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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend.

Dear Nada, How are you? It has been a while we didn't meet. I can't wait to tell you the great news! I have just runt a new flat. It is a wonderful place to live. It's about 60 metre square, with one small kitchen, a bathroom and a divingroom. You know! what i loved the most is the balcony, it has an amazing view; I can see the park infront of the building. Further, the neighbour hood is quiet, additionally, it has all the amenetries, such as a gym, a mini market and the parkthat i mentioned-it. You, definitly, should come and see it. I garanty you that we will pass a great time. I miss you so much and i have a plenty of news to talk to you about. I hope you accept my invitation. Please pass on my best wishes to your mom and dad. I'm waiting forward to hearing from you as soon as possible With love Houda
Dear
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Nada
, How are you? It has been a while we didn't
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meet
. I can't wait to
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tell
you the great news! I have
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just
runt a new flat. It is a wonderful place to
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live
. It's about 60
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metre
square, with one
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small
kitchen, a bathroom and a
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divingroom
. You know!
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what
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i
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loved
the most is the balcony, it has an amazing view; I can
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see
the park
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infront
of the building.
Further
, the
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neighbour hood
is quiet,
additionally
, it has all the
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amenetries
, such as a gym, a mini market and the
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parkthat
i mentioned-it. You,
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definitly
, should
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come
and
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see
it. I
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garanty
you that we will pass a great time. I miss you
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so
much and
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i
have a
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plenty
of news to talk to you about.
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I
hope you accept my invitation.
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Please
pass on my best wishes to your mom and dad. I'm waiting forward to hearing from you as
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soon
as possible With
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love
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
Houda

IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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