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Describe a challenging job/ profession you know about. v.1

Describe a challenging job/ profession you know about. v. 1
Describe a challenging job/ profession you know about. You should say: What it is What qualification it requires What are the responsibilities of this job And explain why you think it as challenging. Sample Answer: In my opinion being a Police officer is a challenging job. In fact, I can clearly understand this from my acquaintances with a friend of my brother whose name is Jacob and who works a police officer in our city. To work in the police force, someone must be a by-born citizen of this country and has to finish at least 12 grades. Then comes the physical fitness and to be allowed to be a police officer, someone must have minimum 5 feet 7-inch height and a good physical structure and work stamina. The background of any individual has to be neat and clean to be the part of the police department as the authority always does a background check of the applicant. There is a very rigid training that every selected individual has to pass to be finally appointed in the workforce. The responsibilities are huge and honest. Every police officer takes the oath to serve the country and people. Their primary responsibility is to establish the law in the society and track the people who do not abide by the laws. They take challenges to find a criminal, they try to keep the peace in the society, they work as the protector of the good people and they hunt down the bad guys. Being honest and maintaining the vows a police officer takes at the beginning of his/her recruitment is a pretty challenging task. There are plenty of opportunities to be corrupted and earning illegal money and a good police officer has to refrain him/ her from this. The criminals in a society often are the powerful people and a police officer has to take risks to control those criminals. The officer must be ready to work any time needed and often stays away from home and family for a long. In most of the countries, the police officers are not high paying employees of the country but the challenges they take (both psychologically and physically) are greater than most of the other professionals. From my conversation with Jacob (the friend of my brother), I learned many daring and puzzling challenges he has faced. He has even taken challenges that could have easily killed him and yet he is not always honoured by people. This is a professional where new challenges and dangers always wait in the road.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a profession of job you know about. Describe a person who takes risks. Describe a noble profession you know about. Describe a person who is honest. Describe an important profession in your country.
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a
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challenging
job/
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profession
you know
about. You should say: What it is What qualification it requires What are the responsibilities of this job And
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explain
why you
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think
it as
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challenging
. Sample Answer:

In my opinion being a
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Police
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officer
is a
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challenging
job. In fact, I can
clearly
understand this from my acquaintances with a friend of my brother whose name is Jacob and
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who
works a
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police
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officer
in our city. To
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work
in the
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police
force, someone
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must
be a by-born citizen of this
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country
and
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has to
finish at least 12 grades. Then
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comes
the physical fitness and to be
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allowed
to be a
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police
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officer
, someone
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must
have minimum
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5 feet
7-inch height and a
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good
physical structure and
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work
stamina. The background of any individual
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has to
be neat and clean to be the part of the
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police
department as the authority always does a background
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check
of the applicant. There is a
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very
rigid training that every selected individual
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has to
pass to be
finally
appointed in the workforce. The responsibilities are huge and honest. Every
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police
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officer
takes the oath to serve the
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country
and
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people
. Their primary responsibility is to establish the law in the society and
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track
the
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people
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who
do not abide by the laws. They take
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challenges
to find a criminal, they try to
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keep
the peace in the society, they
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work
as the protector of the
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good
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people and
they hunt down the
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bad
guys. Being honest and maintaining the vows a
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police
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officer
takes at the beginning of his/her recruitment is a pretty
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challenging
task. There are
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plenty
of opportunities to
be corrupted
and earning illegal money and a
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good
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police
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officer
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has to
refrain him/ her from this. The criminals in a society
The adverb 'often' usually goes after the verb 'are'.
often are
the powerful
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people
and a
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police
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officer
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has to
take
The verb 'risks' is used with the gerund form: "risks controlling".
risks to control
those criminals. The
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officer
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must
be ready to
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work
any time needed and
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often
stays away from home and family for a long. In most of the
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countries
, the
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police
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officers
are not high paying employees of the
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country
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but
the
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challenges
they take (both
psychologically
and
physically
) are greater than most of the other professionals. From my conversation with Jacob (the friend of my brother), I learned
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many
daring and puzzling
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challenges
he has faced. He has even taken
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challenges
that could have
easily
killed
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him and
yet
he is not always
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honoured
by
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people
. This is a professional where new
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challenges
and
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dangers
always wait in the road.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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profession
of job
you know
about.
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Describe
a person
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who
takes
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risks
.
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Describe
a noble
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profession
you know
about.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a person
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who
is honest.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an
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important
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profession
in your
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country
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
56Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a challenging job/ profession you know about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
484 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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