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Describe a TV or radio presenter you know about. v.1

Describe a TV or radio presenter you know about. v. 1
Describe a TV or radio presenter you know about. You should say: who he/she is what programme he/she presents how he/she presents the programme and explain why you like/dislike him/her.   Model Answer 1: No doubt that TV is one of the most wonderful tools for entertainment in today’s world. But, it can’t do any wonder just by itself. It needs several performers and artists to actually make it work, and a TV presenter is one such performer who undoubtedly plays an important role in making things interesting for us. Anyway, today, I would like to talk about one such TV presenter whom I know and admire a lot. The name of this TV presenter is Jon Stewart.   Being born in 1962, Jon Stewart started his career as a stand-up American comedian from 1993. Since then, he never really had to look back as his career as a TV personality only grew more and more popular among his audience while hosting shows like “The daily show” (an American late-night talk and news satire television programme, describing itself as a fake news programme. The Daily Show draws its comedy and satire from recent news stories, political figures, media organizations, and often uses self-referential humour as well), The comedy Central (also an American pay television channel which is geared for mature audiences and carries comedy programming in the form of both original, licensed, and syndicated series, stand-up comedy specials, and feature films). Jon Stewart, one of the most popular and prolific TV presenters of the modern times in my opinion, also hosted a show called “The John Stewart Show”, which also was a late-night comedy show.   Anyway, Jon Stewart has his own way of presenting his shows, which seems so controversial and yet so articulate in substance and appeal. Anyway, I like Jon Stewart, primarily because I have never really seen any other TV presenter or personality to bring the “truth” out in such satirical and cruel fashion. I also like the fact that when he presents his comedy, how somehow manages to keep his audience dead quiet in front of him with his extraordinary charm and wit.   I also like him because he is a multi-talented person. In fact, he is only a stand-out comedian but also a director, producer, writer and political commentator.   Sample Answer 2: Radio programmes use the presenter more frequently than TV programmes in our country and one such radio presenter whom I like very much is (…say a name…). S/he presents the weather updates every 2 hours on the ABC radio. We, as listeners of the radio programmes, know very little personal information about the radio presenters and the person I am talking about would be around 25 years old and is a full-time radio presenter. S/he is currently presenting the weather updates, which is a program called ‘Weather Today’ and I find his presenting the program very informative and interesting. Since s/he presents the weather updates, s/he mostly depends on the weather reports provided to him/her and sometimes s/he makes his/her own thought and some humour in the presentation. S/he has an attractive and clear voice and that makes the information easily listenable. He has a different style of presenting the weather-related data and mainly because of that the ‘Weather today’ program has gained its popularity. S/he describes the overall weather condition based on different locations of the country and then gives some tips to the listeners. I find his/ her weather report interesting and informative that’s why I like this radio reporter very much. Sometimes I tune on to the ABC Radio channel to learn the updates of the weather and s/he is the one to present that.       Follow-up Questions: -   What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a good presenter? -   What are the necessary qualities of a good presenter? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe someone who has an interesting job career. Describe a challenging job you know about. . Describe a part-time job you know about. Describe your favourite TV or radio presenter.
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Describe
a TV or
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radio
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presenter
you
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know
about. You should say: who he/she is what
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programme
he/she
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presents
how he/she
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presents
the
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programme
and
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explain
why you like/dislike him/her.
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Model Answer 1:

No doubt that TV is one of the most wonderful tools for entertainment in
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today’s
world.
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But
, it can’t do any wonder
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just
by itself. It needs several performers and artists to
actually
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make
it work, and a TV
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presenter
is one such performer who
undoubtedly
plays an
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important
role in making things interesting for us.
Anyway
,
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today
, I would like to
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talk
about one such TV
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presenter
whom I
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know
and admire a lot.

The name of this TV
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presenter
is Jon Stewart.
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Being born
in 1962, Jon Stewart
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started
his career as a stand-up American comedian from 1993. Since then, he never
really
had to look back as his career as a TV personality
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only
grew more and more popular among his audience while hosting
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shows
like “The daily
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show”
(an American late-night
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talk
and news satire television
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programme
, describing itself as a fake news
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programme
.

The Daily
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Show
draws its
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comedy
and satire from recent news stories, political figures, media organizations, and
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often
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uses
self-referential
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humour
as
well
), The
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comedy
Central (
also
an American pay television channel which
is geared
for mature audiences and carries
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comedy
programming in the form of both original, licensed, and syndicated series, stand-up
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comedy
specials, and feature films).

Jon Stewart, one of the most popular and prolific TV
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presenters
of the modern times in my opinion,
also
hosted a
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show
called “The John Stewart
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Show”
, which
also
was a late-night
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comedy
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show
.
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Anyway
, Jon Stewart has his
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own
way of
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presenting
his
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shows
, which seems
so
controversial and
yet
so
articulate in substance and appeal.

Anyway
, I like Jon Stewart,
primarily
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because
I have never
really
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seen
any other TV
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presenter
or personality to bring the “truth” out in such satirical and cruel fashion. I
also
like the fact that when he
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presents
his
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comedy
, how somehow manages to
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keep
his audience dead quiet in front of him with his extraordinary charm and wit.
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I
also
like him
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because
he is a multi-talented person. In fact, he is
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only
a stand-out comedian
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but
also
a director, producer, writer and political commentator.
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Sample Answer
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2: Radio
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programmes
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use
the
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presenter
more
frequently
than TV
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programmes
in our country and one such
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radio
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presenter
whom I like
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very
much is (…say a name…).
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S/he
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presents
the
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weather
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updates
every 2 hours on the ABC
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radio
. We, as listeners of the
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radio
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programmes
,
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know
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very
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little
personal information about the
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radio
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presenters
and the person I am talking about would be around 25 years
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old
and is a full-time
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radio
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presenter
.
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S/he
is
currently
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presenting
the
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weather
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updates
, which is a program called
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‘Weather
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Today’
and I find his
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presenting
the program
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very
informative and interesting.

Since
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s/he
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presents
the
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weather
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updates
,
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s/he
mostly
depends on the
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weather
reports provided to him/her and
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sometimes
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s/he
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makes
his/her
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own
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thought
and
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some
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humour
in the presentation.

S/he has an attractive and
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clear
voice and that
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makes
the information
easily
listenable. He has a
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different
style of
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presenting
the weather-related data and
mainly
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because
of that the
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‘Weather
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today’
program has gained its popularity.
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S/he
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describes
the
overall
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weather
condition based on
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different
locations of the country and then gives
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some
tips to the listeners.

I find his/ her
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weather
report interesting and informative that’s why I like this
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radio
reporter
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very
much.
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Sometimes
I tune on to the ABC
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Radio
channel to learn the
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updates
of the
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weather
and
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s/he
is the one to
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present
that.
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Follow-up Questions:

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-
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a
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good
presenter?

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-
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What are the necessary qualities of a
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good
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presenter
? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to
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talk
about this Cue Card would enable you to
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talk
about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
someone who has an interesting job career.
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Describe
a challenging job you
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know
about.
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.
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Describe
a part-time job you
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know
about.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
your
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favourite
TV or
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radio
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presenter
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
85Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS speaking Describe a TV or radio presenter you know about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
698 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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