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Describe an important historical event you know about. v.1

Describe an important historical event you know about. v. 1
Describe an important historical event you know about.   You should say: what event it is when it happened who or what was involved in it and explain why you think it is an important historical event.   [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I believe that history is much beyond the battles, conflicts, inventions and birth of great people who shape the world. History is the past events and time that shape the world and touch the lives of the humankind. The recent significant events like 9/11 – World Trade Center attack, the invention of the telephone, the birth of Muhammad or Jesus Christ, the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria are all significant historical events that have changed the world profoundly. For this cue card topic, I would like to talk about the ‘Invasion of Poland by Germany in 1939. ’ This is a historic event that has changed the whole world drastically. If this did not occur, Hiroshima and Nagasaki would have been spared, World War II could have been avoided, several million people would not have to die, British would have ruled many parts of the world still today, the world superpower would have been different countries than those we see today, and we would have a different economic and political agenda these days. The cold war and Arms Race are thought to be triggered by this event and the world’s politics were changed and that would influence even the future world politics. All these major changes were the direct or indirect results of a single event – German’s decision to invade Poland. This historic event is also known as the Poland Campaign. On September 01, 1939, German forces bombard Poland and Adolf Hitler of Germany was the mastermind for this invasion. As a result, World War II began. World War II is one of the rare wars that has changed the world history, power, politics and still influences the future politics. From this regards, the invasion of Poland in 1939 is a highly influential historical event.   Sample Answer 2: The world witnesses numerous events in every decade that sometimes shape the future course, but not all of them are historic. Amid millions of historical events, the birth of Muhammad is one of the most influential, I believe. I thank you for the opportunity to let me talk about this historical event with a paramount importance. According to the religion of Islam, Muhammad is the last prophet and there would be no other prophets after him. He was sent by God to spread the words of God and to turn people civilised in that ancient era when chaos was the norm of the society amid the Arabs. Muhammad was born to a noble family in Arabia known as Quraish in 570 AD. He lost his parents in his early childhood and was brought up by his uncles. He is also known as the Holy Prophet of Islam and the central figure who worked relentlessly to spread Islam among people. His influence turned millions of people to convert to Islam and it is the second large religion in the world. Therefore, his birth is an important event in human history, I believe. Muhammad's early life was filled with struggles. He initially was brought up by his grandfather and then by his uncle, Abu Talib. During his lifetime, the region of Arabia was filled with ignorance, the indiscriminating killing of baby girls was a very usual activity while people believed in several gods and worshipped idols. The people did not give up their ancestors’ faith and thus Muhammad was inflicted with a large number of both mental and physical torments. But he ensured the practice of Islamic belief till his last day on earth. He did not receive any formal education but he was the most intelligent person of that time. He used to seclude himself in a cave, Hira, where he received revelation. He was around 40 when the revelation happened. Since then, he started preaching Islam as a religion secretly with the proclamation that God is only one and He is to be worshipped alone. He also preached that he was the prophet and messenger of God to preach Islam. Gradually he started getting followers but at the same time, the idolaters of Mecca started opposing Him. The birth of Muhammad is an event of high historical importance. It has to be admitted that Muhammad is the most influential man ever. He was filled with superior humane qualities. He had to leave his motherland fearing attacks from the non-believers but when he won Mecca after battles, he forgave all those who wanted him to be killed. He is, in fact, an idol for every human being regardless of religion. Even many of the non-believers term him as the best human ever born in this world. His birth defines the starting of the supreme religion - Islam. The historical events like World War I & II have a great effect on the human civilisation but not even close to the birth of this great man. The world has changed to a great extent by the influence of this man. No other human history would be that profound and intensifying as his birth is.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an important historical event you know about. 1. The French Revolution is an important event in global history. It took place in 1789 and ended in 1799. The revolution also played an important role in the expansion of the French Empire. The revolution involved a wide number of people and is notable for overthrowing the monarchy and establishing a republic system in the country. This is an important historical event because it has changed the course of modern history, particularly in France. 2. The assassination of Abraham Lincoln is an important event in the history of the USA. On April 14 in 1865, the 16th President of the country was assassinated during attending a play at a theatre in Washington. A person named John Wilkes Booth was involved in this event and in fact, he was the assassin. The killing of the president changed the course of American history. The President was undertaking different approaches to develop the country and with his death, all the approaches halted. 3. The partition of India and Pakistan was an important event in the history of this region. The event took place in 1947. In fact, the year is also known as the ‘Partition Year’. Due to the separation, two different states were born, namely India and Pakistan. India is also known as the Hindustan because of the majority of the people believe in Hinduism. On the other hand, Pakistan was formed by the Muslim majority population who used to live in the greater India that time. The separation of East and West Pakistan in 1971 was also a result of this event. 4. The event of the gold rush was a historical event for my country, Australia. The event took place in 1851. Before the discovery of gold in Australia, there were some rumours around about gold. But not every one of those was true. The event had brought different changes in the lineup of the then colonial government in the areas. The economy of the country was destabilized too with the discovery of gold in the surrounding areas. 5. The end of the Second World War was an important event for Thailand. The War ended in November in 1945. The global war came to an end after a huge destruction and damages across the countries and many nations were involved in the war. It was an important historical event for Thailand because the country had to return the territories it obtained during the war. If the territories had been in its possession, the total areas of Thailand could have been far wider than it has now. Important Historical Events: International: A) The birth of Christianity. B) The birth of Muhammad (570 AD). C) The Assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria (1914). D) Invasion of Poland by Germany (1939). E) 9/11 - World Trade Center Attack (2001). F) The World War ||. G) Cold War (1947 - 1991). H) The French Revolution. I) Cuban Missile Crisis. In the USA: A) Vietnam war. B) The assassination of John F. Kenedy. C) The Civil War. D) 9/11, 2011. E) The assassination of Abraham Lincoln. In India: A) Partition of India and Pakistan (1947). B) Babri Masjid demolition (1991). C) Birth of Gautam Buddha (563 BC). D) Alexander's invasion of India (327 - 26 BC). E) First Battle of Panipath (1526 AD). In Australia: A) 1787 First Fleet ( May 1, 1787). B) Victoria became a Colony (1851). C) Gold Rush Settlement. D) Canberra was chosen to be the capital of Australia. E) Queen's birthday (1788). In Russia: A) The collapse of the USSR (1911). B) Victory in the World War ||. In Canada: A) The battle of Vimy Ridge (1917). B) Royal Canadian Navy is established (1910). C) Great Depression in Canada (1929). D) Canada joins UN (1945). In Nepal: A) British East India Company gains control (1768). B) Anglo-Nepalese War (1814) C) Nepal joins the UN (1855). D) Nepal becomes a republic (2008). If you can talk about this topic, you would be able to talk about the below-mentioned topics as well: 1. Describe an important event that shaped your country. 2. Describe a true event in your country. 3. Talk about a global event that you think has changed the world.
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you know
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it is when it happened
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who
or what
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in it and
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Sample Answer 1:

I believe that
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history
is much beyond the
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battles
, conflicts, inventions and
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birth
of
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who
shape the
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.
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is the past
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and
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time
that shape the
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and touch the
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lives
of the humankind. The recent significant
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events
like 9/11
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–
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World
Trade Center attack, the invention of the telephone, the
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birth
of Muhammad or Jesus Christ, the
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assassination
of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria are all significant
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historical
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events
that have
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changed
the
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profoundly
. For this cue card
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topic
, I would like to
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talk
about the
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‘Invasion
of Poland by Germany in 1939. ’

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event
that has
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changed
the whole
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world
drastically
. If this did not occur, Hiroshima and Nagasaki would have
been spared
,
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II could have
been avoided
, several million
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people
would not
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parts of the
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still
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today
, the
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superpower would have been
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countries
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see
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today
, and we would have a
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economic and political agenda these days. The
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cold
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war
and Arms Race are
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thought
to
be triggered
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and the
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were
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and that would
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influence
even the future
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politics
. All these major
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German’s decision to invade Poland.

This historic
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is
also
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known
as the Poland Campaign. On September 01, 1939, German forces bombard Poland and Adolf Hitler of Germany was the mastermind for this
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invasion
.
As a result
,
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World
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War
II began.

World
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II is one of the rare
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wars
that has
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the
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history
, power,
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and
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influences
the future
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politics
. From
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this
regards, the
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invasion
of Poland in 1939 is a
highly
influential
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historical
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.
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Sample Answer 2:

The
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world
witnesses numerous
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events
in every decade that
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sometimes
shape the future course,
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but
not all of them are historic. Amid millions of
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historical
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events
, the
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birth
of Muhammad is one of the most influential, I believe. I thank you for the opportunity to
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me
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about this
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event
with a paramount importance.

According to the
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religion
of Islam, Muhammad is the last
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prophet
and there would be no other
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prophets
after him. He was
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sent
by God to spread the words of God and to turn
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people
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civilised
in that ancient era when chaos was the norm of the society amid the Arabs. Muhammad
was born
to a noble family in Arabia
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known
as
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Quraish
in 570 AD. He lost his parents in his early childhood and
was brought
up by his uncles. He is
also
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known
as the Holy
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Prophet
of Islam and the central figure
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who
worked
relentlessly
to spread Islam among
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people
. His
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influence
turned millions of
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people
to convert to Islam and it is the second large
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religion
in the
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.
Therefore
, his
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birth
is an
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in
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history
, I believe.

Muhammad's early life
was filled
with struggles. He
initially
was brought
up by his grandfather and then by his uncle, Abu
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Talib
. During his lifetime, the region of Arabia
was filled
with ignorance, the
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indiscriminating
killing of baby girls was a
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very
usual activity while
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people
believed in several gods and
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worshipped
idols. The
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people
did not give up their ancestors’ faith and
thus
Muhammad
was inflicted
with
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a large number of
both mental and physical torments.
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But
he ensured the practice of Islamic belief till his last day on earth.

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he was the most intelligent person of that
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time
. He
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used
to seclude himself in a cave,
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Hira
, where he received revelation.
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He
was around 40 when the revelation happened. Since then, he
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started
preaching Islam as a
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religion
secretly
with the proclamation that God is
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only
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one and
He is to be
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worshipped
alone. He
also
preached that he was the
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prophet
and messenger of God to preach Islam.
Gradually
he
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started
getting followers
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at the same
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, the idolaters of Mecca
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started
opposing Him.

The
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birth
of Muhammad is an
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event
of high
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historical
importance. It
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has to
be admitted
that Muhammad is the most influential
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man
ever. He
was filled
with superior
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humane
qualities. He had to
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leave
his motherland fearing attacks from the non-believers
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but
when he won Mecca after
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battles
, he forgave all those
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who
wanted him to
be killed
.
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He
is, in fact, an idol for every
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human
being regardless of
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religion
. Even
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many
of the non-believers term him as the best
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human
ever born in this world.

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birth
defines the starting of the supreme
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religion
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-
Islam. The
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historical
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events
like
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I
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&amp
; II have a
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great
effect on the
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human
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civilisation
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birth
of this
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man
. The
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has
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to a
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extent by the
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. No other
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human
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would be that profound and intensifying as his
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is.
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to
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about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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:
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:
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an
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important
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historical
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event
you know
about. 1. The French Revolution is an
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important
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event
in global
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history
. It took place in 1789 and ended in 1799. The revolution
also
played an
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important
role in the expansion of the French Empire. The revolution involved a wide number of
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people
and is notable for overthrowing the monarchy and establishing a republic system in the
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country
. This is an
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important
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historical
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because
it has
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changed
the course of modern
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history
,
particularly
in France.

2. The
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assassination
of Abraham Lincoln is an
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important
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event
in the
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history
of the USA. On April 14 in 1865, the 16th President of the
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country
was assassinated
during attending a play at a
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theatre
in Washington. A person named John Wilkes Booth
was involved
in this
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event
and in fact, he was the assassin. The killing of the president
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changed
the course of American
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history
. The President was undertaking
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different
approaches to develop the
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country
and with his death, all the approaches halted.

3.
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partition of India and Pakistan was an
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important
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event
in the
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history
of this region.
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The
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event
took place in 1947. In fact, the year is
also
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known
as the ‘Partition Year’. Due to the separation, two
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different
states
were born
,
namely
India and Pakistan. India is
also
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known
as the Hindustan
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because
of the majority of the
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people
believe in Hinduism.
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, Pakistan
was formed
by the Muslim majority population
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who
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used
to
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live
in the greater India that
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time
. The separation of East and West Pakistan in 1971 was
also
a result of this
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event. 4
. The
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event
of the gold rush was a
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historical
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event
for my
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country
, Australia.
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took place in 1851.
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the discovery of gold in Australia, there were
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some
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rumours
around about gold.
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not every one of those was true. The
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event
had brought
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different
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changes
in the lineup of the then colonial
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government
in the areas. The economy of the
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country
was destabilized
too with the discovery of gold in the surrounding areas.

5.
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The
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end
of the Second
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World
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War
was an
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important
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event
for Thailand.
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The
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War
ended in November in 1945.
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The
global
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war
came to an
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end
after a huge destruction and damages across the
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countries
and
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many
nations
were involved
in the
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war
. It was an
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important
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historical
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event
for Thailand
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because
the
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country
had to return the territories it obtained during the
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war
. If the territories had been in its possession, the total areas of Thailand could have been far wider than it has
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now
.
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Important
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Historical
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Events
: International:

A) The
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birth
of Christianity.

B) The
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birth
of Muhammad (570 AD).

C) The
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Assassination
of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria (1914).

D)
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Invasion
of Poland by Germany (1939).

E) 9/11
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-
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World
Trade Center Attack (2001).

F) The
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World
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War
||.

G)
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Cold
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War
(
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1947 - 1991
).

H) The French Revolution.

I) Cuban Missile Crisis.

In the USA:

A)
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Vietnam war
.

B) The
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assassination
of John F.
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Kenedy
.

C) The Civil War.

D) 9/11, 2011.

E) The
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assassination
of Abraham Lincoln.

In India:

A) Partition of India and Pakistan (1947).

B)
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Babri
Masjid demolition (1991).

C)
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Birth
of Gautam Buddha (563 BC).

D) Alexander's
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invasion
of India (
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327 - 26
BC).

E)
First
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Battle
of
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Panipath
(1526 AD).

In Australia:

A) 1787
First
Fleet
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(
May 1, 1787).

B) Victoria became a Colony (1851).

C) Gold Rush Settlement.

D) Canberra
was chosen
to be the capital of Australia.

E) Queen's birthday (1788).

In Russia:

A) The collapse of the USSR (1911).

B) Victory in the
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World
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War
||.

In Canada:

A) The
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battle
of
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Vimy
Ridge (1917).

B) Royal Canadian Navy
is established
(1910).

C)
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Great
Depression in Canada (1929).

D) Canada
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joins
UN (1945).

In Nepal:

A) British East India
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Company
gains control (1768).

B) Anglo-Nepalese
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War
(1814)

C) Nepal
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joins
the UN (1855).

D) Nepal becomes a republic (2008).

If you can
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talk
about this
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topic
, you would be able to
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talk
about the below-mentioned
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
an
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important
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event
that shaped your
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country. 2
.
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Describe
a true
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event
in your
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country. 3
.
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Talk
about a global
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event
that you
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think
has
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changed
the
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world
.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
215Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
41Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an important historical event you know about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
59 paragraphs
1637 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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