about 2 years and then
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moved
to his
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own
apartment after he managed a steady
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job
for himself.

I liked him
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very
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much
and when he
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moved
to our
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house
, I was
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very
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pleased
. I am the
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only
child of my parents and when my
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uncle
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started
living with us, I
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felt
like I have
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got
a
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good
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friend
and
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someone
to
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talk
to about everything. Joseph was an interesting and talented
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person
. We
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often
talked for a
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and went out to
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watch
movies. Both of us
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got
involved in
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some
sporting
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activities and
he
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often
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helped
me in my studies.

Since Joseph was a nice
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person
and respected my parents, they
also
liked him. I never
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felt
irritated or disturbed due to his presence at our home. As an intelligent
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person
, Joseph knew how to behave and treat other
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members
of a
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family
,
especially
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who
are close
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family
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members
. He is
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now
married to a woman
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who
is a lecturer at a college, and they have a two years
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old
daughter
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now
. I
still
miss
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some of the
activities we did together. Though he was my
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uncle
, I
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often
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felt
like he was the brother I never had!
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Sample Answer 2:

Thank you
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very
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much
for allowing me the
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time
to
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talk
about this Candidate Task
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Card
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topic
.
Well
, my
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grandma
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used
to
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live
with us here in Melbourne for a few years and I would like to
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talk
about her.
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Before
she
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moved
to
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live
in our
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house
, she was in Perth with my grandfather.
However
, after my grandfather
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died
, my
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father
insisted her to
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come
and
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live
with us.

Our
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family
had
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only
three
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members
at that
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time
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-
my
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dad
, mom and me. My
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grandma
was the fourth
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member
and
still
, she was an adorable one whose presence was
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very
welcomed. She was a lovely lady in her mid-60s. In her early days, she was
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one
the prettiest ladies in the locality where she
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lived
. She
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got
married to my grandpa, and they spent most of their life in Perth. My grandpa
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died
when he was 76 years
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old
.

In fact, my
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father
asked my
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grandma
to
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come
and
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live
with us as
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soon
as my grandfather
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dies
. She,
however
, took a
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year
to
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move
to Melbourne. My
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grandma
had
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stayed
with us for more than four
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years and
then she decided to
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get
back to Perth after one of my aunts
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got
divorced and decided to relocate in our hometown. I believe she wanted to support her daughter at a tough
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time and
we could not insist her to
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stay
with us.

My
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grandma
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loves
me most among all her grandchildren and
thus
she
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loved
to pass her
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times
with me. I had a
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great
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time
when she was with us and I cried when she
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left
. She even
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thought
to sell her
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house
in Perth and
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live
with us
permanently
.
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But
finally
could not do
so
. I share a special bond with
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her and
she
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loves
me
dearly
.
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When she came to
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live
with us, I had
been exhilarated
and I had
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someone
to support and
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love
me
unconditionally
.

As a
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person
, my grandmother was a role-model. She was kind and helpful to others. She
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loved
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gardening and
I was her evening partner to take care of the garden.
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She
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helped
me in
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some
of my tough
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times
by telling stories from her life which have inspired me to a
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great
extent. I would never forget the
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good
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time
I had when she was at our
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house
.
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More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task
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Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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person
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who
once
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moved
to
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live
with you. 1. John is a male associate of my
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dad
in his office. John had been living with our
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family
since he was a child of 9 or 10 years until he
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moved
to his
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own
address recently. He
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moved
to
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live
with my
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family
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because
was an orphan and had no
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relatives
to
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live
with. He
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lived
more than fourteen years with us. After he
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got
married, he
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moved
to his
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own
apartment. He once said that he has passed the golden days of his life with us. The bonding between him and my
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family
is strong. My
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dad
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loves
him
greatly
and cares for him too. I
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felt
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great
having him at our
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house. 2
. It is quite common in India for
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someone
to
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live
with
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relatives
and my
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uncle
Kumar
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stayed
for
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over
three years with us. He
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got
a
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job
in a multinational
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company
in Mumbai. Since he had no place to
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live
in, he decided to
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stay
with us. He shifted to Mumbai from Uttar Pradesh after the
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job
confirmation. I
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felt
glad about having him in our
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house
. In fact, getting a new
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member
was always enjoyable to me. We had
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many
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great
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times
together. He
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loved
me
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very
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much
and I always wanted to be with him whenever he was at the
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house. 3
. Mr Robert was a paying guest at my residence in Athens. He had
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lived
with me for around one
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year
. He came to Greece for
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some
research works and it took him a
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long
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time
to complete the work.
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He
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moved
to
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live
with me
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because
my place
was located
near the archaeological site he was working on. It was a nice experience for me. In fact, I did not have the
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idea
that a research work could run for
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over
a
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year
, and he was an active participant in the research.
Overall
, it was a pleasant experience for me.

4.
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Uncle
Richard is my
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dad’s
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friend and
he
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moved
to Munich to
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live
with our
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family
in early 2016. He had
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lived
for
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over
a few months with my
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family
and during that
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time
, he had become a part of the
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family
. My
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dad and
he had been maintaining their friendship since their early childhood. Richard was a banker and retired from his
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job
in 2014. Gardening is his
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hobby and
he
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told
me that he has more than 200 plants in his garden in Italy. I liked him
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very
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much and
he taught me how to play chess like a professional. He knew
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many
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stories and
we
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loved
his real-life stories which were
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often
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very
exciting.

5. It was an unusual
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event
that Maria, a
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friend
of mine,
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started
living with us. She is my best
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friend
and has
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lived
with me for
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over
six months.
Interestingly
, she came to Paris from Belgium
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only
to
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live
with me and my
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family
. We were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited to have her among us. She lost her parents in her childhood and had
been brought
up by her uncle's
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family
where she was not
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much
appreciated, according to her. She is a loving and caring
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
person and
we
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often
go out to enjoy the street views.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
is more like a sister than a
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friend
to me.

If you can
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talk
about this cue
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card
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topic
, you should be able to answer the following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
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someone
you admire.

2.
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Describe
a
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person
whom you knew
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
for a few days.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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relative
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who
spent a
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long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
at your home.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
213Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS speaking Describe a person who once moved to live with you. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
18 paragraphs
1443 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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