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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to music concert. Please say where and when does the concert start? What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to music concert. Please say where and when does the concert start? What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it? 6xmJx
Dear Akansha, Hope this letter finds you best in your health and spirit. It will surely make you glad to hear about a concert of music for which I am expecting you to join me. The music concert is set out this Saturday night in an open air ground of our secondary school at sharp 9: 00 p. m. it will have some great singers and musicians including your favourite one as well. Although main concept of the concert is based on classical music and folk songs some Bollywood singers will also be there to make the concert more enticing for youth as well. The organizers are also willing to arrange a small lucky winner type event which will give an opportunity to perform with one of the celebrities over there and to win a cash prize. Being a talented flute player you would surely like to have such opportunity to show your skills. Your extreme interest in music and musical instruments will make this concert more amusing for you. More over we have not met from so long so the concert time will be a sweet excuse to spend some cheerful time together. We will recall some of our precious school days when we were having a lot of fun and pleasure during these types of events. Hoping for a delightful company and positive response from you. See you soon in the concert. With lots of love. Sefali
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Akansha
, Hope this letter finds you best in your health and spirit. It will
surely
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make
you glad to hear about a
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concert
of
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music
for which I am expecting you to
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join
me. The
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music
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concert
is set
out this Saturday night in an open air ground of our secondary school at sharp 9: 00 p. m. it will have
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some
great singers and musicians including your
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favourite
one
as well
. Although main concept of the
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concert
is based
on classical
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music
and folk songs
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some
Bollywood singers will
also
be there to
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make
the
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concert
more enticing for youth
as well
. The organizers are
also
willing to arrange a
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small
lucky winner type
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event
which will give an opportunity to perform with one of the celebrities over there and to win a cash prize. Being a talented flute player you would
surely
like to have such opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
your
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skills
. Your extreme interest in
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music
and musical instruments will
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make
this
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concert
more amusing for you. More over we have not met from
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so
long
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so
the
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concert
time will be a sweet excuse to spend
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some
cheerful time together. We will recall
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some
of our precious school days when we were having
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a lot of
fun and pleasure during these types of
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events
. Hoping for a delightful
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company
and
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positive
response from you.
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See
you
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soon
in the concert.

With lots of
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love
.
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Sefali
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to music concert. Please say where and when does the concert start? What type of music will be played there? Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

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238 words
5.5
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