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Describe a bus or train station in your city. v.1

Describe a bus or train station in your city. v. 1
Describe a bus or train station in your city. You should say: Where it is What types of transportation are available there How you can go there and explain why people use this station. Model Answer: I live at (…say the area name…) in the (…city name…) and this is 15 minutes driving distance from the bus terminal. This is one of the busiest bus stations in our city. The area where I live in has a large number of populations who use this station to go to different places every day. This bus station is beside the old bridge area and adjacent to the gas station and cantonment school. Usually, public buses, double deck buses, taxies and rent-a-cars are available on this station. People can hire large private cars in case they want to hire it for the entire day for long distance journey. Each day almost 5 thousand people go to different places from this station. I can reach the station in 15 minutes if I drive my car or around 20 minutes if I take a taxi. It would take around an hour to reach there if I want on foot. Alternatively, I can take a tram bus to reach there and it takes around 25 minutes. Usually, I go to my workplace/ university from this bus station and to reach this bus station I rely on the public bus that I can catch just in front of my home. This is the largest bus station in our area and buses travel almost in every direction from here. People around this area come to this station first to take a car to go to long distances. Even the inter-bus city service is available only in this station and people have to get at this station first to go outside our city. The train station is far away from our city and that’s why people in our area mostly rely on this bus station to go to different parts of the city or even outside the city.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics: Describe a public place in your city. Describe a place where you often go to. Describe a bus station you have seen. Describe a crowded area in your hometown. Describe a bus station in your hometown.
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Describe
a bus or train
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station
in your city. You should say: Where it is What types of transportation are available there How you can go there and
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explain
why
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people
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use
this
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station
. Model Answer:

I
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live
at (…say the
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area
name…) in the (…city name…) and this is 15 minutes driving distance from the bus terminal. This is one of the busiest bus
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stations
in our city. The
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area
where I
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live
in has
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a large number of
populations who
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use
this
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station
to go to
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different
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places
every day. This bus
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station
is beside the
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old
bridge
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area
and adjacent to the gas
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station
and cantonment school.
Usually
, public buses, double deck buses,
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taxies
and rent-a-cars are available on this
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station
.
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People
can hire large private cars in case they want to hire it for the entire day for long distance journey. Each day almost 5 thousand
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people
go to
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different
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places
from this
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station
. I can
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reach
the
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station
in 15 minutes if I drive my car or
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around
20 minutes if I take a taxi. It would take
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around
an hour to
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reach
there if I want on foot.
Alternatively
, I can take a tram bus to
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reach
there and it takes
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around
25 minutes.
Usually
, I go to my workplace/ university from this bus
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station
and to
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reach
this bus
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station
I rely on the public bus that I can catch
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just
in front of my home. This is the largest bus
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station
in our
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area
and buses travel almost in every direction from here.
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People
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around
this
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area
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come
to this
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station
first
to take a car to go to long distances. Even the inter-bus city service is available
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only
in this
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station
and
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people
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have to
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get
at this
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station
first
to go outside our city. The train
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station
is far away from our city and that’s why
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people
in our
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area
mostly
rely on this bus
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station
to go to
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different
parts of the city or even outside the city.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics:
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Describe
a public
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place
in your city.
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Describe
a
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place
where you
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often
go to.
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Describe
a bus
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station
you have
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seen
.
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Describe
a crowded
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area
in your hometown.
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Describe
a bus
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station
in your hometown.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a bus or train station in your city. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
401 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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