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ou have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Madam, I am writing to inform you that due to my full time job it's not possible for me to continue my evening English Language classes in your academy. Actually, I am working in a hotel as a cashier. So I had lot of responsibilities related to my profession like made a balance sheet, on time send the amount in bank as well as to check any money is left with some one while, all these duties I am not be able to consume my time for the evening courses. I believe that gloaming assignments were very fruitful for me when I attend various meeting in my company and I had a potential to speak and clear my quries in front of my lodge members. However, I can't trust to any one that I divide my burden to some one. I hope you can realize my position and circumstances. Regards, Yours Sincerely,
Dear Madam,

I am writing to inform you that due to my full time job it's not possible for me to continue my evening English Language classes in your academy.

Actually, I am working in a hotel as a cashier.
So
I had lot of responsibilities related to my profession like made a balance sheet, on time
send
the amount in bank
as well
as to
check
any money is
left
with
some
one while, all these duties I am not be able to consume my time for the evening courses.

I believe that gloaming assignments were
very
fruitful for me when I attend various meeting in my
company
and I had a potential to speak and
clear
my quries in front of my lodge members.
However
, I can't trust to any one that I divide my burden to
some
one.

I hope you can realize my position and circumstances.

Regards,

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter ou have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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