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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take KwVER
Hello Aziz, I am very sorry for the inconvenience that is caused due to the constant working machine in my house. my grandfather visited the house they told us to renovate the house according to Vastu shastra as it will give you the positive vibes and told us to do certain changes as like the staircase must be on the right side as you know in my house it's on the left-hand side, though I was also planning to fix the air conditioner as the summer is on the way. Due to the noise pollution, you won't be able to concentrate on your work as the pandemic raise the business faculty to work from home. it's heartfelt to say that I am disturbing you a lot as my work is going to take 3 weeks more and even I didn't expect. I will try my level best to turn off the machine work before 5 and pause it in the afternoon time to it will be helpful for you as w ell to cope up with the meeting or kindly give you preference time so that I can adjust according to you on certain time thanking you yours sincerely Avinash Tripathi
Hello Aziz,

I am
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sorry for the inconvenience that
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.
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my
grandfather visited the
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house
they
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told
us to renovate the
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house
according to
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Vastu
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shastra
as it will give you the
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positive
vibes and
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told
us to do certain
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changes
as like the staircase
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must
be on the right side as you know in my
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house
it's on the
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left
-hand side, though I was
also
planning to
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fix
the air conditioner as the summer is on the way.

Due to the noise pollution, you won't be able to concentrate on your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
as the pandemic raise the business faculty to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home.
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it
's heartfelt to say that I am disturbing you a lot as my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
is going to take 3 weeks more and even I didn't
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expect
.

I will try my level best to turn off the machine
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work
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before
5 and pause it in the afternoon time to it will be helpful for you as w

ell to cope up with the meeting or kindly give you preference time
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so
that I can adjust according to you on certain time

thanking you

yours
sincerely


Avinash
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Tripathi
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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