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Describe a hotel you have stayed in. v.1

Describe a hotel you have stayed in. v. 1
Describe a hotel you have stayed in. You should say: where the hotel was why you stayed at that particular hotel give details of the hotel and the view from it and explain what makes the hotel special. Follow-up Questions: What are some good hotels in your city? What are the differences between staying in a hotel and staying in a relative's house? What qualities make a hotel a good one?   Model Answer 1: Travelling to interesting places during the holidays certainly is good. But getting to spend a night at a luxury hotel after enjoying a great outdoor during the holidays is even better, and today I would like to talk about the experience of enjoying a few nights at one such hotel. The hotel, I am talking about, was located in the district of “Langkawi” which was 30 kilometre off the mainland coast of northwestern Malaysia. I stayed at the hotel about a few years ago when I was visiting to see the beautiful islands in the Andaman Sea mainly because the hotel provided us with complimentary transportation to visit the adjacent areas. It was a luxury hotel of Marriot family, and it had luxury rooms with contemporary and fine dark wood details which were artfully juxtaposed against locally painted images of beautiful nature on the walls. The rooms also included ample seating areas to enjoy the 32” LCD flat-panel televisions, attached with DVD players along with a fully stocked mini-bar and a coffee pot. And as for the views from the hotel, it was simply outstanding as I could overview the beautiful and ancient rainforest, the Mat Chincang Mountains and the beaches of the Andaman Sea just like they were painted in the picture. Not to also mention, of course, the abundant wildlife in the rainforest to play “hide and seek” with us for our amusement. The hotel was certainly special because of its unique location from where it was just so easy to view the encore and beautiful nature without actually ever stepping out of it. Another great thing about this hotel was that I didn’t exactly pay a “truckload” of money to stay there. Besides, I don’t think that many hotels in this world provide free transportation every day to take its valuable guests to let them visit interesting places around them. Finally, it would be a great injustice if I don’t mention about the exceptional customer service of the hotel staffs who treated us like their own family.
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Describe
a
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you have stayed in. You should say: where the
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hotel
was why you stayed at that particular
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hotel
give
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details
of the
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hotel
and the view from it and
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explain
what
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makes
the
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hotel
special. Follow-up Questions: What are
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some
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good
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hotels
in your city? What are the differences between staying in a
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hotel
and staying in a relative's
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house
? What qualities
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make
a
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hotel
a
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good
one?
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Model Answer 1:

Travelling to interesting places during the holidays
certainly
is
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good
.
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But
getting to spend a night at a luxury
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hotel
after enjoying a great outdoor during the holidays is even better, and
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today
I would like to talk about the experience of enjoying a few nights at one such hotel.

The
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hotel
, I am talking about,
was located
in the district of “
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Langkawi
” which was 30
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kilometre
off the mainland coast of northwestern Malaysia. I stayed at the
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hotel
about a few years ago when I was visiting to
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see
the
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beautiful
islands in the Andaman Sea
mainly
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because
the
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hotel
provided us with complimentary transportation to visit the adjacent areas. It was a luxury
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hotel
of
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Marriot
family, and it had luxury rooms with contemporary and fine dark wood
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details
which were
artfully
juxtaposed against
locally
painted images of
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beautiful
nature on the walls. The rooms
also
included ample seating areas to enjoy the 32” LCD flat-panel televisions, attached with DVD players along with a
fully
stocked mini-bar and a coffee pot.

And as for the views from the
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hotel
, it was
simply
outstanding as I could overview the
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beautiful
and ancient rainforest, the Mat
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Chincang
Mountains and the beaches of the Andaman Sea
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just
like they
were painted
in the picture. Not to
also
mention,
of course
, the abundant wildlife in the rainforest to play “
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hide and seek
” with us for our amusement.

The
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hotel
was
certainly
special
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because
of its unique location from where it was
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just
so
easy to view the encore and
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beautiful
nature without
actually
ever stepping out of it. Another great thing about this
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hotel
was that I didn’t exactly pay a “truckload” of money to stay there.
Besides
, I don’t
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think
that
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many
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hotels
in this world provide free transportation every day to take its valuable guests to
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let
them visit interesting places around them.
Finally
, it would be a great injustice if I don’t
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mention about the
exceptional customer service of the
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hotel
staffs who treated us like their
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own
family.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a hotel you have stayed in. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
415 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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