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We are requesting that each of you sign up a supervise one of the student lesson

We are requesting that each of you sign up a supervise one of the student lesson q18OX
To who it may concern. I am writing to express my exultant that ” Teacher training club “ wrote me to demonstrate one lesson in an academic year. From this day I have a thirst for demonstrate something useful. I have been searching materials from substantial number of books to distinct from other lessons. My work is closely identified with how to enhance vocabulary and solve the problems in reading tests. My demonstrative lesson consists of two parts. First one is theoretical that show them the intensive way to learnt by heard to know the subject inside out. Second one is testing. I will give each student test with answer sheet to illuminate them real exam atmosphere. It deliberate student not worry about their further knowledge basis and know the way of taking exam. As a speaking part asking some questions related to logical topic. It makes them give clearly answer And attempt to conveningly demonstrate ideas. What is your sense of this? I would appreciate a prompt reply to this letter. Your faithfully!
To
who
it may concern.

I am writing to express my exultant that
Teacher training club
wrote me to demonstrate one lesson in an academic year.

From this day I have a thirst for demonstrate something useful. I have been searching materials from substantial number of books to distinct from other lessons. My work is
closely
identified with how to enhance vocabulary and solve the problems in reading
tests
.

My demonstrative lesson consists of two parts.
First
one is theoretical that
show
them the intensive way to
learnt
by heard to know the subject inside out.

Second one is testing. I will give each student
test
with answer sheet to illuminate them real exam atmosphere. It
deliberate
student not worry about their
further
knowledge basis and know the way of taking exam.

As
a speaking part asking
some
questions related to logical topic. It
makes
them give
clearly
answer


And attempt to
conveningly
demonstrate
ideas
.

What is your sense of this?

I would appreciate a prompt reply to this letter.

Your
faithfully
!
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IELTS letter We are requesting that each of you sign up a supervise one of the student lesson

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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