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Describe a bad weather experience you have had. v.1

Describe a bad weather experience you have had. v. 1
Describe a bad weather experience you have had. You should say: what sort of bad weather it was when it happened where you were then and explain how it affected you. Follow-up Questions: What are the main seasons in your country? What environmental changes have you noticed in your country? What should we do to protect the environmental pollutions?   Model Answer 1: To tell the truth, as far as I am concerned, “bad weather” could mean only one thing to me, and that is “cold’ weather. But, no matter how I dislike this “cold” weather, I do have to experience it every year, just like I did about a few years ago. As I have already mentioned earlier, I don’t really like cold weather, especially, if it is associated with fog.   But, I am pretty sure that Mother Nature doesn’t really care whether I like it or not, just as it didn’t on a December morning about a few years ago when I needed to drop my uncle at the airport. As soon as I woke up in that morning and took a peek through the window, I immediately knew that it was going to be a “rough ride” on the roam for us as I could see fog all over. Still, I took my old car and hit the road after wearing all kinds of warm clothes to protect me from the onslaught of a cold winter morning in order to reach the airport as early as possible. But, despite my best efforts and intention, I was not able to reach the airport on time, because the traffic on the road was too slow due to too much fog and low visibility of the road. In fact, my uncle and I gave up the idea of catching the flight, but we still took a chance and arrived at the airport anyway. Luckily, the airport authority had understood the gravity of the situation, due to the bad weather on that day, and decided to delay the flight. Anyway, we were lucky to catch the flight, in the end, thanks to the airport authority, but we had to go through a lot of concern and frustration on the road because of bad weather, caused by extreme fog. Even worse, I even felt very nervous and scared as I almost was going to have an accident because of low visibility on the road. So, it was indeed a bad experience for me.   Model Answer 2: Well, I am from England, and in England, we love to talk about the weather! It changes all the time, and so it’s actually quite hard to think of one specific example of bad weather that I have experienced there. Even so, I can recall one particularly extraordinary day, when bad weather brought my city of Sheffield to a standstill. I am going to tell you what the weather was like, where I was when it happened and how it affected me I still shiver as I recall it! The bad weather was snow. It does snow in parts of the United Kingdom every year, and where I live in Sheffield we do always get some snow in the winter months, especially on the higher ground. I quite like snow, it can be cold and a bit inconvenient if you get a heavy snowfall, as then public transport stops and everything grinds to a halt. However, it is also really beautiful how a snowfall can turn everything white. It is fun to build snowmen, make snow angel shapes in the newly fallen snow, to go sledging in the hills and even to have a sneaky snowball fight if you are brave enough to find someone to take on. So on the whole, I like snow, I enjoy the novelty of it, and as long as you are dressed appropriately (hat, gloves, scarf, waterproof trousers and thick winter coat) it isn’t too bad. The day I’m thinking of, though was rather different. I woke up on a December morning about four years ago and the first thing I noticed was that it was really really quiet. It is hard to describe if you have never experienced it, but after a thick snowfall, everything sounds different. The sounds that you normally hear are changed by the muffling effect of the snow, but also there was no sound of traffic. The snow had fallen so deeply, those cars were stuck in driveways and buses in their depots, the only way to get about that day would be on foot. I was lucky because I only lived about two miles from work, so I could still get in. I pulled on my wellington boots, and waterproof clothes and headed off into town. I quickly discovered that this was not like any normal snowfall. The snow had fallen feet deep onto the ice, it was really treacherous even trying to walk in these conditions. Where I live in Sheffield, it is incredibly hilly. Snow ploughs had cleared the major roads, but this had exposed dangerous thick black ice underneath which was impossible to walk across. The combination of ice and steep slopes meant that I was sliding around everywhere and so was everyone else. Although at first, it was quite comical, watching people skidding about and falling over, after a while I started to be quite anxious, it was dangerous, you couldn’t even stand upright. I got to one road crossing at the top of a hill, and the road was so slippery the only way to get over it was to literally crawl across on my hands and knees. The other side of the road a complete stranger was lying down and reaching out to pull people across safely. It was so bizarre, I have never seen anything like it before or since. The roads were thick ice, but the pavements were piled high with drifts of snow up to three feet deep, I thought I’d never make it to the office that day let alone home again by nightfall! My normal walk to work would have taken me perhaps 30 minutes, but on this day it took over three times that long as I had to negotiate the tricky roads and paths. When I got there, I found only a couple of other people had made it in as well. Most people had looked out of their windows and decided it was far too dangerous to attempt the journey. I think they were right! My manager had made it in, but he quickly decided it was silly to stay, we all still had to get home safely somehow, and it was still snowing outside. I was working at a university at the time, and for the first time in its history it was declared closed, it was ridiculous to expect staff and students to make the trek in – I should have stayed in bed! We stayed at work long enough to phone people to cancel appointments and confirm we were shut, and then I had the same long trek home in the snow again. I was exhausted by the time I got back! It was quite an experience, it made me appreciate how much we should respect the elements. I felt safe at first because it was an urban environment, and usually, we don’t get much disruption due to bad weather there, but really the snow and ice made it unnavigable for the next few days. I suppose in countries where they always get a lot of snow and ice they are better prepared for it when it comes. We were certainly taken by surprise. That was my most memorable bad weather adventure. It was fun in a way, but I wouldn’t welcome that every year, plus it was freezing. It’s hard to keep smiling when you are so cold! I still love the snow – but I respect it a lot more than I used to. [ Written by - Lucy Marris, Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]
Describe
a
bad
weather
experience
you have had. You should say: what sort of
bad
weather
it was when it happened where you were then and
explain
how it
affected
you. Follow-up Questions: What are the main seasons in your country? What environmental
changes
have you noticed in your country? What should we do to protect the environmental pollutions?
 
Model Answer 1:

To
tell
the truth, as far as I
am concerned
, “
bad
weather”
could mean
only
one thing to me, and
that is
cold
weather
.
But
, no matter how I dislike this “
cold
weather
, I do
have to
experience
it every
year
,
just
like I did about a few years ago.

As I have already mentioned earlier, I don’t
really
like
cold
weather
,
especially
, if it
is associated
with
fog
.
 
But
, I am pretty sure that Mother Nature doesn’t
really
care whether I like it or not,
just
as it didn’t on a December
morning
about a few years ago when I needed to drop my uncle at the airport.

As
soon
as I woke up in that
morning
and
took
a peek through the window, I immediately knew that it was going to be a “rough ride” on the roam for us as I could
see
fog
all
over
.
Still
, I
took
my
old
car and hit the
road
after wearing all kinds of warm clothes to protect me from the onslaught of a
cold
winter
morning
in order to reach the
airport
as early as possible.
But
, despite my best efforts and intention, I was not able to reach the
airport
on
time
,
because
the traffic on the
road
was too slow due to too much
fog
and low visibility of the road.

In fact, my uncle and I gave up the
idea
of catching the flight,
but
we
still
took
a chance and arrived at the
airport
anyway
. Luckily, the
airport
authority had understood the gravity of the situation, due to the
bad
weather
on that day, and decided to delay the flight.

Anyway
, we were lucky to catch the flight, in the
end
, thanks to the
airport
authority,
but
we had to go through
a lot of
concern and frustration on the
road
because
of
bad
weather
, caused by extreme
fog
. Even worse, I even felt
very
nervous and scared as I almost was going to have an accident
because
of low visibility on the
road
.
So
, it was
indeed
a
bad
experience
for me.
 
Model Answer 2:

Well
, I am from England, and in England, we
love
to talk about the
weather
! It
changes
all the
time
, and
so
it’s
actually
quite
hard
to
think
of one specific example of
bad
weather
that I have experienced there. Even
so
, I can recall one
particularly
extraordinary day, when
bad
weather
brought my city of Sheffield to a standstill. I am going to
tell
you what the
weather
was like, where I was when it happened and how it
affected
me I
still
shiver as I recall it! The
bad
weather
was
snow
. It does
snow
in parts of the United Kingdom every
year
, and where I
live
in Sheffield we do always
get
some
snow
in the winter months,
especially
on the higher ground. I
quite
like
snow
, it can be
cold
and a bit inconvenient if you
get
a heavy
snowfall
, as then public transport
stops
and everything grinds to a halt.
However
, it is
also
really
beautiful
how a
snowfall
can turn everything white. It is fun to build snowmen,
make
snow
angel shapes in the
newly
fallen
snow
, to go sledging in the hills and even to have a sneaky snowball fight if you are brave
enough
to find someone to take on.
So
on the whole
, I like
snow
, I enjoy the novelty of it, and as
long
as you
are dressed
appropriately
(hat, gloves, scarf, waterproof trousers and
thick
winter coat) it isn’t too
bad
. The day I’m thinking of, though was
rather
different
. I woke up on a December
morning
about four years ago and the
first
thing I noticed was that it was
really
really
quiet. It is
hard
to
describe
if you have never experienced it,
but
after a
thick
snowfall
, everything sounds
different
. The sounds that you
normally
hear are
changed
by the muffling effect of the
snow
,
but
also
there was no sound of traffic. The
snow
had fallen
so
deeply
, those cars
were stuck
in driveways and buses in their depots, the
only
way to
get
about that day would be on foot. I was lucky
because
I
only
lived
about two miles from work,
so
I could
still
get
in. I pulled on my wellington boots, and waterproof clothes and headed off into town.
I
quickly
discovered that this was not like any normal
snowfall
. The
snow
had fallen feet deep onto the ice, it was
really
treacherous even trying to walk in these conditions. Where I
live
in Sheffield, it is
incredibly
hilly.
Snow
ploughs
had cleared the major
roads
,
but
this had exposed
dangerous
thick
black ice underneath which was impossible to walk across. The combination of ice and steep slopes meant that I was sliding around everywhere and
so
was everyone else. Although at
first
, it was
quite
comical, watching
people
skidding about and falling
over
, after a while I
started
to be
quite
anxious, it was
dangerous
, you couldn’t even stand upright. I
got
to one
road
crossing at the top of a hill, and the
road
was
so
slippery the
only
way to
get
over
it was to
literally
crawl across on my hands and knees. The other side of the
road
a complete stranger was lying down and reaching out to pull
people
across
safely
. It was
so
bizarre, I have never
seen
anything like it
before
or since. The
roads
were
thick
ice,
but
the pavements
were piled
high with drifts of
snow
up to three feet deep, I
thought
I’d never
make
it to the office that day
let
alone home again by nightfall! My normal walk to work would have taken me perhaps 30 minutes,
but
on this day it
took
over
three
times
that
long
as I had to negotiate the tricky
roads
and paths. When I
got
there, I found
only
a couple of other
people
had made it in as
well
. Most
people
had looked out of their windows and decided it was far too
dangerous
to attempt the journey. I
think
they were
right
! My manager had made it in,
but
he
quickly
decided it was silly to stay, we all
still
had to
get
home
safely
somehow, and it was
still
snowing outside. I was working at a university at the
time
, and for the
first
time
in its history it
was declared
closed, it was ridiculous to
expect
staff and students to
make
the trek in
I should have stayed in bed! We stayed at work
long
enough
to phone
people
to cancel appointments and confirm we
were shut
, and then I had the same
long
trek home in the
snow
again. I
was exhausted
by the
time
I
got
back! It was
quite
an
experience
, it made me appreciate how much we should respect the elements. I felt safe at
first
because
it was an urban environment, and
usually
, we don’t
get
much disruption due to
bad
weather
there,
but
really
the
snow
and ice made it
unnavigable
for the
next
few days. I suppose in countries where they always
get
a lot of
snow
and ice they are better prepared for it when it
comes
. We were
certainly
taken by surprise. That was my most memorable
bad
weather
adventure. It was fun in a way,
but
I wouldn’t welcome that every
year
, plus it was freezing. It’s
hard
to
keep
smiling when you are
so
cold
! I
still
love
the
snow
but
I respect it a lot more than I
used
to.
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
, Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
24Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
131Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

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