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Describe a good neighbour of yours. v.1

Describe a good neighbour of yours. v. 1
Describe a good neighbour of yours. You should say: who is s/he how long s/he is your neighbour what sort of person s/he is and explain why you think him/her to be a good neighbour. Model Answer: I live in a beautiful and peaceful are and most of my neighbours are kind, benevolent and well-mannered. Among them, I would pick Mr Patrick as a very good neighbour I have. He is an Engineer and works for a large engineering and manufacturing company. He is married and has four children. He lives with his family only three blocks away from our house. He moved in our community 5-6 years ago and in this sense he is my neighbour for the last 5-6 years. He is very amiable and talented person. He speaks very kindly with everybody and with children and senior citizen he behaves very mildly no matter what. I have seen his research papers been published in a reputed science and engineering journal and he is a renowned engineer in our town. In his career life, he is a successful Engineer and in his personal life he is a good human, dotting father and caring husband. He obeys the rules and regulation of our community very strictly and because of that, everyone in our community likes him. I like him very much because of his kind and benevolent attitude and cordial behaviour. He helps poor people and also boldly protests any discrimination and injustice he notices. His talent, fame and successful career have not made him a proud person. Rather he has become a kind and good hearted man over time. In our community, most of the people like him and he is, in my opinion, a neighbour anyone would expect to have.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe someone you really admire. Describe a good person you know. Describe an ideal neighbour you have. Describe a good person from your locality.
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a
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good
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neighbour
of yours. You should say: who is s/he how long s/he is your
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neighbour
what sort of
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person
s/he is and
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explain
why you
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think
him/her to be a
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good
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neighbour
. Model Answer:

I
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live
in a
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beautiful
and peaceful are and most of my
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neighbours
are kind, benevolent and
well
-mannered. Among them, I would pick Mr Patrick as a
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very
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good
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neighbour
I have. He is an Engineer and works for a large engineering and manufacturing
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company
. He
is married
and has four children.
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He
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lives
with his family
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only
three blocks away from our
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house
.
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He
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moved
in our
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community
5-6 years ago and in this sense he is my
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neighbour
for the last 5-6 years.
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He
is
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very
amiable and talented
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person
.
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He
speaks
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very
kindly with everybody and with children and senior citizen he behaves
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very
mildly
no matter what. I have
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seen
his research papers
been published
in a reputed science and engineering
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
journal and
he is a renowned engineer in our town. In his career life, he is a successful Engineer and in his personal life he is a
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good
human, dotting father and caring husband. He obeys the
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rules
and regulation of our
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community
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very
strictly
and
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because
of that, everyone in our
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community
likes him. I like him
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very
much
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because
of his kind and benevolent attitude and cordial
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behaviour
. He
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helps
poor
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people
and
also
boldly
protests any discrimination and injustice he notices. His talent, fame and successful career have not made him a proud
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person
.
Rather
he has become a kind and
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good hearted
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man
over time. In our
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community
, most of the
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people
like
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him and
he is, in my opinion, a
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neighbour
anyone would
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expect
to have.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
someone you
really
admire.
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Describe
a
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good
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person
you know
.
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Describe
an ideal
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neighbour
you have.
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Describe
a
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good
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person
from your locality.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS speaking Describe a good neighbour of yours. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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