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Describe a place where you like to study (either indoor or outdoor). v.1

Describe a place where you like to study (either indoor or outdoor). v. 1
Describe a place where you like to study (either indoor or outdoor). You should say: where it is when you study there what you study there and explain why you like to study there. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: Do I like to study indoor or outdoor? Well, that depends on what I am studying, and how difficult is the reading materials. But, if I am asked to pick one, I would certainly go with “indoor”, which means either it has to be in a room or in a library. This time, I will go with a library – a public library that is. My favourite public library is not really very far from where I live. Conveniently located at the centre of my home town, it is only about 10 minutes drive from my home if riding in a car. Being considered as one of the largest libraries in my country with a huge – I mean really “huge”- collection of books, you can pretty much read anything and everything there. But, for me, it is all about research works, as a post-graduate student, for my chemistry thesis paper. I go there to study mostly during the evening times since it is a lot less crowded during that period. I like to study in our public library mainly because I get to study a lot of materials there when I am really in a “mood”.   But, when I become a bit exhausted after studying chemistry and its formulas, I can easily read other kinds of materials whether it is a newspaper or journal. I can even watch some educational movies! I like to study there also because it offers a great research environment with almost no distraction to deal with. In fact, the library has a separate research corner for research students like us. Finally, I go to study there also because I become a bit more motivated and inspired after seeing so many students studying around me. So, I guess it is fair to say that my library is very much like a trusted study partner which is always there for me when I need it.
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Describe
a place where you like to
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(either indoor or outdoor). You should say: where it is when you
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study
there what you
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there and
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explain
why you like to
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there. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer: Do I like to
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indoor or outdoor?
Well
, that depends on what I am studying, and how difficult is the reading materials.
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But
, if I
am asked
to pick one, I would
certainly
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go with
“indoor”, which means either it
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has to
be in a room or in a library. This time, I will
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go with
a library
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–
a public library
that is
.

My
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favourite
public library is not
really
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very
far from where I
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live
.
Conveniently
located at the
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centre
of my home town, it is
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only
about 10 minutes drive from my home if riding in a car.
Being considered
as one of the largest libraries in my country with a huge
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–
I mean
really
“huge”- collection of books, you can pretty much read anything and everything there.
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But
, for me, it is all about
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research
works, as a post-graduate student, for my chemistry thesis paper. I go there to
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study
mostly
during the evening times since it is a lot less crowded during that period.

I like to
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study
in our public library
mainly
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because
I
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get
to
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study
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a lot of
materials there when I am
really
in a “mood”.
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But
, when I become a bit exhausted after studying chemistry and its formulas, I can
easily
read other kinds of materials whether it is a newspaper or journal. I can even
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watch
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some
educational movies! I like to
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study
there
also
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because
it offers a great
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research
environment with almost no distraction to deal with. In fact, the library has a separate
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research
corner for
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research
students like us.
Finally
, I go to
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study
there
also
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because
I become a bit more motivated and inspired after seeing
so
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many
students studying around me.
So
,
I guess
it is
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fair
to say that my library is
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very
much like a trusted
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study
partner which is always there for me when I need it.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a place where you like to study (either indoor or outdoor). v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
395 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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