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Describe your favourite part of the day. v.1

Describe your favourite part of the day. v. 1
Describe your favourite part of the day. You should say: when it is what you do then how long this part of a day lasts and explain why this is your favourite part of the day. Model Answer: Early morning is my favourite part of the day. Though I do not get up early every day, I love the morning time from 5: 30 am to 8: 30 am. I often wash myself and take a light breakfast at around 6: 00 am and then go out for a walk. I usually go to a park and enjoy the fresh air. The environment seems very serene and clean at that time. I often sat beside a lake and enjoy the fishes and birds there. The part of the day I am talking about lasts around 3 hours. When the clock ticks 8: 30am, people start hurrying for the office, school and business places. A lot of cars start moving by that time and the roads become busy and noisy. The serenity, freshness and peacefulness that the early morning offers are really charming and exceptional. This is the starting of a new day with new promises and possibilities. I enjoy the sparkle and freshness of the morning and also love the birds, fishes, gardens. To me, this is the most beautiful part of the day. Other parts of a day have their own attractions and beauty but to me, the early morning time is the best and most stunning among them all. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a beautiful scenery you have seen. Describe a habit you really enjoy. Describe something you like very much. Describe an activity you have. Describe something you want to start in the near future.
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your
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part
of the day. You should say: when it is what you do then how long this
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part
of a day lasts and
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explain
why this is your
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part
of the day. Model Answer:

Early
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morning
is my
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part
of the day. Though I do not
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get
up early every day, I
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love
the
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morning
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time
from 5: 30 am to 8: 30 am. I
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often
wash myself and take a light breakfast at around 6: 00 am and then go out for a walk. I
usually
go to a park and
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enjoy
the fresh air. The environment seems
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very
serene and clean at that
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time
. I
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often
sat beside a lake and
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enjoy
the fishes and birds there. The
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part
of the day I am talking about lasts around 3 hours. When the clock ticks 8: 30am,
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people
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start
hurrying for the office, school and business places.
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cars
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start
moving by that
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time
and the roads become busy and noisy. The serenity, freshness and peacefulness that the early
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morning
offers are
really
charming and exceptional. This is the starting of a new day with new promises and possibilities. I
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enjoy
the sparkle and freshness of the
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morning
and
also
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love
the birds, fishes, gardens. To me, this is the most
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beautiful
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part
of the day. Other
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parts
of a day have their
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own
attractions and beauty
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but
to me, the early
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morning
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time
is the best and most stunning among them all. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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beautiful
scenery you have
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seen
.
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Describe
a habit you
really
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enjoy
.
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something you like
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very
much.
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Describe
an activity you have.
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Describe
something you want to
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start
in the near future.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite part of the day. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
309 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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