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Describe a plan (not related to work or study) you have for the future. v.1

Describe a plan (not related to work or study) you have for the future. v. 1
Describe a plan (not related to work or study) you have for the future. You should say: what is it what you would need to achieve it how long you have this plan and explain how difficult it would be to fulfil it.   Model Answer 1: I have a plan to establish a playground for kids and a club for the adults in my hometown. This is something I missed a lot in the place where I grew up and that’s the why I have the plan and determination to achieve it. Establishing a kid’s playground adjacent to a club for grown-up people would not be an easy task. I will need to manage the necessary budget, manpower and financial support to actually do that. I will have to be financially rich and connected with the local authority and political leaders to start the plan I have. Honestly, I have this plan for a very long. When I got admitted in my high school, the realisation started popping up in my mind that these are two things that our community is missing although they are very important. I knew that was something pretty tough to achieve, but yet I started fostering this tough plan in my mind. As I already said, that would be pretty tough as it involves money, space, power, and people’s involvements. There would be lots of obstacles and I would have to face and resolve in order to fulfill the plan I have. The determination and good will along with the prudent decision would be required. If I do not possess a great enthusiasm and strength of mind, it would become almost impossible to achieve it.   Sample Answer 2: Travelling fascinates me more than any thing else. So, I want to travel in the future. I want to visit the other countries of the world and gain first-hand knowledge and experience. I would like to thank you for this wonderful cue card topic. To meet my desire, I would need some specific things. The most important point about travelling is time. I need to manage enough time to spend out of my country. In fact, people cannot move out of their own states owing to the time deficiency. So, I have to manage plenty of times to travel around. Secondly, I would need sufficient amount of money. Without a complete budget and arranging the money, it would be insane to move out to see the world around. So, I have to arrange money as well. Travelling with a companion is better and has some positive impacts. Hence, I also may need a companion for me. And I prefer an opposite gender in this case. Since my early age, I am fond of books and have read various types of books so far. Most of the books were travelling and adventure related. I have an unquenchable thirst to see the world. So, the plan was hidden in my mind since my childhood. Gradually, the plan started spreading its wings in the mind. And now I dream to travel across the world. In reality, it would be hard for me to fulfil the plan. First of all, I am unable to manage enough time to travel. In fact, travelling out of the country requires a great deal of free time and complexities. One needs enough time to handle the things but I do not have the time to invest in solving the issues. Arranging money is another fact. But I will try my best to organize everything even it takes five more years for me.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a desire you wish to fulfill in future. Describe something you have planned to do in the future. Describe a dream you have. Describe something you want to change about your hometown. Describe a change you would like to bring in your town.
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a
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plan
(not related to work or study) you have for the
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future
. You should say: what is it what you would
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need
to
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achieve
it how long you have this
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plan
and
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explain
how difficult it would be to fulfil it.
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Model Answer 1:

I have a
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plan
to establish a playground for kids and a club for the adults in my hometown. This is
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something
I missed a lot in the place where I grew up and that’s
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the why
I have the
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plan
and determination to
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achieve
it. Establishing a kid’s playground adjacent to a club for grown-up
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people
would not be an easy task. I will
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need
to
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manage
the necessary budget, manpower and financial support to
actually
do that. I will
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have to
be
financially
rich and connected with the local authority and political leaders to
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start
the
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plan
I have.
Honestly
, I have this
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plan
for a
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very
long. When I
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got
admitted in my high school, the
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realisation
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started
popping up in my
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mind
that these are two things that our community is missing although they are
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very
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important
. I knew that was
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something
pretty tough to
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achieve
,
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but
yet
I
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started
fostering this tough
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plan
in my
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mind
. As I already said, that would be pretty tough as it involves
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money
, space, power, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s involvements. There would be lots of obstacles and I would
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have to
face and resolve in order to fulfill the
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plan
I have. The determination and
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good
will along with the prudent decision would
be required
. If I do not possess a great enthusiasm and strength of
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mind
, it would become almost impossible to
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achieve
it.
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Sample Answer
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2: Travelling
fascinates me more than
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
else.
So
, I want to
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travel
in the
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future
. I want to visit the other countries of the world and gain
first
-hand knowledge and experience. I would like to thank you for this wonderful
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cue
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card
topic.

To
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meet
my desire, I would
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need
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some
specific things. The most
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important
point about
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travelling
is
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time
. I
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need
to
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manage
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enough
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time
to spend out of my country. In fact,
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people
cannot
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move
out of their
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own
states owing to the
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time
deficiency.
So
, I
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have to
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manage
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plenty
of
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times
to
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travel
around.
Secondly
, I would
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need
sufficient amount of
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money
. Without a complete budget and arranging the
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money
, it would be insane to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
out to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the world around.
So
, I
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have to
arrange
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money
as
well
.
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Travelling
with a companion is better and has
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some
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positive
impacts.
Hence
, I
also
may
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need
a companion for me. And I prefer an opposite gender
in this case
.

Since my early age, I am fond of books and have read various types of books
so
far. Most of the books were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travelling
and adventure related. I have an unquenchable thirst to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the world.
So
, the
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plan
was hidden
in my
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mind
since my childhood.
Gradually
, the
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plan
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
spreading its wings in the
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mind
. And
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now
I dream to
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travel
across the world.

In reality, it would be
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hard
for me to fulfil the
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plan
.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am unable to
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manage
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enough
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time
to
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travel
. In fact,
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travelling
out of the country requires a great deal of free
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time
and complexities. One
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needs
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enough
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time
to handle the things
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but
I do not have the
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time
to invest in solving the issues. Arranging
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money
is another fact.
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But
I will try my best to organize everything even it takes five more years for me.
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Topics Your ability to talk about this
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would enable you to talk about the following
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as
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:
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Describe
a desire you wish to fulfill in
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future
.
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Describe
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something
you have planned to do in the
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future
.
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Describe
a dream you have.
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Describe
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something
you want to
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change
about your hometown.
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Describe
a
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change
you would like to bring in your town.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
75Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a plan (not related to work or study) you have for the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
668 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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