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Describe a factory or office you have visited. v.1

Describe a factory or office you have visited. v. 1
Describe a factory or office you have visited. You should say: What type of office it is What types of people work there Why you went there and explain what this factory or office produces or work for. Sample Answer: A few months back I went to a call centre office named ‘Tech 5’ where my friend Ronald used to work. It was a huge office with more than 300 employees and was on the entire 3rd floor of the Lotus building. This company is the largest call centre in our city and has employed many students and professionals. There were two types of employees three: Full time & Part time and students mostly worked there as part time employees. Students with good communication skill in English were eligible to be interviewed there. After getting employed, the students could choose their preferred shift for work. The full-time employees were mostly in managerial, administrative and IT networking jobs while the call centre agents mostly were mostly students and fresh graduates. There were some middle aged call centre agents who took this field as their long term profession and worked there from 9 to 5. I went to meet my friend Ronald who was in office at that time. He asked me to lend him some story books and was supposed to meet me near my home. But in the evening he called me to meet him in his office so that I could give him the books as well as talk to his manager regarding a part time job I was looking for. This company mainly relied on outsourcing and call centre jobs. The agents in this office were mostly young people who either called the end users for selling products or services or received calls to give certain information to customers or to record their complaints about a particular product or service. The office used to work for large multinational companies to provide the customer care service or to promote their products or services. In return, they would earn the commissions or a contracted amount. They also had a software development and web designing team who used to work for the direct clients.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe an office you know about. Describe a business or office from your hometown. Describe a workplace you liked very much. Describe a friend’s office you have visited. Describe a factory or office you have recently visited.
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Describe
a factory or
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office
you have visited. You should say: What type of
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office
it is What types of
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people
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work
there Why you went there and
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explain
what this factory or
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office
produces or
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work
for. Sample Answer:

A few months back I went to a
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call
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centre
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office
named ‘Tech 5’ where my friend Ronald
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used
to
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work
. It was a huge
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office
with more than 300
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employees
and was on the entire 3rd floor of the Lotus building. This
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company
is the largest
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call
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centre
in our city and has employed
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many
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students
and professionals. There were two types of
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employees
three: Full
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time
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&amp
; Part
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time
and
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students
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mostly
worked there as part
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time
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employees
.
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Students
with
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good
communication
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skill
in English were eligible to
be interviewed
there. After getting employed, the
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students
could choose their preferred shift for
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work
. The full-time
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employees
were
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mostly
in managerial, administrative and IT networking jobs while the
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call
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centre
agents
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mostly
were
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mostly
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students
and fresh graduates. There were
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some
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middle aged
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call
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centre
agents
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who
took this field as their long term profession and worked there from 9 to 5. I went to
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meet
my friend Ronald
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who
was in
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office
at that
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time
. He asked me to lend him
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some
story books and
was supposed
to
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meet
me near my home.
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But
in the evening he called me to
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meet
him in his
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office
so
that I could give him the books as
well
as talk to his manager regarding a part
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time
job I was looking for. This
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company
mainly
relied on outsourcing and
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call
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centre
jobs. The agents in this
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office
were
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mostly
young
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people
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who
either called the
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end
users for selling products or
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services
or received
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calls
to give certain information to customers or to record their complaints about a particular product or
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service
. The
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office
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used
to
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work
for large multinational
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companies
to provide the customer care
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service
or to promote their products or
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services
. In return, they would earn the commissions or a contracted amount. They
also
had a software development and web designing team
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who
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used
to
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work
for the direct clients.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
an
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office
you know
about.
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Describe
a business or
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office
from your hometown.
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Describe
a workplace you liked
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very
much.
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Describe
a friend’s
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office
you have visited.
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Describe
a factory or
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office
you have recently visited.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a factory or office you have visited. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
425 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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