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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Wyqp0
Dear Fincher, Hope you are doing great. It’s been a long since I last met you. I was quite busy with my studies and a part-time job that I am doing at Beckison’s. It’s very wise of you to take some time before deciding whether to have a job or get admitted to a college. As this decision has a profound impact on your future, you should consider each option thoroughly. As you know I have started my University just after finishing my high school and consequently, I couldn’t get any job experience in my field which I often regret. I believe you should work for a while and after that, continue your education in a subject that you feel interested in. Choose the subject carefully as it would define your future career path. By getting a suitable job you will gain some valuable interpersonal skills such as delegating a task or working in a team. The job experience will further your decision-making capabilities as well as presentation skills. Moreover, it will open doors for better job opportunities in the future. I feel you should work at a tour service providing company. It makes sense as it would be easier to find a job in your city in this sector and it would let you travel extensively and meet new people. I hope my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you. Warm regards, Russell
Dear
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Fincher
,

Hope you are doing great. It’s been a long since I last met you. I was quite busy with my studies and a part-time
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job
that I am doing at
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Beckison
’s. It’s
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very
wise of you to take
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some
time
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before
deciding whether to have a
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job
or
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get
admitted to a college. As this decision has a profound impact on your future, you should consider each option
thoroughly
.

As you know I have
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started
my University
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just
after finishing my high school and
consequently
, I couldn’t
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get
any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
experience in my field which I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
regret. I believe you should work for a while and after that, continue your education in a subject that you feel interested in. Choose the subject
carefully
as it would define your future career path.

By getting a suitable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
you will gain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
valuable interpersonal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
such as delegating a task or working in a team. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
experience will
further
your decision-making capabilities
as well
as presentation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Moreover
, it will open doors for better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
opportunities in the future.

I feel you should work at a tour service providing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
sense as it would be easier to find a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
in your city in this sector and it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you travel
extensively
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

I hope my suggestion would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you decide what is best for you.

Warm regards,

Russell

IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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236 words
6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Check your writing for errors
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