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Describe something you often do when you are not working or studying. v.1

Describe something you often do when you are not working or studying. v. 1
Describe something you often do when you are not working or studying. You should say: what you do where you do it who you do it with and explain why you do it. Model Answer: I often browse the social networking website Facebook and write for my blog when I do not have studies, approaching exams or other important tasks. I use Facebook to update my status, to share the news or photos, to know the updates of my friends, to chat with them and to be on a platform where most of my friends and relatives are connected. I also have a technology & hobby related blog where I write blog posts, answer questions asked by visitors and moderate the guest blogging. I usually do it on my laptop or on my desktop computer. I sometimes use my Facebook account from my mobile phone. But for the blog writing and moderation, I rely on my desktop computer. I have two friends who help me updating my blog. They often give me blog post ideas and help me on some tech websites references as well. They do it from their homes and they communicate me either in computer chatting or in my mobile phone. For Facebook surfing, I absolutely maintain my website all alone as it is a personal account. But on Facebook, I have lots of friends, relatives and classmates who correspond me online. I find Facebook to be the most widely used social networking platform and most of my friends, old classmates, and relatives are connected with me. For me, this is the place where I can get updates of all of my friends and people who I care about. In terms of communications and update sharing, Facebook is the best platform and that’s why I use it. Besides, my blog is an important place for me to write technological and hobby-related information. A blog that has a good number of visitors per day is a great resource for anyone. For me, this is the place to share my knowledge, and for that, I need to read a lot which is very helpful in our professional and personal life. For all these beneficial aspects and the passion I have, I do it often.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a healthy activity you have. Describe something you often do. Describe a hobby you have. Describe something you like to do. Describe an activity you have started recently. Describe a website you often browse.
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Describe
something you
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often
do when you are not working or studying. You should say: what you do where you do it
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who
you do it with and
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explain
why you do it. Model Answer:

I
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often
browse the social networking
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website
Facebook and write for my
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blog
when I do not have studies, approaching exams or other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
tasks. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
Facebook to
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update
my status, to share the news or photos, to know the
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updates
of my
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friends
, to chat with them and to be on a platform where most of my
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friends
and relatives
are connected
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
have a technology
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&amp
; hobby related
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blog
where I write
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blog
posts, answer questions asked by visitors and moderate the guest blogging.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
usually
do it on my laptop or on my desktop computer.
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I
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sometimes
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use
my Facebook account from my mobile phone.
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But
for the
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blog
writing and moderation, I rely on my desktop computer. I have two
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friends
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who
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help
me
The verb 'two' is used with an infinitive: "to update" or "update".
updating
my
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blog
. They
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often
give me
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blog
post
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ideas
and
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help
me on
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some
tech websites references as
well
. They do it from their
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
homes and
they communicate me either in computer chatting or in my mobile phone. For Facebook surfing, I
absolutely
maintain my
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website
all alone as it is a personal account.
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But
on Facebook, I have lots of
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friends
, relatives and classmates
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who
correspond me online. I find Facebook to be the most
widely
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used
social networking platform and most of my
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friends
,
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old
classmates, and relatives
are connected
with me. For me, this is the place where I can
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get
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updates
of all of my
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friends
and
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people
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who
I care about. In terms of communications and
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update
sharing, Facebook is the best platform and that’s why I
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use
it.

Besides
, my
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blog
is an
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important
place for me to write technological and hobby-related information. A
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blog
that has a
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good
number of visitors per day is a great resource for anyone. For me, this is the place to share my knowledge, and for that, I need to read a lot which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful in our professional and personal life. For all these beneficial aspects and the passion I have, I do it
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often
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a healthy activity you have.
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Describe
something you
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often
do.
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Describe
a hobby you have.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you like to do.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an activity you have
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started
recently.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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website
you
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often
browse.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something you often do when you are not working or studying. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
435 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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