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ou have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Madam, I am writing to inform you that due to my full time job it's not possible for me to continue my evening English Language classes in your academy. Actually, I am working in a hotel as a cashier. So I had lot of responsibilities related to my profession like made a balance sheet, on time send the amount in bank as well as to check any money is left with some one while, all these duties I am not be able to consume my time for the evening courses. I believe that gloaming assignments were very fruitful for me when I attend various meeting in my company and I had a potential to speak and clear my quries in front of my lodge members. However, I can't trust to any one that I divide my burden to some one. I hope you can realize my position and circumstances. Regards, Yours Sincerely,

Dear Madam,

I am writing to inform you that due to my full time job it's not possible for me to continue my evening English Language classes in your academy.

Actually, I am working in a hotel as a cashier. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I had lot of responsibilities related to my profession like made a balance sheet, on time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the amount in bank as well
 as to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 any money is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 one while, all these duties I am not be able to consume my time for the evening courses.

I believe that gloaming assignments were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 fruitful for me when I attend various meeting in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and I had a potential to speak and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 my quries in front of my lodge members. However
, I can't trust to any one that I divide my burden to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 one.

I hope you can realize my position and circumstances.

Regards,

Yours Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter ou have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

153 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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