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Describe a cyber cafe/Internet cafe in your locality. v.1

Describe a cyber cafe/Internet cafe in your locality. v. 1
Describe a cyber cafe/Internet cafe in your locality. You should say: what type of place it is what you and others can do there describe the internet café and explain why it is an important place for people in your locality. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]
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Describe
a cyber
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
/Internet
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in your locality. You should say: what type of place it is what you
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and others
can do there
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describe
the internet café and
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explain
why it is an
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important
place for
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people
in your locality. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
]
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a cyber cafe/Internet cafe in your locality. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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