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Describe a playground or park where you played. v.1

Describe a playground or park where you played. v. 1
Describe a playground or park where you played. You should say: Where it is When you played there Who you played with And explain whether you liked this place or not. Sample Answer: I grew up in a suburban area and there were plenty of parks, fields and playgrounds. But among those places, the school playground where I used to play often is one of my most favourite. This was a large open field in front of our school and I played there more than 4 years from my grade 3 till grade 7. We were not allowed to play in this playground when we were supposed to attend the classes. Apart from that, we were allowed to play there whenever we wished. I was around 7 years old when I got admitted in the City International School and I was happy to have many good friends there. We used to play there during the break period and even sometimes after the school. I still remember 3-4 friends of mine from my grade 4 who were my regular playmates in this playground. The childhood was magical and we enjoyed playing everything we knew we could play. We even enjoyed the aimless running and hide-and-seek games we played there. There were some special toys and playing tools arranged by the school when we were promoted to class 5 but those were mostly for kids from grade 1 and 2. So we did not use these toys and tools while paying as we knew that those are only for small kids. The friends I played with were my classmates as well and we were very intimate at that time. I liked playing in this playground very much. Actuality I liked it so much that I still remember this playground. I have played in many other playgrounds but while thinking about them, I found I miss this particular playground from my early school more than many other places where I played. That’s why I picked it to talk about. I guess I will never forget my days of childhood and my memory regarding this playground where I often played with my classmates and friends. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics: Describe a playground in your area. Describe a park or playground you have recently visited. Describe a place where you often go in the evening. Describe a place in your hometown. Describe a place from your childhood. Describe a place where you parents took you to. Describe a school playground you liked. Describe something from your childhood.
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Describe
a
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playground
or park where you
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played
. You should say: Where it is When you
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played
there Who you
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played
with And
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explain
whether you liked this
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place
or not. Sample Answer:

I grew up in a suburban area and there were
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plenty
of parks, fields and
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playgrounds
.
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But
among those
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places
, the
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school
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playground
where I
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used
to
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play
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often
is one of my most
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favourite
. This was a large open field in front of our
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school
and I
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played
there more than 4 years from my
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grade
3 till
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grade
7. We were not
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allowed
to
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play
in this
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playground
when we
were supposed
to attend the classes. Apart from that, we were
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allowed
to
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play
there whenever we wished. I was around 7 years
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old
when I
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got
admitted in the City International
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School and
I was happy to have
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many
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good
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friends
there. We
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used
to
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play
there during the break period and even
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sometimes
after the
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school
. I
still
remember 3-4
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friends
of mine from my
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grade
4 who were my regular playmates in this
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playground
. The childhood was
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magical and
we enjoyed playing everything we knew we could
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play
. We even enjoyed the aimless running and
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hide
-and-seek games we
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played
there. There were
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some
special toys and playing tools arranged by the
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school
when we
were promoted
to
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class
5
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but
those were
mostly
for kids from
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grade
1 and 2.
So
we did not
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use
these toys and tools while paying as we knew that those are
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only
for
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small
kids. The
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friends
I
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played
with were my classmates as
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well and
we were
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very
intimate at that time. I liked playing in this
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playground
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very
much. Actuality I liked it
so
much that I
still
remember this
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playground
. I have
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played
in
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many
other
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playgrounds
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but
while thinking about them, I found I miss this particular
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playground
from my early
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school
more than
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many
other
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places
where I
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played
. That’s why I picked it to talk about.
I guess
I will never forget my days of childhood and my memory regarding this
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playground
where I
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often
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played
with my classmates and
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friends
. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
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playground
in your area.
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Describe
a park or
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playground
you have recently visited.
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Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
where you
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often
go in the evening.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
in your hometown.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
from your childhood.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
where you
The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "parent"
parents
took you to.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
playground
you liked.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something from your childhood.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a playground or park where you played. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
443 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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