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Describe a law which you like. v.1

Describe a law which you like. v. 1
Describe a law which you like. You should say: what the law is how this law is useful how you feel about this law and explain why you like this law.   Model Answer 1: Having laws allows us to protect our rights and safety in society. So, it is absolutely important that we don’t only have laws but also abide by them at every step to make sure that we don’t abuse each other and take unfair advantages of the poor and weak ones. Today, I would like to talk about one such law which I really like. This law is called the “Maintenance and Welfare of Parents and Senior Citizens Act 2007”. This legislation was enacted in 2007, initiated by the Ministry of Social Justice and Empowerment, Government of India to provide more effective provision for maintenance and welfare of parents and senior citizens. The law makes it a legal obligation for sons and daughters, and heirs to provide maintenance to senior citizens and parents, by proving a monthly allowance. I feel that this is a very timely initiative and law because it provides a simple, speedy and inexpensive mechanism for the protection of life and property of the older persons, regardless of their gender, religion, race and ethnicity. Besides, this law makes it mandatory for the children, grandchildren and other relatives to take care of maintaining the elderly citizens by applying to the courts. However, the great thing about this law is that after being passed by the parliament of India received the assent of President of India on December 29, 2007, and was published in the Gazette of India on December 31, 2007,   many states in India have already implemented the act. Anyway, I like this law because it allows our senior citizens to feel both mentally and financially secured, at a time when they are not able to do anything productive, not only for their society but also for themselves. Besides, the law also goes a long way to repay back some of the contributions of our elderly citizens who have worked tirelessly for their entire life in order to benefit our society and country.   All in all, I think that it is a great law to prove the fact that we live in a civilized society who take care of each other. Sample Answer 2: The law that prevents child labour is the one I really appreciate and like. The law regarding child labour prevents employers from engaging anyone below 18 years old to be engaged in any work that possesses a threat to the child. Though I am not an employer and do not face the situation where I need to decide whether I should involve a child to such work, I should not say if I abide by this law or not. Nevertheless, I fully support the law and would never violate it. If I am even remotely involved in abiding by this law, I would definitely obey this law. I feel that this is an important law and everybody should abide by this law. Children are our next generation and their safety should be our priority. So we should never engage them in hazardous work and should make sure that they are getting the proper education. Though the government and the parents of those kids have a responsibility to nurture them and ensure their education, sometimes it is beyond their control and each of us should make sure that we are not violating this law. I like this law because it prevents the greedy employers to engage the children in hazardous and dangerous works because of the low payment they need to pay these children. The children who should be at school and in the playground should not get involved in works that possess dangers to them. Since this law strictly prohibits the citizens from doing such a thing that ruin the children future, I really feel great respect for this law.   Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Q. What international law should be applied all over the world? Q. Are policemen popular in your country? Q. Who are more popular, the lawyers or the police? Q. Why we should follow the rules strictly? Q. What can be done to motivate people so that they abide by the rules and law? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a rule or law that you feel is important. Describe a law that you would introduce to make your city a better place. Describe a law that you think should be strictly implemented. Describe an important law in your country. Describe a rule or law that you follow strictly. Describe a recently introduced law in your country.
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Describe
a
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law
which you like. You should say: what the
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law
is how this
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law
is useful how you
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feel
about this
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law
and
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explain
why you like this
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law
.
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Model Answer 1:

Having
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laws
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allows
us to protect our rights and safety in
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society
.
So
, it is
absolutely
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important
that we don’t
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only
have
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laws
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but
also
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abide
by them at every step to
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make
sure that we don’t abuse each other and take unfair advantages of the poor and weak ones.
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Today
, I would like to talk about one such
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law
which I
really
like.

This
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law
is called
the “Maintenance and Welfare of
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Parents
and
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Senior
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Citizens
Act 2007”. This legislation
was enacted
in 2007, initiated by the Ministry of Social Justice and Empowerment,
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Government
of India to provide more effective provision for maintenance and welfare of
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parents
and
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senior
citizens.

The
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law
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makes
it a legal obligation for sons and daughters, and heirs to provide maintenance to
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senior
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citizens
and
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parents
, by proving a monthly allowance. I
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feel
that this is a
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very
timely initiative and
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law
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because
it provides a simple, speedy and inexpensive mechanism for the protection of life and property of the older persons, regardless of their gender, religion, race and ethnicity.
Besides
, this
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law
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makes
it mandatory for the
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children
, grandchildren and other relatives to take care of maintaining the elderly
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citizens
by applying to the courts.
However
, the great thing about this
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law
is that after
being passed
by the parliament of India received the assent of President of India on December 29, 2007, and
was published
in the Gazette of India on December 31, 2007,
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many
states in India have already implemented the act.

Anyway
, I like this
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law
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because
it
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allows
our
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senior
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citizens
to
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feel
both mentally and
financially
secured, at a time when they are not able to do anything productive, not
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only
for their
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society
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but
also
for themselves.
Besides
, the
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law
also
goes a long way to repay back
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some of the
contributions of our elderly
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citizens
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who
have worked
tirelessly
for their entire life in order to benefit our
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society
and
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country
.
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All in all, I
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think
that it is a great
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law
to prove the fact that we
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live
in a civilized
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society
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who
take care of each other.

Sample Answer 2:

The
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law
that
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prevents
child
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labour
is the one I
really
appreciate and like. The
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law
regarding child
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labour
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prevents
employers from engaging anyone below 18 years
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old
to
be engaged
in any
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work
that possesses a threat to the child.

Though I am not an employer and do not face the situation where I need to decide whether I should involve a child to such
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work
, I should not say if I
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abide
by this
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law
or not.
Nevertheless
, I
fully
support the
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law
and would never violate it. If I am even
remotely
involved in abiding by this
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law
, I would definitely obey this law.

I
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feel
that this is an
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important
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law
and everybody should
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abide
by this
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law
.
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Children
are our
next
generation and their safety should be our priority.
So
we should never engage them in hazardous
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work
and should
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make
sure that they are getting the proper education. Though the
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government
and the
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parents
of those kids have a responsibility to nurture them and ensure their education,
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sometimes
it is beyond their control and each of us should
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make
sure that we are not violating this law.

I like this
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law
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because
it
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prevents
the greedy employers to engage the
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children
in hazardous and
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dangerous
works
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because
of the low payment they need to pay these
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children
. The
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children
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who
should be at school and in the playground should not
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get
involved in works that possess
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dangers
to them. Since this
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law
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strictly
prohibits the
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citizens
from doing such a thing that ruin the
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children
future, I
really
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feel
great respect for this
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law
.
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Part 3
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
Two-way discussion: Q. What international
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law
should
be applied
all over the world? Q. Are policemen popular in your
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country
? Q.
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Who
are more popular, the lawyers or the police?
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Q
. Why we should follow the
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rules
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strictly
?
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Q
. What can
be done
to motivate
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people
so
that they
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abide
by the
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rules
and
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law
? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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rule
or
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law
that you
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feel
is
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important
.
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Describe
a
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law
that you would introduce to
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make
your city a better place.
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Describe
a
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law
that you
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think
should be
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strictly
implemented.
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Describe
an
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important
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law
in your
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country
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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rule
or
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law
that you follow
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strictly
.
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Describe
a recently introduced
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law
in your
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country
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
104Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a law which you like. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
804 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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