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Describe a radio program that you listened recently. v.1

Describe a radio program that you listened recently. v. 1
Describe a radio program that you listened recently. You should say: what was it about when you where you listened to it how was it presented and explain if it was interesting or not. Model Answer: I usually listen to the radio while I drive my car and the traffic update and hourly news programs are very useful in my opinion during driving. The traffic update program "Busy Hours" is one such program that I recently listened to. This program is hosted by two renowned radio jockeys and the program gives latest traffic conditions of the main roads of our city. I listened to week last week when I was driving back to home from my uncle's house. It was around 6: 30 pm and I was in the Jefferson Street at that time. The host of the program started it and then talked to their news collectors from various places and they were updating the traffic conditions. In my opinion, the host and the news collectors did really well in terms of giving the traffic updates of the road. They were even saying humorous things to entertain the listeners. To me, this is a very handy and interesting program that I listen to. This radio program broadcasts the live traffic conditions of the various roads and highways and thus informs the people which roads to avoid and which roads to take. I find this information very helpful while driving on the roads. The concept of the program and the presentation of this program are very handy and interesting in my opinion.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a TV program you have recently watched. Describe your favourite TV or radio program. Describe a news program that you like.
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a
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radio
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program
that you
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listened
recently. You should say: what was it about when you where you
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listened
to it how was it presented and
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explain
if it was interesting or not. Model Answer: I
usually
listen to the
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radio
while I drive my car and the
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traffic
update and hourly
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news
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programs
are
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very
useful in my opinion during driving. The
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traffic
update
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program
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Busy Hours
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is one such
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program
that I recently
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listened
to. This
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program
is hosted
by two renowned
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radio
jockeys and the
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program
gives
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latest
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traffic
conditions of the main
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roads
of our city. I
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listened
to week last week when I was driving back to home from my uncle's
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house
. It was around 6: 30
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pm and
I was in the Jefferson Street at that time. The host of the
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program
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started
it and then talked to their
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news
collectors from various
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places and
they were updating the
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traffic
conditions. In my opinion, the host and the
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news
collectors did
really
well
in terms of giving the
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traffic
updates of the
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road
. They were even saying humorous things to entertain the listeners. To me, this is a
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very
handy and interesting
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program
that I listen to. This
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radio
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program
broadcasts the
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live
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traffic
conditions of the various
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roads
and highways and
thus
informs the
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people
which
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roads
to avoid and which
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roads
to take. I find this information
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very
helpful while driving on the
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roads
. The concept of the
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program
and the presentation of this
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program
are
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very
handy and interesting in my opinion.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a TV
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program
you have recently
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watched
.
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your
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favourite
TV or
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radio
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program
.
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Describe
a
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news
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program
that you like.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a radio program that you listened recently. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
309 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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