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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. he asked for you advice

Dear Ali, I am sorry I haven't written for so long. My job and immigration process keeps me busy. I got your email about planning for the first camping holiday and I think this is a brilliant idea. Also, I am sure being away from the city crowd and spending time with your friends in nature would be delightful experiences. You will surely love it. As you asked me, I will try to mention some crucial points. First of all, check the camping gear is right, to avoid getting into trouble. I will send you a list of items you probably need. Furthermore, Keep in mind taking enough water with you as there might be a shortage of water where you go. I would love to be there with you, but as you know, I need to take all this summer to complete my immigration process. I will be with you by all my heart, and I hope you will have fun and pleasant experiences of a camping holiday. Write to me after you come back. All the best, Peter.

Dear Ali,

I am sorry I haven't written for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long. My job and immigration process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 me busy.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 your email about planning for the first
 camping holiday and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this is a brilliant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. Also
, I am sure being away from the city crowd and spending time with your friends in nature would be delightful experiences. You will surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it. As you asked me, I will try to mention This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 crucial points. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the camping gear is right, to avoid getting into trouble. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you a list of items you probably
 need. Furthermore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in mind taking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 water with you as there might be a shortage of water where you go.

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to be there with you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as you know, I need to take all this summer to complete my immigration process. I will be with you by all my heart, and I hope you will have fun and pleasant experiences of a camping holiday.

Write to me after you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back.

All the best, Peter. 