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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Mr. Tahir, I am writing this letter to bring into your notice the gradual decline of the condition of the buses being driven across the city. The conditions have been worsening gradually and have risen to an extent where I am forced to switch my means of travel. I would like to highlight the irregularity in the timings of the bus which is worsening day by day. Also the cleaning and sanitization of the buses are not been followed as per schedule. I board the bus at New Town Stop at 9 am to go to Sweden University. I have been commuting by the bus for the past six months. However from the past two weeks, the bus reaches the stop after 9: 20 am due to which I am not able to attend my classes on time. I would suggest you to look into the matter at utmost priority and hold the person responsible for negligence. Yours Sincerely, Omer Zaman
Dear Mr.
Tahir
,

I am writing this letter to bring into your notice the gradual decline of the condition of the buses
being driven
across the city. The conditions have been worsening
gradually
and have risen to an extent where I
am forced
to switch my means of travel.

I would like to highlight the irregularity in the timings of the bus which is worsening day by day.
Also
the cleaning and sanitization of the buses are not
been followed
as per schedule.

I board the bus at New Town
Stop
at 9 am to go to Sweden University. I have been commuting by the bus for the past six months.
However
from the past two weeks, the bus reaches the
stop
after 9: 20 am due to which I am not able to attend my classes on time.

I would suggest you to look into the matter at utmost priority and hold the person responsible for negligence.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Omer
Zaman
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Letter
  American English
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161 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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