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Describe a hobby you had in your childhood. v.1

Describe a hobby you had in your childhood. v. 1
Describe a hobby you had in your childhood. You should say: what hobby it was how you adopted this hobby why you liked doing this and explain why you no longer have this hobby.   Model Answer 1: This is such a tough topic for me because, frankly speaking, I was more of a “homely” child who didn’t exactly like to get out of his home except for just going to school. In other words, I didn’t really have many hobbies, which required me to go outside of the home, other than watching cartoons. Then again, watching cartoon itself can also be considered as a hobby. Isn’t it? Not sure, why exactly I adopted this hobby, but I guess that it must have something to do with the cat that I raised as my pet. So, when I first saw “Tom and Jerry” (the famous Disney land cartoon) and found out that the cat named “Tom” was getting into trouble just like my little pet cat, I became hooked to it. After that, of course, I have seen many, many other cartoons, but I never found them as funny as “Tom and Jerry”. But that didn’t stop me from watching those cartoons during my childhood because they always stimulated my mind and brain to draw some sort of parallel between a real world, in which we live, and the imaginary world, in which the cartoon characters live, only to find out, of course, that the world, in which we live, is not as rosy and nice as they try to portray in cartoons. I adopted this hobby also because my parents didn’t really want me to go out too much, lest I would get influenced by bad company or social elements. So, I guess that I didn’t have any other option except to keep liking watching the cartoons because it at least kept my parents happy while I also kept getting my favourite chips and the toys for my pet cat. Anyway, watching cartoon is not my hobby anymore because, for better or worse, I have grown much older to figure out that even though, cartoons can make us laugh, they don’t do anything to solve our real-world problems. Besides, now I have found much better hobbies to try and they are way more interesting than “Tom and Jerry”.   Sample Answer 2: In different stages of childhood and teenage time, different things attracted me and some of the hobbies I had then are no longer present in me. One such hobby of my childhood was collecting stamps.   I was a student of grade 4 when I first found that interesting hobby. I noticed that one of my classmates has a good collection of stamps and they were catalogued based on countries in his stamp book. The idea of collecting stamp impressed me and I thought to start collecting the stamps as well. When I start collecting stamps I had no particular reason for doing so but the idea of collecting stamps and having a good collection seemed an appealing idea to me. But later I found that it is a good hobby that helped me knowing many different cultures, persons, occasions and custom of my country and foreign countries as well. For instance, after a found a stamp of the USA that had the Statue of Liberty printed on it, I asked my teacher about it and he explained the details information of it. In another occasion, I came to know about Alfred Nobel, Marie Curie, Abraham Lincoln, Vasko da Gama etc. from the stamps I had. The stamps also have many historical events or cultural events printed on them and I learned about them as well. Some of the stamps were from countries that I never knew about and thus the stamp collection habit helped me enhance my knowledge. Apart from that, I found that kids who collect stamps have common interests and thus become close to others. One such friend of mine was David whom I would have never met unless I had this hobby in my childhood. In my childhood, I liked this hobby mostly from pure passion & excitement and the opportunity to know about different events, famous persons and events of history. I am not exactly sure how I abandoned this hobby later on when I grew up but my best possible guess would be - because of my involvement in other stuff, interest in other things and business in school and study. I remember I had the stamp collecting hobby till I was in grade 8 and later on I got busy in my study, grown interest in computer technology, start playing outdoor games and developed the habit of reading storybooks and novels. The stamp book I had in my school has been kept in a safe place by my mother and who knows someday I will give it to my son/ daughter and s/he would start collecting more stamps.     Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe something you enjoyed doing in your childhood. Describe a hobby you had. Describe an interesting activity you had in your childhood. Describe a habit or hobby you had in your teenage. Describe an activity you once had.
Describe
a
hobby
you had in your childhood. You should say: what
hobby
it was how you adopted this
hobby
why you liked doing this and
explain
why you no longer have this
hobby
.
 
Model Answer 1:

This is such a tough
topic
for me
because
,
frankly
speaking, I was more of a “homely” child who didn’t exactly like to
get
out of his home
except for
just
going to school. In
other
words, I didn’t
really
have
many
hobbies
, which required me to go
outside of
the home,
other
than watching
cartoons
. Then again, watching
cartoon
itself can
also
be considered
as a
hobby
. Isn’t it?

Not sure, why exactly I adopted this
hobby
,
but
I guess
that it
must
have something to do with the cat that I raised as my pet.
So
, when I
first
saw
“Tom and Jerry” (the
famous
Disney land
cartoon)
and
found
out that the cat named “Tom” was getting into trouble
just
like my
little
pet cat, I became hooked to it. After that,
of course
, I have
seen
many
,
many
other
cartoons
,
but
I never
found
them as
funny
as “Tom and Jerry”.

But
that didn’t
stop
me from watching those
cartoons
during my childhood
because
they always stimulated my mind and brain to draw
some
sort of parallel between a real world, in which we
live
, and the imaginary world, in which the
cartoon
characters
live
,
only
to find out,
of course
, that the world, in which we
live
, is not as rosy and nice as they try to portray in
cartoons
. I adopted this
hobby
also
because
my parents didn’t
really
want me to go out too much, lest I would
get
influenced by
bad
company
or social elements.
So
,
I guess
that I didn’t have any
other
option except to
keep
liking watching the
cartoons
because
it at least
kept
my parents happy while I
also
kept
getting my
favourite
chips and the toys for my pet cat.

Anyway
, watching
cartoon
is not my
hobby
anymore
because
, for better or worse, I have grown much older to figure out that
even though
,
cartoons
can
make
us laugh, they don’t do anything to solve our real-world problems.
Besides
,
now
I have
found
much better
hobbies
to
try and
they are way more interesting than “Tom and Jerry”.
 
Sample Answer 2:

In
different
stages of childhood and teenage time,
different
things attracted me and
some of the
hobbies
I had then
are
no longer present in me. One such
hobby
of my childhood was
collecting
stamps
.
 
I was a student of grade 4 when I
first
found
that interesting
hobby
. I noticed that one of my classmates has a
good
collection of
stamps and
they were
catalogued
based on
countries
in his
stamp
book. The
idea
of
collecting
stamp
impressed me and I
thought
to
start
collecting
the
stamps
as
well
.

When I
start
collecting
stamps
I had no particular reason for doing
so
but
the
idea
of
collecting
stamps
and having a
good
collection seemed an appealing
idea
to me.
But
later I
found
that it is a
good
hobby
that
helped
me
knowing
many
different
cultures, persons, occasions and custom of my
country
and foreign
countries
as
well
.
For instance
, after a
found
a
stamp
of the USA that had the Statue of Liberty printed on it, I asked my teacher about
it and
he
explained
the
details
information of it. In another occasion, I came to know about Alfred Nobel, Marie Curie, Abraham Lincoln,
Vasko
da
Gama etc. from the
stamps
I had. The
stamps
also
have
many
historical
events
or cultural
events
printed on them and I learned about them as
well
.
Some of the
stamps
were from
countries
that I never knew about and
thus
the
stamp
collection habit
helped
me enhance my knowledge. Apart from that, I
found
that kids who collect
stamps
have common interests and
thus
become close to others. One such friend of mine was David whom I would have never met unless I had this
hobby
in my childhood. In my childhood, I liked this
hobby
mostly
from pure passion
&amp
; excitement and the opportunity to know about
different
events
,
famous
persons and
events
of history.

I am not exactly sure how I abandoned this
hobby
later on when I grew up
but
my best possible guess would be
-
because
of my involvement in
other
stuff, interest in
other
things and business in school and study. I remember I had the
stamp
collecting
hobby
till I was in grade 8 and later on I
got
busy in my study, grown interest in computer technology,
start
playing outdoor games and developed the habit of reading storybooks and novels.

The
stamp
book I had in my school has been
kept
in a safe place by my mother and who knows someday I will give it to my son/ daughter and s/he would
start
collecting
more
stamps
.
   
Similar Cue Card
Topics
Your ability to talk about this Cue Card
Topic
would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card
Topics
as
well
:
Describe
something you enjoyed doing in your childhood.
Describe
a
hobby
you had.
Describe
an interesting activity you had in your childhood.
Describe
a habit or
hobby
you had in your teenage.
Describe
an activity you once had.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
92Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Mistakes
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