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I am writing to express my complaint

I am writing to express my complaint Eq55b
Dear Sir manager On October 8, 2026, 1 purchased a fridge (Sodina MB77-304) from your company. A three weeks ago I found that while working it turned to only one side. I got a refrigerator from you. When I brought it home, it is freezer did not freeze my things well. The technicians at your factory came to my house and tried to fix it, but they couldnot fix it. I ask you to replace the fridge with a new one. Now I am afraid that I have to ask you to change it again. The other side of the fridge is that I don't like it. There arenot enough shelves to put it in. So I ask you to give me the shelves to put everything it. I am very upset about this. Sometimes when I come home from work, I take things and it makes me sad that the freezer doesnot work. That is why I take these things to my neighbours. That is why I am complaining to( Sodina MB77-304). Please give me a replacement for the new freezer. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction With respect Regards, Marjona!
Dear Sir manager

On
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October 8, 2026
, 1
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purchased
a fridge (
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Sodina
MB77-304) from your
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company
. A three weeks ago I found that while working it turned to
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only
one side. I
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got
a refrigerator from you. When I brought it home, it is freezer did not freeze my things well. The technicians at your factory came to my
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house
and tried to
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fix
it,
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but
they
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couldnot
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fix
it. I ask you to replace the fridge with a new one.
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Now
I am afraid that I
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have to
ask you to
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change
it again.

The other side of the fridge is that I don't like it. There
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arenot
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enough
shelves to put it in.
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So
I ask you to give me the shelves to put everything it. I am
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very
upset about this.
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Sometimes
when I
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come
home from work, I take things and it
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makes
me sad that the freezer
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doesnot
work.
That is
why I take these things to my
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neighbours
.
That is
why I am complaining to
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(
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Sodina
MB77-304).

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Please
give me a replacement for the new freezer.

I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction

With respect

Regards,

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Marjona
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IELTS letter I am writing to express my complaint

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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