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Describe a house/ apartment that someone you know lives in. v.1

Describe a house/ apartment that someone you know lives in. v. 1
Describe a house/ apartment that someone you know lives in. Please say: whose house/apartment this is where the house/apartment is what it looks like inside and explain what you like or dislike about this person’s house/apartment. Sample Answer 1: (House in Sheffield, England) Well, at first, I was a bit flummoxed by this topic. I suppose that’s because it is easy to take for granted the sorts of accommodation people live in, and not really pause to think about it all that much. I have moved around a lot for work and so try not to get too attached to houses or flats I’ve rented as I am never sure how long I might be in them. The location of the accommodation is usually the most important thing for me when I’m choosing where I live, and so I don’t really tend to judge other people’s living situations as they too can be precarious. However, now you have given me the topic to talk about, I can think of one example of where a friend lives that immediately comes to mind. I’m going to tell you all about her house, where it is, what it’s like (as best I can) and the pros and cons of her choice of home. So, this friend of mine is someone who I’ve known for years. She is married, and shares her home with her husband and two almost grown up children. They are quite a sporty household, interested in lots of activities like walking, cycling, running and music. Both her sons play in student bands. My friend also runs her own business (mail-order cookies) from the basement of her home, so it’s quite a busy household! The house is in Nether Edge, which is an established residential suburb in the south-west of the City of Sheffield, England. This is in colloquial terms quite a ‘posh’ area of Sheffield! It is a relatively affluent area with wide tree-lined streets and lots of little boutique shops, delicatessens and even its own well-established amateur theatre in the area. It has a real community feel, everyone there seems to know their neighbours and take an interest in what is going on on their doorstep. The houses tend to be Victorian, built of solid stone.   The grandest houses have their own walled gardens and are packed with ‘original features’ like large windows, beautiful old fire-places, picture rails and wooden floorboards. Some of the houses have now been sub-divided into flats, and there are a few newer properties tucked away within the region. Generally, though, it’s a very pretty area of the city, with a mix of attractive terraced houses and some larger detached properties. It is certainly a very ‘desirable’ place to live, particularly for people with families, as it is safe, with a community feel and properties large enough to accommodate the biggest of families. The house my friend lives in is a beautiful rambling Victorian home. It has many original fireplaces with black hearthstones and attractive tiles along the sides of the open fire grates. There are wooden floors a-plenty, high ceilings and the house goes up three floors high as well as down into the basement. She has converted this area into a lovely kitchen for her business on one side of the basement, the other side has racks of bikes carefully stored away in the dry. In the walled garden, she can keep a few chickens – which is a relatively rare privilege in what is almost a city location. Because the house is usually a hive of activity, the kitchen is always a warm and friendly place where you can sit at the large kitchen table and catch up on gossip over a cup of coffee. From the hallway, there is a large reception room where in winter you can snuggle up in front of a roaring open fire on one of the two squidgy sofas placed in their for guests. The house has great character, a little bit of faded grandeur perhaps, but it is really impressive. What do I like about the property! Well, it’s gorgeous, I love the quirkiness of the Victorian property, the luxury of a real fire and the original features are stunning. It is a busy household where there is always something going on and a warm welcome too, it isn’t just the architecture of the building and the possessions within it that make it an attractive property, it is the family within it!   In my dreams, I’d love to live in a property like this, however, the reality could be a bit different. The tall ceilings and large rooms are indeed gorgeous, but they aren’t very practical in an English winter. The property is hard to heat and the electricity bills must be huge. All those open-fires and so many stairs and rooms make it hard to keep clean. Old houses don’t tend to have much in the way of storage, so there is a constant battle to find ‘homes’ for the clutter of living. Still, I reckon that would be a small price to pay for such a lovely home, one day perhaps. . . In the meantime, I feel very lucky that my friend is so willing to welcome me and others to come and visit her there and enjoy it too. I’ve had some very happy times in that lovely home, but you know what, if she had to move I’m sure as she is so hospitable, I’d find I quickly became just as attached to her new home even if it was a complete contrast and a small, modern flat in a high rise block. It is people that make a home, not the bricks used to construct the walls that surround them! [Lucy Marris (2016):   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
Describe
a
house
/ apartment that someone
you know
lives
in.
Please
say: whose
house
/apartment this is where the
house
/apartment is what it looks like inside and
explain
what you like or dislike about this person’s
house
/apartment. Sample Answer 1: (
House
in Sheffield, England)

Well
, at
first
, I was a bit flummoxed by this topic. I suppose that’s
because
it is easy to take for granted the sorts of accommodation
people
live
in, and not
really
pause to
think
about it all that much. I have
moved
around a lot for work and
so
try not to
get
too attached to
houses
or flats I’ve rented as I am never sure how long I might be in them. The location of the accommodation is
usually
the most
important
thing for me when I’m choosing where I
live
, and
so
I don’t
really
tend to judge other
people’s
living situations as they too can be precarious.
However
,
now
you have
given
me the topic to talk about, I can
think
of one example of where a
friend
lives
that immediately
comes
to mind. I’m going to
tell
you all about her
house
, where it is, what it’s like (as best I can) and the pros and cons of her choice of home.

So
, this
friend
of mine is someone who I’ve known for years. She
is married
, and shares her home with her husband and two almost grown up children. They are quite a sporty household, interested in lots of activities like walking, cycling, running and music. Both her sons play in student bands. My
friend
also
runs her
own
business (mail-order cookies) from the basement of her home,
so
it’s quite a busy household!

The
house
is in Nether Edge, which is an established residential suburb in the south-west of the City of Sheffield, England. This is in colloquial terms quite a ‘posh’
area
of Sheffield! It is a
relatively
affluent
area
with wide tree-lined streets and lots of
little
boutique shops, delicatessens and even its
own
well
-established amateur
theatre
in the
area
. It has a real community feel, everyone there seems to know their
neighbours
and take an interest in what is going
on on
their doorstep. The
houses
tend to be Victorian, built of solid stone.
 
The grandest
houses
have their
own
walled gardens and
are packed
with ‘original features’ like
large
windows,
beautiful
old
fire-places, picture rails and wooden floorboards.
Some of the
houses
have
now
been sub-divided into flats, and there are a few newer
properties
tucked away within the region.
Generally
, though, it’s a
very
pretty
area
of the city, with a mix of attractive terraced
houses
and
some
larger detached
properties
. It is
certainly
a
very
‘desirable’ place to
live
,
particularly
for
people
with families, as it is safe, with a community feel and
properties
large
enough
to accommodate the biggest of families. The
house
my
friend
lives
in is a
beautiful
rambling Victorian home. It has
many
original fireplaces with black hearthstones and attractive tiles along the sides of the open fire grates. There are wooden floors a-
plenty
, high ceilings and the
house
goes up three floors high as
well
as down into the basement. She has converted this
area
into a lovely kitchen for her business on one side of the basement, the other side has racks of bikes
carefully
stored away in the dry. In the walled garden, she can
keep
a few chickens
which is a
relatively
rare privilege in what is almost a city location.
Because
the
house
is
usually
a hive of activity, the kitchen is always a warm and friendly place where you can sit at the
large
kitchen table and catch up on gossip over a cup of coffee. From the hallway, there is a
large
reception room where in winter you can snuggle up in front of a roaring open fire on one of the two squidgy sofas placed in their for guests. The
house
has great character, a
little bit
of faded grandeur perhaps,
but
it is
really
impressive.

What do I like about the
property
!
Well
, it’s gorgeous, I
love
the quirkiness of the Victorian
property
, the luxury of a real fire and the original features are stunning. It is a busy household where there is always something going on and a
warm welcome
too, it isn’t
just
the architecture of the building and the possessions within it that
make
it an attractive
property
, it is the family within it!
 
In my dreams, I’d
love
to
live
in a
property
like this,
however
, the reality could be a bit
different
. The tall ceilings and
large
rooms are
indeed
gorgeous,
but
they aren’t
very
practical in an English winter. The
property
is
hard
to heat and the electricity bills
must
be huge. All those open-fires and
so
many
stairs and rooms
make
it
hard
to
keep
clean.
Old
houses
don’t tend to have much in the way of storage,
so
there is a constant battle to find
‘homes’
for the clutter of living.
Still
, I reckon that would be a
small
price to pay for such a lovely home, one day perhaps.
.
.
In the meantime, I feel
very
lucky that my
friend
is
so
willing to welcome me
and others
to
come
and visit her there and enjoy it too. I’ve had
some
very
happy times in that lovely home,
but
you know
what
, if
she had to
move
I’m sure as she is
so
hospitable, I’d find I
quickly
became
just
as attached to her new home even if it was a complete contrast and a
small
, modern flat in a high rise block. It is
people
that
make
a home, not the bricks
used
to construct the walls that surround them!

[Lucy
Marris
(2016):
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a house/ apartment that someone you know lives in. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
972 words
5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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