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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend.

Dear Nada, How are you? It has been a while we didn't meet. I can't wait to tell you the great news! I have just runt a new flat. It is a wonderful place to live. It's about 60 metre square, with one small kitchen, a bathroom and a divingroom. You know! what i loved the most is the balcony, it has an amazing view; I can see the park infront of the building. Further, the neighbour hood is quiet, additionally, it has all the amenetries, such as a gym, a mini market and the parkthat i mentioned-it. You, definitly, should come and see it. I garanty you that we will pass a great time. I miss you so much and i have a plenty of news to talk to you about. I hope you accept my invitation. Please pass on my best wishes to your mom and dad. I'm waiting forward to hearing from you as soon as possible With love Houda
Dear
Nada
, How are you? It has been a while we didn't
meet
. I can't wait to
tell
you the great news! I have
just
runt a new flat. It is a wonderful place to
live
. It's about 60
metre
square, with one
small
kitchen, a bathroom and a
divingroom
. You know!
what
i
loved
the most is the balcony, it has an amazing view; I can
see
the park
infront
of the building.
Further
, the
neighbour hood
is quiet,
additionally
, it has all the
amenetries
, such as a gym, a mini market and the
parkthat
i mentioned-it. You,
definitly
, should
come
and
see
it. I
garanty
you that we will pass a great time. I miss you
so
much and
i
have a
plenty
of news to talk to you about.
I
hope you accept my invitation.
Please
pass on my best wishes to your mom and dad. I'm waiting forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible With
love
Houda
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IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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