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Describe a shopping center you often go to. v.1

Describe a shopping center you often go to. v. 1
Describe a shopping center you often go to. You should say:  where the shopping center is  how often you go there  what it looks like and explain why you often go to this shopping center. Follow-up Questions:     Will smaller shops survive in the current business system?     What are the characteristics of shopping malls and smaller shops and their difference?     What is the trend for future shopping centres, in your opinion?     Talk about Internet shopping
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center you
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often
go to. You should say:
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where the
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shopping
center is
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how
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often
you go there
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what it looks like and
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explain
why you
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often
go to this
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center. Follow-up Questions:
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Will smaller shops survive in the
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current
business system?
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What are the characteristics of
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shopping
malls and smaller shops and their difference?
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What is the trend for future
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shopping
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centres
, in your opinion?
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Talk about Internet
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shopping
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a shopping center you often go to. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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