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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs ,describe your new job ,tell him/her your other news

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs, describe your new job, tell him/her your other news 7g5b
Dear Sepideh, I hope you are very well. I’m writing this letter to let you know about my current occpation and other wonderful news. To tell the truth, recently, I’ve changed my previous job. There are some reasons behind of this decision but the most important among them is the low income that was paid to me by my boss, despite so many responsibilities I had. Forthunately, after resigning from my old job, because of my valuable exprience, newly, I’ve employed as a sales manager by a well-known export-import company which is called Texofin. Although I’m very busy there, I’m earning a large amount of money. Surprisingly, I’ll get marrid in the next year! My beloved fiancé is a vet and he is so lovely. I’d be so cheerful if you could come to our wedding celebration that I’ll send you a invitation. Another thing I should say that according my marriage, I’ll moved to a spacious house which is located in a countryside of Toronto. I’m waiting to see you as soon as possible. Warm wishes, Saeedeh
Dear
Sepideh
,

I hope you are
very
well. I’m writing this letter to
let
you know about my
current
occpation
and other wonderful news.

To
tell
the truth, recently, I’ve
changed
my previous job. There are
some
reasons behind of this decision
but
the most
important
among them is the low income that
was paid
to me by my boss, despite
so
many
responsibilities I had.

Forthunately
, after resigning from my
old
job,
because
of my valuable
exprience
,
newly
, I’ve employed as a sales manager by a well-known export-import
company
which
is called
Texofin
. Although I’m
very
busy there, I’m earning a large amount of money.

Surprisingly
, I’ll
get
marrid
in the
next
year! My beloved fiancé is a
vet and
he is
so
lovely. I’d be
so
cheerful if you could
come
to our wedding celebration that I’ll
send
you
a
invitation. Another thing I should say that according my marriage, I’ll
moved
to a spacious
house
which
is located
in a countryside of Toronto.

I’m waiting to
see
you as
soon
as possible.

Warm wishes,

Saeedeh
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IELTS letter You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs, describe your new job, tell him/her your other news

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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