Dear Amelia,
Hope you are doing fine. It was so delightful to hear that you had a memorable tour to Europe and I'm sure that would revive you to the fullest. I'm writing to seek your advice regarding my plan to celebrate my parents 40th marriage anniversary. I'm sure you can help me make this a grand celebration.
Spending 40 years together is a great reason to celebrate and my parents have shown a true testament of what a marriage really is and I am absolutely blessed to be a part of this remarkable family. 4 decades with blessing, love, affection, true commitment and care is absolutely remarkable. I only wish I would be that fortunate!
As I want to make this event unforgettable, I need your help. 40th anniversary, also known as the ruby anniversary, should be a joyous occasion filled with family and friends who’ve been a part of your lives over the years. I know how famous you are making such an occasion a success and despite some superficial ideas, I am not sure how to make arrangement for such a monumental occasion which is on 24th March.
I hope you can meet me someday to discuss and finalise the planning. I can come over to your office to have the conversation at your convenience. Do inform me when you can meet.
Hope to meet you soon.
Warm wishes,
Karina
Dear Amelia,
Hope you are doing fine. It was  
so
 delightful to hear that you had a memorable tour to Europe and I'm sure that would revive you to the fullest. I'm writing to seek your advice regarding my plan to celebrate my parents 40th  
marriage
 anniversary. I'm sure you can  
help
 me  
make
 this a grand celebration.
Spending 40 years together is a great reason to celebrate and my parents have shown a true testament of what a marriage  
really
  is and
 I am  
absolutely
 blessed to be a part of this remarkable family. 4 decades with blessing,  
love
, affection, true commitment and care is  
absolutely
 remarkable. I  
only
 wish I would be that fortunate!
As I want to  
make
 this  
event
 unforgettable, I need your  
help
. 40th anniversary,  
also
 known as the ruby anniversary, should be a joyous occasion filled with family and friends who’ve been a part of your  
lives
 over the years. I know how  
famous
 you are making such an occasion a success and despite  
some
 superficial  
ideas
, I am not sure how to  
make
 arrangement for such a monumental occasion which is on 24th March.
I hope you can  
meet
 me someday to discuss and  
finalise
 the planning.  
I
 can  
come
 over to your office to have the conversation at your convenience. Do inform me when you can  
meet
.
Hope to  
meet
 you  
soon
.
Warm wishes,
Karina
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