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Describe an actor or actress whom you admire. v.1

Describe an actor or actress whom you admire. v. 1
Describe an actor or actress whom you admire. Please say: who he/she is what he/she looks like what kind of movies he/she appears in why you admire this actor/actress.   Sample Answer 1: There are plenty of amazing and inspirational performing artists out there to choose from. However, for this topic, I’m going to go with my first instinct, because the first actor I can think of, must be at the forefront of my mind for a reason. If nothing else, this suggests that their work is memorable and impressive. This actress certainly is. I’m going to tell you who she is, what she looks like (‘though that is tricky, as she has had a career spanning decades); what sort of films and other work she has performed in and why it is I admire her so much. So, the actress – or actor (in England, some women ‘actresses’ prefer to be called ‘actors’ as the word should encompass both genders really) is known affectionately as Maggie Smith. Her formal name and the title is Dame Margaret Natalie Smith, but she is so recognisable in the UK (and probably worldwide too now) that she is regarded as something of a British Institution, and everyone here in the UK would instinctively refer to her as Maggie Smith I think. In terms of her appearance, because her career has spanned some 60 years, she has obviously changed a bit over time. However, I think that in some ways her career and recognisability have grown as she has got older, and probably she is still in her prime even now at the age of 81 (she was born in December 1934). She is very tall, upright and slender. She has an extraordinary presence and poise. Her face is very expressive - I doubt she has ever tried Botox, so she has kept her facial mobility which I’m sure must help her convey a wide range of thoughts and emotions! Her mouth is quite a straight line, and she seems to have had a run of playing fairly serious characters (serious to themselves, at any rate, they are often, in fact, comic star turns for the audiences). Her eyes and eyebrows are particularly good at communicating in a tiny movement what the character is thinking. I wouldn’t call her face wrinkled as such, but it is sort of ‘lived in’ if you know what I mean? She has a few crows’ lines or laughter lines if you prefer, around her mouth and eyes. In one word I’d say she was striking in appearance. She has an extraordinarily compelling air to her, the sort of person everyone would turn to look at as she entered a room, even without her being famous, but at the same time, she projects an air of calm confidence rather than arrogance. She tends to wear her hair in a short bob-like style. I think she has allowed her hair to go naturally grey with age, but in fact, in most of her work she wears a wig for the character anyway, so that is not her defining feature! As for her work, well, I hardly know where to begin! She is probably most famous for the films she has been in. For example, she played Professor Minerva McGonagall in the Harry Potter film series. Other notable film appearances include ‘The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel’ and ‘Ladies in Lavender’, and the earlier acclaimed film ‘The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie’. However, she is probably one of Britain’s most recognised actresses for the many excellent quality TV period dramas she has appeared in. ‘Downton Abbey’ is one you may have heard of, she played a stern, Dowager Countess. Despite her impressive film and television career, for which she has won an extraordinary number of awards (BAFTA, Academy and Golden Globes just for starters), she began her career on stage. She has had a glittering career in the UK and America, appearing on the London West End Stages, Broadway and playing Shakespearean roles too numerous to mention. She was part of the newly established Royal National Theatre in London in the 1960’s. Why I admire her? Well, the breadth of her career in terms of range of parts she has played is simply astonishing. She has done seemingly everything! Serious Shakespearean roles, comedy character parts; monologues film, theatre and television. She will do whatever a part requires, there is no vanity in her. She recently appeared in a film ‘The Lady in The Van’, which required her to play a belligerent and elderly homeless woman – a far from glamorous part! Her professional longevity in a business where many actors struggle to get work is the testament to her remarkable talent. She has a gift for giving what seem to be entirely effortless performances. Whatever I have seen her in, she is totally convincing, I never think ‘wow, what a brilliant actress’ when I’m watching her, I just absolute accept the character she is portraying! If I knew what her secret was, I’d be doing it myself, but I wonder if it is perhaps partly, because whether the part she is playing is ‘comedic’ or ‘straight’ she seems to play it with conviction. She can give performances that are absolutely hilarious to watch, with a dry wit, but the character she portrays seems entirely unknowing of how funny they are being. She seems always to respect the writing and the role. She has worked really hard to be as successful as she is, and she deserved the recognition that came when she was awarded the honour of being made a British Dame. She is often spoken of as a ‘National Treasure’ and a ‘National Institution’ because her appearances are so ubiquitous in film and television (particularly period dramas), and so widely known and loved. In fact, I don’t know very much about her politics or personal life, but in a way, I don’t need to. I’d even go so far as to say I don’t want to. She is supremely good at her chosen occupation and that’s enough for me. She is well regarded by her peers, I’ve never heard any other actor say anything about her which wasn’t positive, full of admiration for both her work ethic and her talent. I think for her to be working right into her eighties is also truly remarkable. I hope she is able to continue working for many more years yet – assuming that is what she would like to do. After all, at her age, if she feels she’d finally like to put her feet up and take a rest, I think she has more than earned the right to do so! [ Written by - Lucy Marris (2016):   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]
Describe
an
actor
or
actress
whom you
admire
.
Please
say: who he/she is what he/she looks like what kind of movies he/she appears in why you
admire
this actor/actress.
 
Sample Answer 1:

There are
plenty
of amazing and inspirational performing artists out there to choose from.
However
, for this topic, I’m going to
go with
my
first
instinct,
because
the
first
actor
I can
think
of,
must
be at the forefront of my mind for a reason. If nothing else, this suggests that their
work
is memorable and impressive. This
actress
certainly
is.

I’m going to
tell
you who she is, what she looks like (‘though
that is
tricky, as she has had a
career
spanning decades); what sort of films and other
work
she has performed in and why it is I
admire
her
so
much.

So
, the
actress
or
actor
(in England,
some
women
‘actresses’
prefer to
be called
‘actors’
as the word should encompass both genders
really
)
is known
affectionately
as Maggie Smith. Her formal name and the title is Dame Margaret Natalie Smith,
but
she is
so
recognisable
in the UK (and
probably
worldwide too
now
) that she
is regarded
as something of a British Institution, and everyone here in the UK would instinctively refer to her as Maggie Smith I
think
.

In terms of her
appearance
,
because
her
career
has spanned
some
60 years, she has
obviously
changed
a bit over time.
However
, I
think
that in
some
ways her
career
and
recognisability
have grown as she has
got
older, and
probably
she is
still
in her prime even
now
at the age of 81 (she
was born
in December 1934). She is
very
tall, upright and slender. She has an extraordinary presence and poise. Her face is
very
expressive
-
I doubt she has ever tried Botox,
so
she has
kept
her facial mobility which I’m sure
must
help
her convey a wide range of thoughts and emotions! Her mouth is quite a straight line, and she
seems
to have had a run of playing
fairly
serious
characters
(serious to themselves, at any rate, they are
often
, in fact, comic star turns for the audiences).
Her
eyes and eyebrows are
particularly
good
at communicating in a tiny movement what the
character
is thinking. I wouldn’t call her face wrinkled as such,
but
it is sort of ‘
lived
in’ if
you know
what
I mean
? She has a few crows’ lines or laughter lines if you prefer, around her mouth and eyes. In one word I’d say she was striking in
appearance
. She has an
extraordinarily
compelling air to her, the sort of person everyone would turn to look at as she entered a room, even without her being
famous
,
but
at the same time, she projects an air of calm confidence
rather
than arrogance. She tends to wear her hair in a short bob-like style. I
think
she has
allowed
her hair to go
naturally
grey
with age,
but
in fact, in most of her
work
she wears a wig for the
character
anyway
,
so
that is
not her defining feature!

As for her
work
,
well
, I hardly know where to
begin
! She is
probably
most
famous
for the films she has been in.
For example
, she played Professor Minerva McGonagall in the Harry Potter film series. Other notable film
appearances
include ‘The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel’ and ‘Ladies in Lavender’, and the earlier acclaimed film ‘The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie’.
However
, she is
probably
one of Britain’s most
recognised
actresses
for the
many
excellent quality TV period dramas she has appeared in. ‘Downton Abbey’ is one you may have heard of, she played a stern, Dowager Countess. Despite her impressive film and television
career
, for which she has won an extraordinary number of awards (
BAFTA
, Academy and Golden Globes
just
for starters), she began her
career
on stage. She has had a glittering
career
in the UK and America, appearing on the London West
End
Stages, Broadway and playing Shakespearean roles
too numerous to mention
. She was
part
of the
newly
established Royal National
Theatre
in London in the
1960’s
.

Why I
admire
her?
Well
, the breadth of her
career
in terms of range of
parts
she has played is
simply
astonishing. She has done
seemingly
everything! Serious Shakespearean roles, comedy
character
parts
; monologues film,
theatre
and television. She will do whatever a
part
requires, there is no vanity in her. She recently appeared in a film ‘The Lady in The Van’, which required her to play a belligerent and elderly homeless woman
a far from glamorous
part
! Her professional longevity in a business where
many
actors
struggle to
get
work
is the testament to her remarkable talent. She has a gift for giving what
seem
to be
entirely
effortless performances. Whatever I have
seen
her in, she is
totally
convincing, I never
think
‘wow, what a brilliant
actress’
when I’m watching her, I
just
absolute accept the
character
she is portraying! If I knew what her secret was, I’d be doing it myself,
but
I wonder if it is perhaps partly,
because
whether the
part
she is playing is ‘comedic’ or ‘straight’ she
seems
to play it with conviction. She can give performances that are
absolutely
hilarious to
watch
, with a dry wit,
but
the
character
she portrays
seems
entirely
unknowing of how
funny
they are being. She
seems always
to respect the writing and the role.
She
has worked
really
hard
to be as successful as she is, and she deserved the recognition that came when she
was awarded
the
honour
of
being made
a British Dame.
She
is
often
spoken of as a ‘National Treasure’ and a ‘National Institution’
because
her
appearances
are
so
ubiquitous in film and television (
particularly
period dramas), and
so
widely
known and
loved
. In fact, I don’t know
very
much about her politics or personal life,
but
in a way, I don’t need to. I’d even go
so
far as to say I don’t want to. She is
supremely
good
at her chosen occupation and that’s
enough
for me. She is
well
regarded by her peers, I’ve never heard any other
actor
say anything about her which wasn’t
positive
, full of admiration for both her
work
ethic and her talent. I
think
for her to be working
right
into her eighties is
also
truly
remarkable. I hope she is able to continue working for
many
more years
yet
assuming
that is
what she would like to do.
After all
, at her age, if she feels she’d
finally
like to put her feet up and take a rest, I
think
she has more than earned the
right
to do
so
!

[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
(2016):
 
Careers
Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
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61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Mistakes
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