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Describe a meal that you enjoyed at a restaurant. v.1

Describe a meal that you enjoyed at a restaurant. v. 1
Describe a meal that you enjoyed at a restaurant. You should say: where the restaurant was what food you ordered who was/were with you and explain why you enjoyed it so much. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: After eating home-cooked food for a long period of time, when you get an opportunity to eat your favourite dish at one of your favourite restaurants with your friends and relatives, you know that you are in luck to have a great time. The same happened to me when some of my friends invited me to eat one of my all-time favourite dishes at one of my favourite restaurants during the weekend, I knew that I was going to enjoy it all! It was a very famous and busy restaurant called “Dandylion”, located in the city of Toronto, which was not very far away from where I lived at that time. Since it was a really busy food place, we needed to reserve for our seats well in advance in order to avoid the unnecessary waiting period. Anyway, finally the much-awaited weekend had arrived, and we were ready to enjoy our “weekend special” at "Dandylion" restaurant. We all ordered for our Sirloin Steaks and mashed potatoes with some fresh salads on the side.   While our main dishes were being prepared, I and my friends were busy eating the desserts which were some of the best in the town. Of course, our Sirloin steaks arrived while we were still busy with our desserts. So, it wasn’t really necessary to wait any longer, and we were busy putting the slices of our steaks into our mouths in no time. In fact, we were eating them like they were going “out of style” soon. Anyway, our meals were over, and we were pretty full in our stomach. But, we still felt like we wanted to eat them even more. We enjoyed the meal so much because the items were just cooked and prepared to perfection. In fact, I always enjoyed eating at that restaurant because of its “unique yet minimal decoration” with bare brick walls. Besides, it was a rare opportunity for our friends to get together on a weekend because we are just not able to make it any other time because of our busy life schedule. On top of that, the waiting staffs were really friendly to us. In fact, they treated us like their family members, which was quite refreshing. Finally, I really enjoyed the food because it allowed me an opportunity to “change my taste” as I was getting really tired of eating the same kind of “home-cooked” foods for a long!
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Describe
a meal that you
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enjoyed
at a
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restaurant
. You should say: where the
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restaurant
was what
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food
you ordered who was/were with you and
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explain
why you
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enjoyed
it
so
much. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer 1: After
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eating
home-cooked
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food
for a long period of
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time
, when you
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get
an opportunity to eat your
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favourite
dish at one of your
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favourite
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restaurants
with your
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friends
and relatives,
you know
that you are in luck to have a great
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time
. The same happened to me when
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some
of my
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friends
invited me to eat one of my all-time
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favourite
dishes at one of my
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favourite
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restaurants
during the
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weekend
, I knew that I was going to enjoy it all!

It was a
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very
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famous
and
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busy
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restaurant
called “
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Dandylion
”, located in the city of Toronto, which was not
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very
far away from where I
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lived
at that
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time
. Since it was a
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really
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busy
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food
place, we needed to reserve for our seats
well
in advance in order to avoid the unnecessary waiting period.
Anyway
,
finally
the much-awaited
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weekend
had arrived, and we were ready to enjoy our
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“weekend
special” at
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"
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Dandylion
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"
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restaurant
. We all ordered for our Sirloin Steaks and mashed potatoes with
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some
fresh salads on the side.
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While our main dishes were
being prepared
, I and my
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friends
were
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busy
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eating
the desserts which were
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some
of the best in the town.
Of course
, our Sirloin steaks arrived while we were
still
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busy
with our desserts.
So
, it wasn’t
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really
necessary to wait any longer, and we were
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busy
putting the slices of our steaks into our mouths in no
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time
. In fact, we were
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eating
them like they were going “out of style”
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soon
.

Anyway
, our meals were over, and we were pretty full in our stomach.
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But
, we
still
felt like we wanted to eat them even more. We
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enjoyed
the meal
so
much
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because
the items were
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just
cooked and prepared to perfection. In fact, I always
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enjoyed
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eating
at that
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restaurant
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because
of its “unique
yet
minimal decoration” with bare brick walls.
Besides
, it was a rare opportunity for our
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friends
to
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get
together on a
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weekend
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because
we are
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just
not able to
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make
it any other
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time
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because
of our
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busy
life schedule.
On top of that
, the waiting staffs were
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really
friendly to us. In fact, they treated us like their family members, which was quite refreshing.
Finally
, I
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really
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enjoyed
the
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food
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because
it
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allowed
me an opportunity to “
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change
my taste” as I was getting
The extreme adjective for tired is "exhausted".
really tired
of
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eating
the same kind of “home-cooked”
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foods
for a long!
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a meal that you enjoyed at a restaurant. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
478 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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