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Describe an irritating neighbour in your locality. v.1

Describe an irritating neighbour in your locality. v. 1
Describe an irritating neighbour in your locality. You should say: how long s/he is your neighbour how this person behaves with others explain how annoying this person is. and explain what can be done to reduce his annoying activities.   Model Answer 1: In my 35 years of life, I must say that I have been lucky to have the opportunity to live with some really good neighbours. But, just like there will always be at least one bad apple in a bag full of this fruit, no matter how hard we try to separate from the good ones, I also am currently dealing with one irritating neighbour lately. Currently, I am living in an affluent neighbourhood because I couldn’t find any other closer place near my office. Besides, public transportation from that area is also pretty reliable. Therefore, even though, I am paying a rather hefty amount of rent for my little condominium, the proximity of this place to my job and its reliable public transportation system have made it an ideal place for me to live until, of course, my new neighbour, Mr. Raj Nath Singh, moved into my next condo. Mr. Raj Nath is not such a bad guy, after all, as far as his behaviour is concerned, since he talks pretty much to every person, except the cleaning ladies, in our neighbourhood, but when it comes to leaving his trash outside of his entrance for days, cigarette smoking habit and leaving the cigarette filters to everywhere, and listening to loud music at late night, nobody could really beat him! In fact, his cigarette filter littering habit to all over the place around the condominium complex became so rampant and unbearable that the cleaning ladies have been finally forced to complain about this bad habit of Raj Nath to the condominium management authority because the cleaning ladies are just so tired of cleaning them every day. Anyway, all of my neighbours are thinking about talking to Mr. Raj about his behaviour and how they are negatively affecting an overall peaceful and clean environment of our neighbourhood. We are also planning to suggest the condominium management authority to move him into an isolated corner or condo of the building, so that rest of the residents doesn’t have to deal with his irritating behaviour anymore if he fails to change his habits and behaviours.   Sample Answer 2: Most of our neighbours are amiable and well-behaved and they are good neighbours except Mr. Deun who seems very irritating to me. He is living in our community for about 3 years after he bought the house from the previous owner. So he is our neighbour for the last three years and shortly after he started living here people started noticing his annoying behaviours.   He is a retired person who has only 4 family members and though other family members are well-behaved, this person has some issues that make him a bad neighbour. He does not behave politely and often we find him rude with others. He often shouts on very silly issues. Even with kids, he behaves rudely. He often complains about people standing in front of his house while it is a street and people stand there for a while to look for an auto. In my opinion, he has no right to yell with the neighbours who play in the nearby playground. He does not go out very often and stays at his home most of the time. But he complains about everything, about everyone. Since he has complaints on other people, he should have followed the strict rules not to disturb others but in reality, he does the opposite. He sometimes shouts with his family members that other people can hear and that's very disturbing especially in the middle of the night. I remember him scolding a 10 years girl who mistakenly entered in his garden and just enjoyed the flowers. She did nothing and Mr. Deun acted very impolitely with her. People in our locality sometimes make fun of him for his behaviours and usually avoids him from the social gathering. He has a habit of advising people while he does not listen to anybody's request. Thus I find him very annoying. I am not sure what to do to reduce his annoyance but I guess we should talk to him very politely and try to make peace with him. He is not a type of person who would yield to any logic or good intention. So if he does not heed to polite conversation, the local senior persons can sit with him to short out the problem. His family members can contribute to making him understand that the way he behaves with others is not acceptable and is not a good sign. Finally, if nothing can be done to change him, we should avoid him and ignore his disturbance. He is not a kid whom we can teach the basic of mannerism and social responsibilities. So, in my opinion, a polite discussion can be effective and if not there is nothing we can do to change his behaviours.   Tips for talking about this Cue Card topic: While talking about an irritating neighbour, first mention that why this person is irritating. Be careful about the fact that mentioning your abhorrence about the irritating neighbour would only be reasonable when you can establish the fact that s/he is really irritating. Do not say that you know this annoying neighbour only for few days. That would give a shallow judgment about someone. Mention that you know this person for a long time and not only you but other people in your neighbourhood also abhor him/ her for the annoying activities s/he does often. You would be convincing if you mention that the person does not obey the rules and regulation of your community, often make disturbing attitude with others; especially with kids and senior citizens, shouts very loudly and makes quarrels loudly. Now give some of your personal experiences regarding these people and that should be convincing why you have started feeling that he/she is an annoying person.
Describe
an
irritating
neighbour
in your locality. You should say: how long s/he is your
neighbour
how this
person
behaves
with others
explain
how
annoying
this
person
is. and
explain
what can
be done
to
reduce
his
annoying
activities.
 
Model Answer 1:

In my 35 years of life, I
must
say that I have been lucky to have the opportunity to
live
with
some
really
good
neighbours
.
But
,
just
like there will always be at least one
bad
apple in a bag full of this fruit, no matter how
hard
we try to separate from the
good
ones, I
also
am
currently
dealing with one
irritating
neighbour
lately.

Currently
, I am living in an affluent
neighbourhood
because
I couldn’t find any
other
closer
place
near my office.
Besides
, public transportation from that area is
also
pretty reliable.
Therefore
,
even though
, I am paying a
rather
hefty amount of rent for my
little
condominium
, the proximity of this
place
to my job and its reliable public transportation system have made it an ideal
place
for me to
live
until,
of course
, my new
neighbour
, Mr. Raj
Nath
Singh,
moved
into my
next
condo. Mr. Raj
Nath is
not such a
bad
guy,
after all
, as far as his
behaviour
is concerned
, since he talks pretty much to every
person
, except the
cleaning
ladies, in our
neighbourhood
,
but
when it
comes
to leaving his trash
outside of
his entrance for days, cigarette smoking
habit
and leaving the cigarette filters to everywhere, and listening to loud music at late night, nobody could
really
beat him!

In fact, his cigarette filter littering
habit
to all over the
place
around the
condominium
complex became
so
rampant and unbearable that the
cleaning
ladies have been
finally
forced to complain about this
bad
habit
of Raj
Nath
to the
condominium
management authority
because
the
cleaning
ladies are
just
so
tired of
cleaning
them every day.

Anyway
, all of my
neighbours
are thinking about talking to Mr. Raj about his
behaviour
and how they are
negatively
affecting an
overall
peaceful and clean environment of our
neighbourhood
. We are
also
planning to suggest the
condominium
management authority to
move
him into an isolated corner or condo of the building,
so
that rest of the residents doesn’t
have to
deal with his
irritating
behaviour
anymore if he fails to
change
his
habits
and
behaviours
.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Most of our
neighbours
are amiable and
well-behaved and
they are
good
neighbours
except Mr.
Deun
who
seems
very
irritating
to me. He is living in our community for about 3 years after he
bought
the
house
from the previous owner.
So
he is our
neighbour
for the last three years and shortly after he
started
living here
people
started
noticing his
annoying
behaviours
.
 
He is a retired
person
who
has
only
4
family
members
and though
other
family
members
are
well
-behaved, this
person
has
some
issues that
make
him a
bad
neighbour
. He
does
not
behave
politely
and
often
we find him rude with others.
He
often
shouts on
very
silly issues. Even with kids, he
behaves
rudely
. He
often
complains about
people
standing in front of his
house
while it is a street and
people
stand there for a while to look for an auto. In my opinion, he has no
right
to yell with the
neighbours
who
play in the nearby playground. He
does
not go out
very
often
and stays at his home most of the time.
But
he complains about everything, about everyone. Since he has complaints on
other
people
, he should have followed the strict
rules
not to disturb others
but
in reality, he
does
the opposite. He
sometimes
shouts with his
family
members
that
other
people
can hear and that's
very
disturbing
especially
in the middle of the night. I remember him scolding a 10 years girl
who
mistakenly
entered in his garden and
just
enjoyed the flowers. She did nothing and Mr.
Deun
acted
very
impolitely
with her.
People
in our locality
sometimes
make
fun of him for his
behaviours
and
usually
avoids him from the social gathering. He has a
habit
of advising
people
while he
does
not listen to anybody's request.
Thus
I find him
very
annoying
. I am not sure what to do to
reduce
his annoyance
but
I guess
we should talk to him
very
politely
and try to
make
peace with him. He is not a type of
person
who
would yield to any logic or
good
intention.
So
if he
does
not heed to polite conversation, the local senior
persons
can sit with him to short out the problem. His
family
members
can contribute to making him understand that the way he
behaves
with others is not acceptable and is not a
good
sign
.
Finally
, if nothing can
be done
to
change
him, we should avoid him and
ignore
his disturbance. He is not a kid whom we can teach the basic of mannerism and social responsibilities.
So
, in my opinion, a polite discussion can be effective and if not there is nothing we can do to
change
his
behaviours
.
 
Tips for talking about this Cue Card topic: While talking about an
irritating
neighbour
,
first
mention that why this
person
is
irritating
. Be careful about the fact that mentioning your abhorrence about the
irritating
neighbour
would
only
be reasonable when you can establish the fact that s/he is
really
irritating.

Do not say that
you know
this
annoying
neighbour
only
for few days. That would give a shallow judgment about someone. Mention that
you know
this
person
for a long time and not
only
you
but
other
people
in your
neighbourhood
also
abhor him/ her for the
annoying
activities s/he
does
often
.

You would be convincing if you mention that the
person
does
not obey the
rules
and regulation of your community,
often
make
disturbing attitude with others;
especially
with kids and senior citizens, shouts
very
loudly
and
makes
quarrels
loudly
.
Now
give
some
of your personal experiences regarding these
people
and that should be convincing why you have
started
feeling that he/she is an
annoying
person
.
23Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
106Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39Mistakes
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8 paragraphs
1022 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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