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Describe a creative person whom you admire. v.1

Describe a creative person whom you admire. v. 1
Describe a creative person whom you admire.   You should say: who this person is how he/ she is creative how you know him /her and explain why you admire this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: The American songwriter, artist, writer and singer, Bob Dylan, whose original name is Robert Allen Zimmerman is a very creative person I know about. I also admire for his creative songwriting and noteworthy songs. He is, in fact, one of the most influential songwriters and singers of all time and I respect him greatly. He was born in 1941 in the USA and due to his remarkable contributions to literature, he was awarded the Nobel Prize recently.  The Nobel Prize for literature is awarded both for lasting literary merit and for evidence of consistent idealism to a great extent. Dylan's songs have such creativity, consistent idealism and universal appeal and without any doubt, he is a very talented and creative person. He is such a powerful and influential singer that his song like 'The times they are a-changing' and 'Blowing in the wind' became anthems for the American civil rights and anti-war movements.   His creative and dazzling lyrics incorporate a vast range of social, political, psychological, philosophical, and literary influences. As a musician, he has sold more than 10 million records. Besides, he is also a talented painter.   I knew him first when I  heard his song 'Slow Train' from his album 'Slow Train Coming' in my early college days. I have explored his music and heard most of the songs sung by him. I have also read several articles online about him and his works. I know him as a revered songwriter and he is one of my favourite singers of all time.   I admire him mostly because of his talent and outstanding contribution to the music, lyrics, and literary works through his songwriting. There were times when his music personally inspired me, motivated me and helped me forget my pain. I have never met him in person but he seems like someone I know for a long and very closely. I respect him as a great musician, admire him as a songwriter and consider him one of the greatest minds of the present era.     Sample Answer 2: I like to watch movies of different genres and never miss any single chance to enjoy them wherever I am. Hence, the name- Steven Spielberg is very usual to me. He is one of the most successful Hollywood film directors and in my opinion one of the most talented and creative people alive. I would like to thank you for this opportunity to let me talk about a creative person. Steven Allan Spielberg is commonly known as Steven Spielberg. He was born in 1946. He is not only a director of some awesome movies, he is also highly reputed as a producer and his extraordinary skills as a scriptwriter. In fact, Hollywood has entered into a new era with the direct support from Spielberg. He introduced some of the newest genres and made them popular with his charming direction. As a result, he took a permanent berth in the history of Hollywood. Besides, the list of achievements for his efforts is adorable as well. He won several prestigious awards for his outstanding activities, including the Academy Award, with plots, casts and their performance. Steven Spielberg is not only creative; he is a genius. Most of his movies deal with some exceptional issues. Consequently, he won the hearts of the global population. He is on moviemaking career for over 40 years and has made a notable number of quality movies. The movies directed by Spielberg are quite different from the contemporary ideas. He initiated the Science Fiction in Hollywood and after its success, he moved to make movies on humanitarian grounds. Some of his movies have created a sense of justification among his audiences. He mostly experimented with some specific genres and made the masterpieces with his magical ability. He knows how to select casts and crews and never cuts ties with the people he comes in touch. This is the key reason behind his popularity. When I was a teenager, I used to watch movies for entertainment. In fact, I was not matured enough to understand the movie plots of performances from the casts. Hence, there was no specific selection. One day, I watched a movie named Jaws and it attracted me most. Then I started gathering information about the movie and finally came to know about the movie director – Steven Spielberg. Until then, I did not have any interest in the movie makers or their plots. I just watched the movies for my entertainment and loved the movies that come with actions. But gradually the sense of appreciation grew into me. Then I was charmed with this movie maker of Hollywood. After starting his career in Hollywood, Spielberg experimented on some specific genres which were overlooked before. He revived them with his own efforts. He worked on many themes and genres of movie making in ages and turned out to be a successful director. It was not merely his luck that dragged him towards success, rather it was his hard efforts and perseverance. Almost all of the movies he made were successful and brought him the reputation of a great director. I have enjoyed all of his movies made so far and realised the different tastes. Each of the movies is completely different in terms of plots, cast, locations, innovative ideas, application of technology and more other issues while some of the movies have broken the box office records. For all such reasons, I admire him most.    More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a creative person whom you admire. 1. Steven Paul Jobs (better known as Steve Jobs) was a very creative person. He was creative in the sense that he had started a new trend in the technological arena. He was an inventor and industrial designer. I came to know about him while using an iPhone. I did not have an idea that the smartphone is the brainchild of this person. He is admirable to me for his contribution to the technology. He played an important role in the improvement of the microcomputer and mobile phones. 2. In the film industry of Bollywood, the name of Aamir Khan is on the list of most creative persons. He is a film actor, host, activist and producer. He knows how to win the heart of people with an emotional touch. He applies some unconventional methods to express his creativity and finally he wins everything he desired. I knew him from my childhood for his special performances in the movies and got amazed at his capacity to portray the characters. I admire Aamir Khan as he has established himself as one of the most popular figures of the country although his beginning was not that much prominent. 3. Leonardo da Vinci was a famous painter and mostly known for his portrait – Mona Lisa. He had a deep sense about everything and he used the sense in his paintings. Almost all the paintings from this great painter are thought-provoking. A man without creativity is unable to arouse the curiosity of world. In fact, he is a subject to study for many. I first read the name in my history book and it described him as the greatest painters of all the time in the world. I admire him for his multifarious talents. 4. At present, life without a social platform like Facebook is unimaginable. And the man behind the platform is Mark Zuckerberg. He had a great vision even before anyone else thought it. His creative sense has made the social networking platform for everyone and this is for free. When I started using Facebook in 2006, I came to know about its founder and tried to get information about him. I admire this person for his hardworking nature. Within a short span of time, he has become a billionaire. 5. The telephone we are using today is the invention of a creative person – Alexander Graham Bell. He was the inventor of the practical telephone which was a dream in the past. After lots of research and analysis, he invented the telephone and it is his extreme level of creativity that made the dream come true. I admire him because he realized the needs of communication and took initiatives to invent the most necessary thing of the present day. He was also the founder of AT& T that people in the USA are accustomed to as a telephone subscriber. Some creative persons in the world history who are quite famous: 1. Thomas Edison. 2. Leonardo Da Vinci. 3. Marie Curie. 4. Alexander Graham Bell. 5. Galileo Galilei. 6. Richard Feynman. 7. Bill Gates. 8. Larry Ellison. 9. Mark Zuckerberg. 10. Larry Page. 11. Steve Jobs. 12. Nikola Tela. 13. Benjamin Franklin. 14. Charlie Chaplin. 15. Steven Spielberg. 16. Albert Einstein. 17. Sir Isaac Newton. 18. Aamir Khan. 19. AR Rahman. 20. Sunil Gangopadhyay.
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a
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creative
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person
whom you
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admire
.
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person
is how he/ she is
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creative
how you
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know
him /her and
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why you
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admire
this
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person
. [You will
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The American
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songwriter
, artist, writer and
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singer
, Bob Dylan, whose original
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name
is Robert Allen Zimmerman is a
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very
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creative
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person
I
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know
about. I
also
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admire
for his
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creative
songwriting and noteworthy songs. He is, in
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fact
, one of the most influential
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songwriters
and
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singers
of all
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time
and I respect him
greatly
. He
was born
in 1941 in the USA and due to his remarkable contributions to literature, he
was awarded
the Nobel Prize recently.  The Nobel Prize for literature
is awarded
both for lasting literary merit and for evidence of consistent idealism to a
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great
extent. Dylan's songs have such creativity, consistent idealism and universal appeal and without any doubt, he is a
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very
talented and
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creative
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person
. He is such a powerful and influential
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singer
that his song like 'The
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times
they are a-changing' and 'Blowing in the wind' became anthems for the American civil rights and anti-war movements.
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His
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creative
and dazzling lyrics incorporate a vast range of social, political, psychological, philosophical, and literary influences. As a musician, he has sold more than 10 million records.
Besides
, he is
also
a talented painter.
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I knew him
first
when I
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heard his song 'Slow Train' from his album 'Slow Train Coming' in my early college days. I have explored his music and heard most of the songs sung by him.
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I
have
also
read several articles online about him and his works.
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I
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know
him as a revered
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songwriter and
he is one of my
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favourite
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singers
of all
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time
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I
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him
mostly
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because
of his talent and outstanding contribution to the music, lyrics, and literary works through his songwriting. There were
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times
when his music
personally
inspired me, motivated me and
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helped
me forget my pain. I have never met him in
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person
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but
he seems like someone I
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know
for a long and
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very
closely
. I respect him as a
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great
musician,
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admire
him as a
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songwriter
and consider him one of the greatest minds of the present era.
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Sample Answer 2:

I like to
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watch
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movies
of
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different
genres and never miss any single chance to enjoy them wherever I am.
Hence
, the
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name-
Steven Spielberg is
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very
usual to me. He is one of the most successful Hollywood film
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directors
and in my opinion one of the most talented and
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creative
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people
alive. I would like to thank you for this opportunity to
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let
me talk about a
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creative
person.

Steven Allan Spielberg is
commonly
known as Steven Spielberg. He
was born
in 1946. He is not
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only
a
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director
of
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some
awesome
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movies
, he is
also
highly
reputed as a producer and his extraordinary
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skills
as a scriptwriter. In
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fact
, Hollywood has entered into a new era with the direct support from Spielberg. He introduced
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some
of the newest genres and made them popular with his charming direction.
As a result
, he took a permanent berth in the history of Hollywood.
Besides
, the list of achievements for his efforts is adorable as
well
. He won several prestigious awards for his outstanding activities, including the Academy Award, with
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plots
,
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casts
and their performance.

Steven Spielberg is not
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only
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creative
; he is a genius. Most of his
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movies
deal with
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some
exceptional issues.
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, he won the hearts of the global population. He is on
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moviemaking
career for over 40 years and has made a notable number of quality
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movies
. The
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movies
directed by Spielberg are quite
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different
from the contemporary
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ideas
. He initiated the Science Fiction in Hollywood and after its success, he
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moved
to
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make
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movies
on humanitarian grounds.
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of his
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movies
have created a
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sense
of justification among his audiences. He
mostly
experimented with
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specific genres and made the masterpieces with his magical ability. He
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knows
how to select
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casts
and crews and never
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cuts
ties with the
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people
he
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comes
in touch. This is the key reason behind his popularity.

When I was a
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, I
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to
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watch
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movies
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, I was not matured
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to understand the
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movie
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of performances from the
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.
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watched
a
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movie
named Jaws and it attracted me most. Then I
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started
gathering information about the
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movie
and
finally
came to
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know
about the
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movie
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director
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–
Steven Spielberg. Until then, I did not have any interest in the
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movie
makers or their
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plots
. I
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just
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watched
the
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movies
for my entertainment and
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loved
the
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movies
that
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come
with actions.
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But
gradually
the
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sense
of appreciation grew into me. Then I
was charmed
with this
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movie
maker of Hollywood.

After starting his career in Hollywood, Spielberg experimented on
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some
specific genres which
were overlooked
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before
. He revived them with his
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own
efforts. He worked on
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many
themes and genres of
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movie
making in ages and turned out to be a successful
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director
. It was not
merely
his luck that dragged him towards success,
rather
it was his
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hard
efforts and perseverance. Almost
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all of the
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movies
he made were successful and brought him the reputation of a
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great
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director
. I have enjoyed all of his
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movies
made
so
far and
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realised
the
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different
tastes. Each of the
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movies
is completely
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different
in terms of
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plots
,
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cast
, locations, innovative
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ideas
, application of technology and more other issues while
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some of the
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movies
have broken the box office records. For all such reasons, I
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admire
him most.
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to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
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a
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creative
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person
whom you
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admire
. 1. Steven Paul Jobs (better known as Steve Jobs) was a
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very
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creative
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person
. He was
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creative
in the
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sense
that he had
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started
a new trend in the technological arena. He was an inventor and industrial designer. I came to
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know
about him while using an iPhone. I did not have an
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idea
that the smartphone is the brainchild of this
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person
. He is admirable to me for his contribution to the technology. He played an
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important
role in the improvement of the microcomputer and mobile phones.

2. In the film industry of Bollywood, the
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name
of
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Aamir
Khan is on the list of most
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creative
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persons
. He is a film actor, host, activist and producer. He
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knows
how to win the heart of
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people
with an emotional touch.
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He
applies
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some
unconventional methods to express his creativity and
finally
he wins everything he desired. I knew him from my childhood for his special performances in the
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movies
and
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got
amazed at his capacity to portray the characters. I
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admire
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Aamir
Khan as he has established himself as one of the most popular figures of the country although his beginning was not that much prominent.

3. Leonardo da Vinci was a
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famous
painter and
mostly
known for his portrait
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Mona Lisa. He had a deep
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sense
about
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everything and
he
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used
the
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sense
in his paintings. Almost all the paintings from this
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great
painter are
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thought
-provoking. A
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man
without creativity is unable to arouse the curiosity of world. In
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fact
, he is a subject to study for
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many
. I
first
read the
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name
in my history book and it
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described
him as the greatest painters of all the
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time
in the world. I
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admire
him for his multifarious talents.

4. At present, life without a social platform like Facebook is unimaginable. And the
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man
behind the platform is Mark Zuckerberg. He had a
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great
vision even
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before
anyone else
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thought
it. His
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creative
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sense
has made the social networking platform for everyone and this is for free. When I
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started
using Facebook in 2006, I came to
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know
about its founder and tried to
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get
information about him. I
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admire
this
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person
for his hardworking nature. Within a short span of
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time
, he has become a billionaire.

5. The
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telephone
we are using
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today
is the invention of a
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creative
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person
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–
Alexander Graham Bell. He was the inventor of the practical
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telephone
which was a dream in the past. After lots of research and analysis, he invented the
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telephone
and it is his extreme level of creativity that made the dream
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come
true. I
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admire
him
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because
he
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realized
the needs of communication and took initiatives to invent the most necessary thing of the present day. He was
also
the founder of
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AT&amp
; T that
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people
in the USA
are accustomed
to as a
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telephone
subscriber.
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Some
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creative
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persons
in the world history who are quite
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famous
: 1. Thomas Edison.

2.
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Leonardo Da Vinci
.

3. Marie Curie.

4. Alexander Graham Bell.

5. Galileo
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Galilei
.

6. Richard Feynman.

7. Bill Gates.

8. Larry Ellison.

9. Mark Zuckerberg.

10. Larry Page.

11. Steve Jobs.

12. Nikola
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Tela
.

13. Benjamin Franklin.

14. Charlie Chaplin.

15. Steven Spielberg.

16. Albert Einstein.

17. Sir Isaac Newton.

18.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Aamir
Khan.

19. AR Rahman.

20. Sunil
Possible spelling mistake found.
Gangopadhyay
.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
133Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a creative person whom you admire. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
30 paragraphs
1559 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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