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Describe the most important benefit of the internet. v.1

Describe the most important benefit of the internet. v. 1
Describe the most important benefit of the internet. You should say: what it is why you prefer it how people/students can take advantage of this benefit and explain the importance of it in your country. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: No doubt that the internet is one of the greatest inventions, if not the greatest, of all time which has certainly changed our world for good. In fact, the possibilities of the internet are simply endless, if used properly, as there are so many important benefits of using it, no matter what we do and which part of the world we live in. To begin with, one of the most important benefits of the internet is that it allows us to connect and communicate, by supplying an endless amount of knowledge and information, with each other in an instant manner which was unimaginable before its invention about several decades ago. In fact, in the past, it would take days, and sometimes even months, to receive a letter from someone else. But, today, with the internet, we can send an email (electronic mail) or even “instant messages” to anyone in the world and have it delivered, along with loads of information, in seconds! Anyway, while different people prefer internet for different reasons, I prefer it because it allows me to chat with my friends and families instantly, with the help of social media and different chat messengers, while also see them live no matter where I live. Students can also take advantage of such benefit, provided by the internet, by researching for different kinds of data and information on the world wide web which would ultimately help them to prepare important research papers and other important documents from the comfort of their homes without ever visiting a library. Anyway, the introduction of the internet has proved out to be very important for my country on several grounds. First, it has improved the efficiency and productivity of our workers at factories and offices by accelerating the process of sharing different kinds of data and information rather easily and quickly. Besides, it has also enabled millions of our young workers to search for different kinds of “online works” in different countries and companies and thus helping eliminate the unemployment problem of my country rather significantly.   Sample Answer 2: Computers and the internet are comparatively new inventions and yet they have revolutionised the way we lead our life. The internet is used everywhere and this has changed the way we communicate, teach, learn, do business, purchase a product, and what not! The internet has brought countless benefits for us and in my opinion, the ease of communication is the most important one. The old way of communication via postal mails, telephones and travelling were expensive and time-consuming. But the internet has made it possible to communicate with others, be it a personal communication or business communication, remarkably easy. Someone can send an email with rich media like video, image and multimedia presentation to anyone in the world instantaneously. The widespread popularity of social media networks like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram have made it possible for us to get connected with friends, family members, colleagues, make new friends, and this list goes on. With the internet, people can do business conference from different parts of the worlds and it has improved the way companies run their businesses. The internet reminds us of our friends’ and family members’ birthdays and other important events and thus this technology helps us become more proactive and social. I prefer to use the internet for several reasons. First, it is easily accessible and cheap. I can use the internet at home, at the office and even when I travel. I can get help on any topics from the internet, can find a location on Google Maps and get directions while I drive. It helps me get connected to my family members, relatives and friends. I do online shopping and that helps me to save significant time. The internet is probably the richest knowledge hub that can answer my questions. This is a great medium for entertainment for me as I can find any music, movie or TV serial I like to watch. The internet, as I have already said, is the most opulent source of information. Students can easily take advantage of it and enhance their knowledge. In fact, many students already use the internet as their study references and they complete their assignments with the help of it. Reading books online is another great way to enhance knowledge for young pupils. Our country has a high potential for the development of the IT sector and a large number of companies are working in this sector already. This promising sector heavily depends on the internet. Besides, the eCommerce is primarily dependent on this technology. There is scarcely any office or business in my country that can run without the internet. Thus our economy has a significant dependence on this technology.
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Describe
the most
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important
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benefit
of the internet. You should say: what it is why you
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prefer
it how
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people
/students can take advantage of this
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benefit
and
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explain
the importance of it in your
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country
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
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Model Answer 1: No doubt that the internet is one of the greatest inventions, if not the greatest, of all time which has
certainly
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changed
our
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world
for
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good
. In fact, the possibilities of the internet are
simply
endless, if
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used
properly
, as there are
so
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many
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important
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benefits
of using it, no matter what we do and which part of the
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world
we
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live
in.

To
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begin
with, one of the most
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important
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benefits
of the internet is that it
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allows
us to connect and communicate, by supplying an endless amount of
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knowledge
and
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information
, with each
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other
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in an instant manner
which was unimaginable
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before
its invention about several decades ago. In fact, in the past, it would take days, and
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sometimes
even months, to receive a letter from someone else.
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But
,
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today
, with the internet, we can
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send
an email (electronic mail) or even “instant messages” to anyone in the
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world
and have it delivered, along with loads of
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information
, in seconds!

Anyway
, while
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different
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people
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prefer
internet for
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different
reasons, I
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prefer
it
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because
it
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allows
me to chat with my
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friends
and
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families
instantly
, with the
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help
of social media and
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different
chat messengers, while
also
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see
them
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live
no matter where I
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live
. Students can
also
take advantage of such
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benefit
, provided by the internet, by researching for
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different
kinds of data and
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information
on the
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world wide web
which would
ultimately
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help
them to prepare
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important
research papers and
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other
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important
documents from the comfort of their homes without ever visiting a library.

Anyway
, the introduction of the internet has proved out to be
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very
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important
for my
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country
on several grounds.
First
, it has
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improved
the efficiency and productivity of our workers at factories and offices by accelerating the process of sharing
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different
kinds of data and
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information
rather
easily
and
quickly
.
Besides
, it has
also
enabled millions of our young workers to search for
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different
kinds of “online works” in
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different
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countries
and
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companies
and
thus
helping eliminate the unemployment problem of my
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country
rather
significantly
.
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Sample Answer 2: Computers and the internet are
comparatively
new
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inventions and
yet
they have
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revolutionised
the way we lead our life. The internet is
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used
everywhere and this has
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changed
the way we communicate, teach, learn, do
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business
,
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purchase
a product, and what not! The internet has brought countless
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benefits
for us and in my opinion, the
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ease
of
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communication
is the most
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important
one.
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The
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old
way of
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communication
via postal mails, telephones and travelling were expensive and time-consuming.
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But
the internet has made it possible to communicate with others, be it a personal
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communication
or
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business
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communication
,
remarkably
easy. Someone can
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send
an email with rich media like video, image and multimedia presentation to anyone in the
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world
instantaneously
. The widespread popularity of social media networks like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram have made it possible for us to
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get
connected with
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friends
,
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family
members, colleagues,
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make
new
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friends
, and this list goes on. With the internet,
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people
can do
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business
conference from
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different
parts of the
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worlds
and it has
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improved
the way
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companies
run their
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businesses
. The internet reminds us of our
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friends’
and
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family
members’ birthdays and
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other
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important
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events
and
thus
this technology
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helps
us become more proactive and social. I
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prefer
to
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use
the internet for several reasons.
First
, it is
easily
accessible and
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cheap
. I can
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use
the internet at home, at the office and even when I travel. I can
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get
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help
on any topics from the internet, can find a location on Google Maps and
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get
directions while I drive. It
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helps
me
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get
connected to my
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family
members, relatives and
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friends
. I do online shopping and that
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helps
me to save significant time. The internet is
probably
the richest
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knowledge
hub that can answer my questions. This is a great medium for entertainment for me as I can find any music, movie or TV serial I like to
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watch
. The internet, as I have already said, is the most opulent source of
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information
. Students can
easily
take advantage of it and enhance their
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knowledge
. In fact,
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many
students already
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use
the internet as their study
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references and
they complete their assignments with the
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help
of it. Reading books online is another great way to enhance
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knowledge
for young pupils. Our
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country
has a high potential for the development of the IT sector and
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a large number of
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companies
are working in this sector already. This promising sector
heavily
depends on the internet.
Besides
, the
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eCommerce
is
primarily
dependent on this technology. There is
scarcely
any office or
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business
in my
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country
that can run without the internet.
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Thus
our economy has a significant dependence on this technology.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
76Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe the most important benefit of the internet. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
868 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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