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1.Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter – Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was – Invite him to visit your country – Tell him what you can do for him during his visit.

1. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter – Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was – Invite him to visit your country – Tell him what you can do for him during his visit. AyXn
Dear Geoff, I am writing to share my happiness that I experienced when I toured your country and I cannot stop thinking about the wonderful moments I had. I really had amazing time visiting all those beautiful places. Your hospitality was really impressive, besides the warmth of people in every town we stayed. Not only that, even the cleanliness maintained in every place. Since, I had a memorable time in your place, I would like to show my gratitude by inviting you to my country. I assure you that you wont be disappointed. As you would have heard, India is a country rich in diversity and I will plan an itinerary for you to have a rich experience. In regard to this, I can arrange your flight tickets and also book your stay. I will plan trip for a fortnight and we will travel within the country various mean of transport including, bikes, cars and flights. Waiting for your positive response. Yours affectionately, Riya
Dear Geoff,

I am writing to share my happiness that I experienced when I toured your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
and I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
thinking about the wonderful moments I had.

I
really
had amazing time visiting all those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
places. Your hospitality was
really
impressive,
besides
the warmth of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in every town we stayed. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
that, even the cleanliness maintained in every place.

Since, I had a memorable time in your place, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my gratitude by inviting you to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. I assure you that you
Please make sure you mean 'wont' (a habit), not "won't"/"won’t" (short for 'will not')?
wont
be disappointed
. As you would have heard, India is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
rich in diversity and I will plan an itinerary for you to have a rich experience.

In regard to this, I can arrange your flight tickets and
also
book your stay. I will plan trip for a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
fortnight and
we will travel within the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
various mean of transport including, bikes, cars and flights.

Waiting for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
affectionately
,

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Riya
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IELTS letter 1. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter – Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was – Invite him to visit your country – Tell him what you can do for him during his visit.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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