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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter, explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter, explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development ljXJo
Dear Mr. Editor, I am John Smith, resident of 67, Parkinson Street, Manitoba. I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction regards of the new plan regards of the development of current airport. My home is exactly besides the airport and thus it creates lot of problems to us. Already there are twenty five flights in a day although local authority wants to develop it and make is use for more 30 flights. The surrounding area is quite louder and problematic especially in nights as it runs 24*7 that is all year all time. In addition to this, when flights take off from the runway it almost feel as an earthquake and it cause the problem during nights and constantly feel as something wrong happen. The primary reason for the disagreement for this development is that, the airport does not require any modification as it is rebuild and renovated last year. Therefore, it is better that not to waste public money into this. Moreover, the city is holding very few community as compared to other province thus, these much amount of flights are enough for us to travel. Hope you will convey our message to local authority. Yours truly, John Smith.
Dear Mr. Editor,

I am John Smith, resident of 67, Parkinson Street, Manitoba. I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction regards of the new plan regards of the development of
current
airport.

My home is exactly
besides
the airport and
thus
it creates
lot of
problems to us. Already there are
twenty five
flights
in a day although local authority wants to develop it and
make
is
use
for more 30
flights
. The surrounding area is quite louder and problematic
especially
in nights as it runs
24*7
that is
all year all time.
In addition
to this, when
flights
take off from the runway it almost
feel
as an earthquake and it
cause
the problem during nights and
constantly
feel as something
wrong
happen.

The primary reason for the disagreement for this development is that, the airport does not require any modification as it is rebuild and renovated last year.
Therefore
, it is better that not to waste public money into this.
Moreover
, the city is holding
very
few community as compared to other province
thus
, these much amount of
flights
are
enough
for us to travel.

Hope you will convey our message to local authority.

Yours
truly
,

John Smith.
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IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter, explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

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