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Describe a piece of furniture you have at home. v.1

Describe a piece of furniture you have at home. v. 1
Describe a piece of furniture you have at home. You should say: What it is How long you have it What are the usages of it And explain why you have it at your home. Sample Answer: I stay at our own house and my room still gives the impression of a student’s room though I have recently finished my graduation. My favourite piece of furniture at my home belongs to my room and it is the wooden bookshelf. This is, in fact, a large bookshelf and it comprises all of my favourite books. I have this wooden bookshelf for the last 3 years after my parents bought it for me. Initially, I had only a few books to keep there and most of the part of the shelf remained empty. But over the time, my book collection increased and the bookshelf is not almost full. There are 4 layers of this wooden bookshelf and the front side is made of glass. I read plenty of story books and often visit the bookshops to purchase new books. This bookshelf offers a good way of arranging all of my books and secures them with the lock system it has. I often look at my bookshelf and feel kind of proud to have a good collection of books. My parents bought me this piece of furniture after noticing that I keep books almost everywhere in my room and they thought it would be a good idea to buy me a bookshelf where I would be able to neatly arrange my books. This bookshelf became very handy for me as it helped me keeping my books arranged.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something you own. Describe an important possession you have at home. Describe something you are planning to buy. Describe a gift you remember well.
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Describe
a piece of furniture you have at home. You should say: What it is How long you have it What are the usages of it And
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explain
why you have it at your home. Sample Answer:

I stay at our
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own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my
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room
still
gives the impression of a student’s
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room
though I have recently finished my graduation. My
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favourite
piece of furniture at my home belongs to my
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room
and it is the wooden bookshelf. This is, in fact, a large bookshelf and it comprises all of my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
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books
. I have this wooden bookshelf for the last 3 years after my parents
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bought
it for me.
Initially
, I had
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only
a few
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books
to
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keep
there and most of the part of the shelf remained empty.
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But
over the time, my
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book
collection increased and the bookshelf is not almost full. There are 4 layers of this wooden bookshelf and the front side
is made
of glass. I read
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plenty
of story
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books
and
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often
visit the bookshops to
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purchase
new
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books
. This bookshelf offers a
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good
way of arranging all of my
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books
and secures them with the lock system it has. I
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often
look at my bookshelf and feel kind of proud to have a
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good
collection of
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books
. My parents
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bought
me this piece of furniture after noticing that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
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books
almost everywhere in my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
room and
they
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thought
it would be a
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good
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idea
to
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buy
me a bookshelf where I would be able to
neatly
arrange my
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books
. This bookshelf became
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very
handy for me as it
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helped
me
The verb 'me' is used with an infinitive: "to keep" or "keep".
keeping
my
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books
arranged.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
something you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
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Describe
an
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important
possession you have at home.
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Describe
something you are planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a gift you remember
well
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a piece of furniture you have at home. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
324 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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