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Describe something you do well in your job or study. v.1

Describe something you do well in your job or study. v. 1
Describe something you do well in your job or study. You should say: what it is how well you do it whether it is easy or difficult and explain why you think you do it better than others. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Being able to do something really well or being an expert in something, whether at work or study, is certainly a good thing. I already had figured that out during my college years, but I understand its value even more now at my work as a Junior Executive of my company when I frequently get called to participate in an interview process as a “psychological evaluation expert” on the prospective job candidate. Needless to say, being a “proxy psychological expert” isn’t exactly a part of my job responsibilities. Yes, I get to check the “mental competency” of a prospective employee by asking them different questions during an interview. This is certainly not an easy task for a Junior Accounting Executive like me who has started his job only about six months ago. However, still, I somehow manage to pull it off by asking the right questions at the right moment. They are, of course, some random questions, but I seem to be able to ask the necessary complementary questions most of the times. Of course, I also have to work really hard to get my candidate open up to me so that he/she can feel free to talk to me about anything and everything to reveal his/her “potentials” as a prospective employee of our company. It is also a difficult process since it can take a while to fully understand and appreciate the “mental competency” of a job candidate. I accomplish the task better than others mainly because I can be really patient when it comes to listening to another person no matter how “inconsistent” he or she may sound. And, please trust me, listening to a prospective employee does help an interviewer to learn a great deal about him/her. In fact, I can listen to a person for hours without talking even once in response. I also like to observe people carefully which allows me an opportunity to create a “profile” of a particular person into my mind. I also feel like I do this task a bit better than others because I really make it easy for a candidate to freely express his/her opinions on something they really care.   Thus, I really feel that my ability to observe a candidate carefully along with the ability to engage him/her on a personal and professional level helps me accomplish the task better than others.
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Describe
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something
you do
well
in your
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job
or study. You should say: what it is how
well
you do it whether it is easy or difficult and
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explain
why you
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think
you do it
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better
than others. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer 1: Being able to do
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something
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really
well
or being an expert in
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something
, whether at work or study, is
certainly
a
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good
thing. I already had figured that out during my college years,
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but
I understand its value even more
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now
at my work as a Junior Executive of my
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company
when I
frequently
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get
called to participate in an interview process as a “psychological evaluation expert” on the
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prospective
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job
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candidate
.
Needless to say
, being a “proxy psychological expert” isn’t exactly a part of my
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job
responsibilities.

Yes, I
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get
to
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check
the “mental competency” of a
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prospective
employee by asking them
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different
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questions
during an interview. This is
certainly
not an easy
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task
for a Junior Accounting Executive like me who has
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started
his
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job
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only
about six months ago.
However
,
still
, I somehow manage to pull it off by asking the
right
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questions
at the
right
moment. They are,
of course
,
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some
random
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questions
,
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but
I seem to be able to ask the necessary complementary
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questions
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most of the times
.
Of course
, I
also
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have to
work
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really
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hard
to
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get
my
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candidate
open up to me
so
that he/she can feel free to talk to me about anything and everything to reveal his/her “potentials” as a
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prospective
employee of our
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company
. It is
also
a difficult process since it can take a while to
fully
understand and appreciate the “mental competency” of a
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job
candidate.

I accomplish the
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task
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better
than others
mainly
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because
I can be
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really
patient when it
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comes
to listening to another person no matter how “inconsistent” he or she may sound. And,
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please
trust me, listening to a
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prospective
employee does
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help
an interviewer to learn a great deal about him/her. In fact, I can listen to a person for hours without talking even once in response. I
also
like to observe
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people
carefully
which
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allows
me an opportunity to create a “profile” of a particular person into my mind. I
also
feel like I do this
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task
a bit
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better
than others
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because
I
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really
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make
it easy for a
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candidate
to
freely
express his/her opinions on
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something
they
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really
care.
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Thus
, I
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really
feel that my ability to observe a
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candidate
carefully
along with the ability to engage him/her on a personal and professional level
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helps
me accomplish the
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task
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better
than others.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something you do well in your job or study. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
475 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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