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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take dxGr
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter with reference to your your letter that i received yesterday regarding the noise from my house from 10 pm to 11 pm daily. I am now aware that you sleep by 10 o' clock. Let me explain you the reasons behind loud music during this hour of the day is mainly because we are a 5 member band who performs during the days in various locations and the entire crew gets free by 10 to practice. I sincerely apalogise for the disturbance created for an hour everyday. To avoid hampering your sleep, we have planned to to rehearse at each band member's house a day. While we gather at others house, it would be easier for you to peacefully sleep but we would have to aggange a jamming session atleast once a week here at my place. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Ankita Sahoo
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter with reference to
your your
letter that
i
received yesterday regarding the noise from my
house
from 10 pm to 11 pm daily. I am
now
aware that you sleep by 10
o' clock
.

Let
me
explain
you
the reasons behind loud music during this hour of the day is
mainly
because
we are a 5 member band who performs during the days in various locations and the entire crew
gets
free by 10 to practice.

I
sincerely
apalogise
for the disturbance created for an hour
everyday
.

To avoid hampering your sleep, we have planned
to to
rehearse at each band member's
house
a day. While we gather at others
house
, it would be easier for you to
peacefully
sleep
but
we would
have to
aggange
a jamming session
atleast
once a week here at my place.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully


Ankita
Sahoo
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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