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A speech that somebody delivered and you heard. v.1

A speech that somebody delivered and you heard. v. 1
A speech that somebody delivered and you heard. You should say: who gave the speech what the topic of the speech was whether it impressed you or not and explain why you liked/disliked the speech.   Follow-up Questions: What are the differences between a political speech and a speech given by a non-political person? What are the important aspects of a good speech? What makes a person a good speech giver?
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that somebody delivered and you heard. You should say: who gave the
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what the topic of the
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was whether it impressed you or not and
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why you liked/disliked the
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.
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and a
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given
by a non-political person? What are the
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important
aspects of a
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good
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speech
? What
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makes
a person a
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good
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giver?
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS speaking A speech that somebody delivered and you heard. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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